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What is the main idea of the article?

After reading the article again and reflecting it using the SQ3R method, I have learned that the main idea behind the article "Why facts don't change our minds" is that the author wants to illustrate how human beings, first impressions are the last. This shows that people are limited to reasoning (Kolbert, 2017). After impressions are formed, there are remarkably perseverant even when they are demonstrably illogical. This means that people tend to embrace that support their beliefs and reject contradictory information due to "confirmation bias." This I had not captured during the initial reading. Similarly, through deep reading and research, I have discovered that people the author argues that it is very difficult to change a person's minds.

People have to consider their status and appearance, and they want to save their facts and avoid looking stupid. When for instance, a person is confronted with a set of uncomfortable facts, the person will double down on their current stand instead o publicly admitting that they are wrong. The second reading has helped me read more deliberately and actively, thus getting more information and better understanding it.

Who is the audience being addressed?

This article is addressed to the general audience going by the title and the subtitle of the article and where the author published her article. The article is generally focusing on the minds of human beings and how it is difficult changing a person from their initial perspective even after giving them facts (Kolbert, 2017). There is no specific group of people that this article seems to e directed to since it generalizes all human beings' concepts, showing that people believe that they know way more than they do.

What might be an alternative way to explain Kolbert’s conclusions?

An alternative way of concluding this article would have been, combining the three studies to illustrate how providing people with accurate information does not seem to help, and they end up discounting it. It is clear that the reason people argue is not to learn, but rather, they argue to win a conversation. People are very much interested in winning conversations than getting real ideas and acts. The author would have demonstrated this by combing the three types of research that she has utilized in her article. Every person perceives things differently; it is, however, important facing everything with an open mind. When building an argument, one must establish credibility by showing that one understands what they are talking about by presenting both sides of an argument accurately.

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Kolbert, E. (2017). Why facts don’t change our minds. The New Yorker27(2017), 47. Retrieved from: http://faculty.bennington.edu/~sherman/alternative%20facts/Why%20Facts%20Don%E2%80%99t%20Change%20Our%20Minds%20-%20The%20New%20Yorker.pdf

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English 1201

Informal Writing #2 – Reflecting on Informal Writing #1

Read Elizabeth Kolbert’s essay, “Why Facts Don’t Change Our Minds,” (

https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2017/02/27/why-facts-dont-change-our-minds) again, practicing what you have learned from our discussions this week and the resources in eLearn on critical thinking and reading.

Begin this second reading by previewing the essay and thinking about the title and sub-title. Read the one sentence summary under the title. This essay was originally published for The New Yorker. Look around its website (https://www.newyorker.com/) and see what you can learn about who reads this publication. Are there clues about readers’ demographics, for example? What do these clues tell you?

Look at the illustration used in the article and try to figure out what information it conveys.

Use the GIST method, the SQ3R method of reading, and/or some of the other strategies we’ve discussed in class. Remember to take notes, look up concepts that are not familiar to you, and ask questions of the text in the margins as you read.

Then answer the questions from Informal Writing #1 again.

1. What is the main idea or point of the article?

2. Who is the audience that Kolbert is addressing?

3. What might be an alternative way to explain her conclusions?

Finally (and this is the part you will turn in), reflect on the above process and write about what you learned from not just reading this essay the second time, but from the research, deep reading, and annotations that you were asked to do above.

Be specific. Really think deeply about and reflect on this much harder, more time-consuming, more robust way of reading. Don’t just skim the surface and talk about the article or reading in sweeping generalities – “I learned that there’s so much more to this article,” or, “This really helped me to understand,” or “This is a lot of work but so worth it!” Instead, discuss how specific research challenged, complimented, and/or complicated your original ideas? Give examples.

When you have completed this short 1-2-page reflection assignment, please submit it in the appropriate Dropbox in eLearn. While this assignment is informal and you do not have to worry about MLA formatting, please make sure you proofread and edit your writing carefully!

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Why Facts Don’t Change Our Mind

By  Elizabeth Kolbert for The New Yorker

February 20, 2017

New discoveries about the human mind show the limitations of reason.

The vaunted human capacity for reason may have more to do with winning arguments than with thinking straight.

February 20, 2017

The vaunted human capacity for reason may have more to do with winning arguments than with thinking straight. Illustration by Gérard DuBois

In 1975, researchers at Stanford invited a group of undergraduates to take part in a study about suicide. They were presented with pairs of suicide notes. In each pair, one note had been composed by a random individual, the other by a person who had subsequently taken his own life. The students were then asked to distinguish between the genuine notes and the fake ones.

Some students discovered that they had a genius for the task. Out of twenty-five pairs of notes, they correctly identified the real one twenty-four times. Others discovered that they were hopeless. They identified the real note in only ten instances.

As is often the case with psychological studies, the whole setup was a put-on. Though half the notes were indeed genuine—they’d been obtained from the Los Angeles County coroner’s office—the scores were fictitious. The students who’d been told they were almost always right were, on average, no more discerning than those who had been told they were mostly wrong.

In the second phase of the study, the deception was revealed. The students were told that the real point of the experiment was to gauge their responses to thinking they were right or wrong. (This, it turned out, was also a deception.) Finally, the students were asked to estimate how many suicide notes they had actually categorized correctly, and how many they thought an average student would get right. At this point, something curious happened. The students in the high-score group said that they thought they had, in fact, done quite well—significantly better than the average student—even though, as they’d just been told, they had zero grounds for believing this. Conversely, those who’d been assigned to the low-score group said that they thought they had done significantly worse than the average student—a conclusion that was equally unfounded.

“Once formed,” the researchers observed dryly, “impressions are remarkably perseverant.”

A few years later, a new set of Stanford students was recruited for a related study. The students were handed packets of information about a pair of firefighters, Frank K. and George H. Frank’s bio noted that, among other things, he had a baby daughter and he liked to scuba dive. George had a small son and played golf. The packets also included the men’s responses on what the researchers called the Risky-Conservative Choice Test. According to one version of the packet, Frank was a successful firefighter who, on the test, almost always went with the safest option. In the other version, Frank also chose the safest option, but he was a lousy firefighter who’d been put “on report” by his supervisors several times. Once again, midway through the study, the students were informed that they’d been misled, and that the information they’d received was entirely fictitious. The students were then asked to describe their own beliefs. What sort of attitude toward risk did they think a successful firefighter would have? The students who’d received the first packet thought that he would avoid it. The students in the second group thought he’d embrace it.

Even after the evidence “for their beliefs has been totally refuted, people fail to make appropriate revisions in those beliefs,” the researchers noted. In this case, the failure was “particularly impressive,” since two data points would never have been enough information to generalize from.

The Stanford studies became famous. Coming from a group of academics in the nineteen-seventies, the contention that people can’t think straight was shocking. It isn’t any longer. Thousands of subsequent experiments have confirmed (and elaborated on) this finding. As everyone who’s followed the research—or even occasionally picked up a copy of Psychology Today—knows, any graduate student with a clipboard can demonstrate that reasonable-seeming people are often totally irrational. Rarely has this insight seemed more relevant than it does right now. Still, an essential puzzle remains: How did we come to be this way?

In a new book, “The Enigma of Reason” (Harvard), the cognitive scientists Hugo Mercier and Dan Sperber take a stab at answering this question. Mercier, who works at a French research institute in Lyon, and Sperber, now based at the Central European University, in Budapest, point out that reason is an evolved trait, like bipedalism or three-color vision. It emerged on the savannas of Africa and has to be understood in that context.

Stripped of a lot of what might be called cognitive-science-ese, Mercier and Sperber’s argument runs, more or less, as follows: Humans’ biggest advantage over other species is our ability to coöperate. Coöperation is difficult to establish and almost as difficult to sustain. For any individual, freeloading is always the best course of action. Reason developed not to enable us to solve abstract, logical problems or even to help us draw conclusions from unfamiliar data; rather, it developed to resolve the problems posed by living in collaborative groups.

“Reason is an adaptation to the hypersocial niche humans have evolved for themselves,” Mercier and Sperber write. Habits of mind that seem weird or goofy or just plain dumb from an “intellectualist” point of view prove shrewd when seen from a social “interactionist” perspective.

Consider what’s become known as “confirmation bias,” the tendency people have to embrace information that supports their beliefs and reject information that contradicts them. Of the many forms of faulty thinking that have been identified, confirmation bias is among the best catalogued; it’s the subject of entire textbooks’ worth of experiments. One of the most famous of these was conducted, again, at Stanford. For this experiment, researchers rounded up a group of students who had opposing opinions about capital punishment. Half the students were in favor of it and thought that it deterred crime; the other half were against it and thought that it had no effect on crime.

The students were asked to respond to two studies. One provided data in support of the deterrence argument, and the other provided data that called it into question. Both studies—you guessed it—were made up, and had been designed to present what were, objectively speaking, equally compelling statistics. The students who had originally supported capital punishment rated the pro-deterrence data highly credible and the anti-deterrence data unconvincing; the students who’d originally opposed capital punishment did the reverse. At the end of the experiment, the students were asked once again about their views. Those who’d started out pro-capital punishment were now even more in favor of it; those who’d opposed it were even more hostile.

If reason is designed to generate sound judgments, then it’s hard to conceive of a more serious design flaw than confirmation bias. Imagine, Mercier and Sperber suggest, a mouse that thinks the way we do. Such a mouse, “bent on confirming its belief that there are no cats around,” would soon be dinner. To the extent that confirmation bias leads people to dismiss evidence of new or underappreciated threats—the human equivalent of the cat around the corner—it’s a trait that should have been selected against. The fact that both we and it survive, Mercier and Sperber argue, proves that it must have some adaptive function, and that function, they maintain, is related to our “hypersociability.”

Mercier and Sperber prefer the term “myside bias.” Humans, they point out, aren’t randomly credulous. Presented with someone else’s argument, we’re quite adept at spotting the weaknesses. Almost invariably, the positions we’re blind about are our own.

A recent experiment performed by Mercier and some European colleagues neatly demonstrates this asymmetry. Participants were asked to answer a series of simple reasoning problems. They were then asked to explain their responses, and were given a chance to modify them if they identified mistakes. The majority were satisfied with their original choices; fewer than fifteen per cent changed their minds in step two.

In step three, participants were shown one of the same problems, along with their answer and the answer of another participant, who’d come to a different conclusion. Once again, they were given the chance to change their responses. But a trick had been played: the answers presented to them as someone else’s were actually their own, and vice versa. About half the participants realized what was going on. Among the other half, suddenly people became a lot more critical. Nearly sixty per cent now rejected the responses that they’d earlier been satisfied with.

This lopsidedness, according to Mercier and Sperber, reflects the task that reason evolved to perform, which is to prevent us from getting screwed by the other members of our group. Living in small bands of hunter-gatherers, our ancestors were primarily concerned with their social standing, and with making sure that they weren’t the ones risking their lives on the hunt while others loafed around in the cave. There was little advantage in reasoning clearly, while much was to be gained from winning arguments.

Among the many, many issues our forebears didn’t worry about were the deterrent effects of capital punishment and the ideal attributes of a firefighter. Nor did they have to contend with fabricated studies, or fake news, or Twitter. It’s no wonder, then, that today reason often seems to fail us. As Mercier and Sperber write, “This is one of many cases in which the environment changed too quickly for natural selection to catch up.”

Steven Sloman, a professor at Brown, and Philip Fernbach, a professor at the University of Colorado, are also cognitive scientists. They, too, believe sociability is the key to how the human mind functions or, perhaps more pertinently, malfunctions. They begin their book, “The Knowledge Illusion: Why We Never Think Alone” (Riverhead), with a look at toilets.

Virtually everyone in the United States, and indeed throughout the developed world, is familiar with toilets. A typical flush toilet has a ceramic bowl filled with water. When the handle is depressed, or the button pushed, the water—and everything that’s been deposited in it—gets sucked into a pipe and from there into the sewage system. But how does this actually happen?

In a study conducted at Yale, graduate students were asked to rate their understanding of everyday devices, including toilets, zippers, and cylinder locks. They were then asked to write detailed, step-by-step explanations of how the devices work, and to rate their understanding again. Apparently, the effort revealed to the students their own ignorance, because their self-assessments dropped. (Toilets, it turns out, are more complicated than they appear.)

Sloman and Fernbach see this effect, which they call the “illusion of explanatory depth,” just about everywhere. People believe that they know way more than they actually do. What allows us to persist in this belief is other people. In the case of my toilet, someone else designed it so that I can operate it easily. This is something humans are very good at. We’ve been relying on one another’s expertise ever since we figured out how to hunt together, which was probably a key development in our evolutionary history. So well do we collaborate, Sloman and Fernbach argue, that we can hardly tell where our own understanding ends and others’ begins.

“One implication of the naturalness with which we divide cognitive labor,” they write, is that there’s “no sharp boundary between one person’s ideas and knowledge” and “those of other members” of the group.

This borderlessness, or, if you prefer, confusion, is also crucial to what we consider progress. As people invented new tools for new ways of living, they simultaneously created new realms of ignorance; if everyone had insisted on, say, mastering the principles of metalworking before picking up a knife, the Bronze Age wouldn’t have amounted to much. When it comes to new technologies, incomplete understanding is empowering.

Where it gets us into trouble, according to Sloman and Fernbach, is in the political domain. It’s one thing for me to flush a toilet without knowing how it operates, and another for me to favor (or oppose) an immigration ban without knowing what I’m talking about. Sloman and Fernbach cite a survey conducted in 2014, not long after Russia annexed the Ukrainian territory of Crimea. Respondents were asked how they thought the U.S. should react, and also whether they could identify Ukraine on a map. The farther off base they were about the geography, the more likely they were to favor military intervention. (Respondents were so unsure of Ukraine’s location that the median guess was wrong by eighteen hundred miles, roughly the distance from Kiev to Madrid.)

Surveys on many other issues have yielded similarly dismaying results. “As a rule, strong feelings about issues do not emerge from deep understanding,” Sloman and Fernbach write. And here our dependence on other minds reinforces the problem. If your position on, say, the Affordable Care Act is baseless and I rely on it, then my opinion is also baseless. When I talk to Tom and he decides he agrees with me, his opinion is also baseless, but now that the three of us concur we feel that much more smug about our views. If we all now dismiss as unconvincing any information that contradicts our opinion, you get, well, the Trump Administration.

“This is how a community of knowledge can become dangerous,” Sloman and Fernbach observe. The two have performed their own version of the toilet experiment, substituting public policy for household gadgets. In a study conducted in 2012, they asked people for their stance on questions like: Should there be a single-payer health-care system? Or merit-based pay for teachers? Participants were asked to rate their positions depending on how strongly they agreed or disagreed with the proposals. Next, they were instructed to explain, in as much detail as they could, the impacts of implementing each one. Most people at this point ran into trouble. Asked once again to rate their views, they ratcheted down the intensity, so that they either agreed or disagreed less vehemently.

Sloman and Fernbach see in this result a little candle for a dark world. If we—or our friends or the pundits on CNN—spent less time pontificating and more trying to work through the implications of policy proposals, we’d realize how clueless we are and moderate our views. This, they write, “may be the only form of thinking that will shatter the illusion of explanatory depth and change people’s attitudes.”

One way to look at science is as a system that corrects for people’s natural inclinations. In a well-run laboratory, there’s no room for myside bias; the results have to be reproducible in other laboratories, by researchers who have no motive to confirm them. And this, it could be argued, is why the system has proved so successful. At any given moment, a field may be dominated by squabbles, but, in the end, the methodology prevails. Science moves forward, even as we remain stuck in place.

In “Denying to the Grave: Why We Ignore the Facts That Will Save Us” (Oxford), Jack Gorman, a psychiatrist, and his daughter, Sara Gorman, a public-health specialist, probe the gap between what science tells us and what we tell ourselves. Their concern is with those persistent beliefs which are not just demonstrably false but also potentially deadly, like the conviction that vaccines are hazardous. Of course, what’s hazardous is not being vaccinated; that’s why vaccines were created in the first place. “Immunization is one of the triumphs of modern medicine,” the Gormans note. But no matter how many scientific studies conclude that vaccines are safe, and that there’s no link between immunizations and autism, anti-vaxxers remain unmoved. (They can now count on their side—sort of—Donald Trump, who has said that, although he and his wife had their son, Barron, vaccinated, they refused to do so on the timetable recommended by pediatricians.)

The Gormans, too, argue that ways of thinking that now seem self-destructive must at some point have been adaptive. And they, too, dedicate many pages to confirmation bias, which, they claim, has a physiological component. They cite research suggesting that people experience genuine pleasure—a rush of dopamine—when processing information that supports their beliefs. “It feels good to ‘stick to our guns’ even if we are wrong,” they observe.

The Gormans don’t just want to catalogue the ways we go wrong; they want to correct for them. There must be some way, they maintain, to convince people that vaccines are good for kids, and handguns are dangerous. (Another widespread but statistically insupportable belief they’d like to discredit is that owning a gun makes you safer.) But here they encounter the very problems they have enumerated. Providing people with accurate information doesn’t seem to help; they simply discount it. Appealing to their emotions may work better but doing so is obviously antithetical to the goal of promoting sound science. “The challenge that remains,” they write toward the end of their book, “is to figure out how to address the tendencies that lead to false scientific belief.”

“The Enigma of Reason,” “The Knowledge Illusion,” and “Denying to the Grave” were all written before the November election. And yet they anticipate Kellyanne Conway and the rise of “alternative facts.” These days, it can feel as if the entire country has been given over to a vast psychological experiment being run either by no one or by Steve Bannon. Rational agents would be able to think their way to a solution. But, on this matter, the literature is not reassuring. ♦

Published in the print edition of the February 27, 2017, issue, with the headline “That’s What You Think.”

Elizabeth Kolbert  has been a staff writer at The New Yorker since 1999. She is the author of “ The Sixth Extinction: An Unnatural History ,” which won the Pulitzer Prize for nonfiction in 2015.

Why Facts Don’t Change Our Mind

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The New Yorker

February 20, 2017

New discoveries about the human mind show the limitations of reason.

February 20, 2017

The vaunted human capacity for reason may have more to do with winning arguments than with

thinking straight.

Illustration by Gérard DuBois

Why Facts Don’t Change Our Mind

By Elizabeth Kolbert for The New Yorker

February 20, 2017

New discoveries about the human mind show the limitations of reason.

February 20, 2017

The vaunted human capacity for reason may have more to do with winning arguments than with

thinking straight. Illustration by Gérard DuBois

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English 1201

Essay #1 – Summary and Critical Response

The Purpose of this Writing Assignment

The Critical Response assignment is designed to give you an opportunity to:

· Practice thinking critically:

When you think critically, you do not simply accept ideas at face value. Instead, you question these ideas, analyzing them to understand them better. You also challenge their underlying assumptions and form your own judgments about them.

· Practice reading critically:

Reading critically does not mean arguing with every idea you encounter. What it does mean is commenting, questioning, and judging. As a critical reader, you do not simply accept that what you are reading is true or reasonable. Instead, you assess the accuracy of the facts in the text(s) you are reading, and you consider whether opinions are convincingly supported by evidence. You try to judge the appropriateness and reliability of the text(s), and you evaluate the scope and depth of the evidence and the relevance of that evidence to the topic. You also consider opposing arguments carefully, measuring them against the arguments developed by the writer. Finally, you watch out for possible bias in the text(s) you are reading – and you work hard to keep your own biases in check.

· Practice writing critically:

Before you can respond in writing to an argument, you need to be sure that you understand what the writer means to get across and that you have a sense of how the ideas are arranged – and why. You also need to consider how convincingly the writer conveys his or her position.

Begin by reading the argument carefully, annotating it and thinking about it as we’ve discussed in class. From here you should have a good idea about what the writer wants to communicate to readers as well as how successfully the argument makes its point.

Begin writing down your ideas and own responses, considering the evidence presented as you began to make your own reasoned conclusions. Keep in mind that the most common features of critical writing are:

· a clear and confident refusal to accept the conclusions of other writers without evaluating the arguments and evidence that they provide

· a balanced presentation of reasons why the conclusions of other writers may be accepted or may need to be treated with caution

· a clear presentation of your own evidence and argument, leading to your conclusion; and

· a recognition of the limitations in your own evidence, argument, and conclusion.

The Writing Task

In an approximately 3-5 – page Summary and Critical Response, summarize and analyze the ideas and arguments presented by just one of the essays that I have included in our eLearn shell. Then, express your personal reactions.

Begin by identifying the source and its author; then write a clear, concise summary of the writer’s position. Next, analyze the argument’s supporting points one by one, considering the strength of the evidence that is presented. Also, consider whether the writer addresses all significant opposing arguments and whether those arguments are refuted convincingly. Quote, paraphrase, and summarize the writer’s key points as you go along, being careful to do so accurately so that you do not misrepresent the writer’s ideas or distort them by using them out of context.

Identify arguments you find unconvincing, poorly supported, or irrelevant, or those arguments that you find well-supported, compelling, and effective. At the end of your response, sum up your assessment of the argument in a strong concluding statement that engages your reader one last time and keeps him/her thinking about your response for years to come. It could happen!

Include a final Works Cited page. Because this is a single-source essay, your Works Cited will include only the citation in MLA format for the essay you chose to analyze.

Formatting Instructions

· Final drafts must be typed in 12-point Times New Roman or Calibri font. The default setting in Microsoft Word is 11-point Calibri, so remember that you will always have to go in and change the font size when you begin to write something new.

· Make sure your essay double-spaced with one inch margins. The default margin setting is already at one inch. However, you must change the spacing above and below the line. Look again at the formatting of the student sample, or ask me if you have any questions. This is the first paper of the semester, so there are NO dumb questions, especially about formatting!

· Staple your final draft in the upper left-hand corner.

· Use only plain white paper.

· There is no separate title page, so in the upper left-hand corner of page one, you will type your name, my name (Dair Arnold), course number and section (ENG 1201.113) and the date (this is the date that you actually turn in the paper...so, if you turn the paper in late, or if you submit a revision of the paper later in the term, the date would reflect that new day).

· Use MLA format for citing sources. This applies to in-text parenthetical documentation and to Works Cited pages.

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Almutairi

Almutairi

CRITICAL RESPONSE

Nouf Almutairi

ENG 1201.113

Sep 15,2020

COLLEGE FOOTBALL’S GREAT UNRAVELING CRITICAL RESPONSE

According to the article "College Football's Great Unraveling," the author believes that the current pandemic has unraveled many college football’s flaws. She says that way before the coming of the coronavirus pandemic; college football has been wavering for a very long time. When the coronavirus hit the United States, the Big 10, a conference that comprises of the Midwest's major football, became the first one to fall by canceling its fall season, followed by the Pac-12, which represents significant programs on the West Coast. 

She says that despite these two conferences, The Big 10 and Pac-12 conferences canceling their football, the other three conferences continued with their football uninterrupted. Despite the two conferences giving valid reasons why they called off the game schedules, the two, just like the other three conferences, have the same concerns but handle the matter differently. The author continues to point at various flaws that are in college football. 

To start with, the author believes that top college football's decentralized chaos is one o the biggest issues. Hundreds of teams are organized in the same way as Power 5, while others do not align with these conferences. This means that no law guides college football, giving it a peculiar regionalism. She continues to state that some states do not even notice college football. 

According to the author, this decentralization has given the leaders of college football in maintaining a very dangerous status quo. There are many students who play for free in these games while their schools collect a lot of money at their expense. The schools and these conferences do not look at the safety and future health of these players, thus putting them in very big danger. " The most serious ramifications for college players relate to health and safety, a situation only exacerbated during the pandemic. They are not governed by occupational health and safety provisions, nor do they have employer-provided health insurance." (Mull, 2020)

On the other hand, the students continue playing hard with the hope of joining the national football league, but this does not materialize at the end, not the day. The leaders have literary done no effort t change the current system citing that NCAA adheres to the amateurism principle. This is the principle where the schools are prohibited from paying these players. These are some of the regulations that the author believes are hindering college football from progressing. 

Similarly, NCAA's principle of amateurism is also putting the students at a very big risk. For instance, according to t the author, with the opening of schools, the players are at a very great risk of contracting the coronavirus disease (Hart, 2019 pg 2). However, NCAA bars schools from giving the players any special treatment, such as restricting their access to bars and parties and special clearance to d online classes. They are therefore not given any kind of protection. The students also do not have any formal way of lobbying for fair treatments since they are considered amateurs. The status of the armature is a threat to the safety f the players and the viability of the college football. 

I agree with the author that the cancellation of college football is not the biggest issue. The biggest issue is that there is a big problem that needs to be discussed soberly about amateurism and greed in college football, making the games go crumbling. "The NCAA's role in modern football is primarily to regulate what athletes can do and receive while enrolled in school. It sets limits on the frequency and conditions of practice, and restricts improper benefits, including paychecks and cash bonuses." (Mull, 2020) Amateurism in college football is a very big issue. As the college sports continue growing, money becomes a byproduct of increased popularity. This means that the students become more like employees than students. 

The players' hard work and commitment benefit the schools and the many selfish leaders who plunder the resources. 

There is a dire need to ensure that the players' well being is taken care of, which includes taking good care of the players. Changes must be made to ensure that their full costs are taken care of. The players are not given an opportunity, and they do not have any role to play in making decisions regarding how the football should carry on. This is only left to the leaders who make important decisions citing NCAA as the guiding principle. The players have continued working hard, but the greedy football leaders reap their efforts. According to the author, "schools use  myriad accounting tricks  to make the legal argument that their athletic departments don't have much money on hand at all—among them, pouring the profits into facilities upgrades like  weight-room DJ booths  and  indoor waterfalls  in locker rooms." (Mull, 2020)

In conclusion, therefore, it is important the players also reap from their hard work. This can e doe y giving them a token of appreciation, which may e inform of giving them fair wagers just like the other employees in the school and providing them with expanded health benefits. This can only happen if the players are no longer seen as armatures. Therefore, this means that the NCAA armature principle is doing more harm than good to college football.

Work cited

Hart, Steven. "Amateurism, Player Compensation, and College Sports an Analysis of the Perceived Effects of a Free Market Model on the National Collegiate Athletic Association and Three Stakeholders of Division I Athletics." (2019). Retrieved from: https://diginole.lib.fsu.edu/islandora/object/fsu%3A722535/

Mull, A. College Football’s Great Unraveling: The pandemic is bringing the sport face-to-face with its deepest flaws. The Atlantic, 2020 retrieved from: https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2020/08/college-football-falling-apart/615277/?utm_source=atl&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=share

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English 1201

Essay #1 – Summary and Critical Response

The Purpose of this Writing Assignment

The Critical Response assignment is designed to give you an opportunity to:

· Practice thinking critically:

When you think critically, you do not simply accept ideas at face value. Instead, you question these ideas, analyzing them to understand them better. You also challenge their underlying assumptions and form your own judgments about them.

· Practice reading critically:

Reading critically does not mean arguing with every idea you encounter. What it does mean is commenting, questioning, and judging. As a critical reader, you do not simply accept that what you are reading is true or reasonable. Instead, you assess the accuracy of the facts in the text(s) you are reading, and you consider whether opinions are convincingly supported by evidence. You try to judge the appropriateness and reliability of the text(s), and you evaluate the scope and depth of the evidence and the relevance of that evidence to the topic. You also consider opposing arguments carefully, measuring them against the arguments developed by the writer. Finally, you watch out for possible bias in the text(s) you are reading – and you work hard to keep your own biases in check.

· Practice writing critically:

Before you can respond in writing to an argument, you need to be sure that you understand what the writer means to get across and that you have a sense of how the ideas are arranged – and why. You also need to consider how convincingly the writer conveys his or her position.

Begin by reading the argument carefully, annotating it and thinking about it as we’ve discussed in class. From here you should have a good idea about what the writer wants to communicate to readers as well as how successfully the argument makes its point.

Begin writing down your ideas and own responses, considering the evidence presented as you began to make your own reasoned conclusions. Keep in mind that the most common features of critical writing are:

· a clear and confident refusal to accept the conclusions of other writers without evaluating the arguments and evidence that they provide

· a balanced presentation of reasons why the conclusions of other writers may be accepted or may need to be treated with caution

· a clear presentation of your own evidence and argument, leading to your conclusion; and

· a recognition of the limitations in your own evidence, argument, and conclusion.

The Writing Task

In an approximately 3-5 – page Summary and Critical Response, summarize and analyze the ideas and arguments presented by just one of the essays that I have included in our eLearn shell. Then, express your personal reactions.

Begin by identifying the source and its author; then write a clear, concise summary of the writer’s position. Next, analyze the argument’s supporting points one by one, considering the strength of the evidence that is presented. Also, consider whether the writer addresses all significant opposing arguments and whether those arguments are refuted convincingly. Quote, paraphrase, and summarize the writer’s key points as you go along, being careful to do so accurately so that you do not misrepresent the writer’s ideas or distort them by using them out of context.

Identify arguments you find unconvincing, poorly supported, or irrelevant, or those arguments that you find well-supported, compelling, and effective. At the end of your response, sum up your assessment of the argument in a strong concluding statement that engages your reader one last time and keeps him/her thinking about your response for years to come. It could happen!

Include a final Works Cited page. Because this is a single-source essay, your Works Cited will include only the citation in MLA format for the essay you chose to analyze.

Formatting Instructions

· Final drafts must be typed in 12-point Times New Roman or Calibri font. The default setting in Microsoft Word is 11-point Calibri, so remember that you will always have to go in and change the font size when you begin to write something new.

· Make sure your essay double-spaced with one inch margins. The default margin setting is already at one inch. However, you must change the spacing above and below the line. Look again at the formatting of the student sample, or ask me if you have any questions. This is the first paper of the semester, so there are NO dumb questions, especially about formatting!

· Staple your final draft in the upper left-hand corner.

· Use only plain white paper.

· There is no separate title page, so in the upper left-hand corner of page one, you will type your name, my name (Dair Arnold), course number and section (ENG 1201.113) and the date (this is the date that you actually turn in the paper...so, if you turn the paper in late, or if you submit a revision of the paper later in the term, the date would reflect that new day).

· Use MLA format for citing sources. This applies to in-text parenthetical documentation and to Works Cited pages.

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“We must take sides. Neutrality helps the oppressors, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented”.

Discuss how these words resonate with you.

I agree with this quote by Elie. There are many elements in his story the night that corresponds to this particular quote and the whole idea of silence and complicity. This quote is illustrating the actions that happened during the holocaust but the people in the concentration camp did nothing but just watched and said nothing. They thought that by standing against these actions, they would be hurt. By keeping silent, they encouraged the Nazis to get more strength and reach the magnitude of killing six million Jews (Wiesel, 1986). The victims’ silence, as well as their lack of resistance to the threats of the Nazis, is one way that can be seen how neutrality and silence can greatly help the tormentors who were the Nazis and never the victim who in this case were the Jews. In the concentration camps, the Jews outnumbered the Nazi soldiers. If they had not opted to keep silent and revolted, even though there were people who could have died in their attempt, a lot of people could still have escaped. With their silence, many people died in the concentration camps with nothing to do.

Describe their significance in light of our current social, political, and cultural moment.

The intentions of this speech were ensuring that the events of the holocaust were not echoed in the future. This meant that the speech intended to ensure that there would be no other person that would be humiliated and tormented like the holocaust victims. More than three decades later, the words of Wiesel continues ringing with embarrassing relevance as we are jerked out of our generational hubris and we are forced to face the realities of torture, racism as well many other injustices that are still prevalent in our societies. We have failed Wiesel’s vision. Wiesel reminded us that it starts with one voice that refuses to be silenced. People should not keep silent in situations that they are required to speak up. This will help those people who will not be able to speak out for themselves.

References

Wiesel, E. (1986). Nobel Prize acceptance speech. Oslo, Norway, Dec10.

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Elizabeth Kolbert why facts don’t change our minds

What is the main idea of the article?

This article "Why facts don’t change our minds " by Elizabeth Kolbert was aimed at illustrating how human reasoning capacity and judgments are informed by sociability, confirmation biases, and my-side instead of basing on the actual underlying facts. The author believes that the thinking of human beings is deeply flawed and prone to predictable biases. Unlike programmed robots, human beings tend to be illogical creatures where they attach their beliefs as well as their emotions to their reasoning which normally distorts the judgments human beings make. The author, therefore, believes that even when presented with logical factual explanations, people will still not change their minds (Kolbert, 2017). This is simply because, when for instance people hear certain information, people will pick always pick side thus reinforcing their views. In this case, therefore, even when people are presented with facts, the opinions that they have already been determined and that view might even are held very strongly to fight the new information.

Who is the audience being addressed?

I think this article is addressed to the general audience explaining how the opinions o human beings are formed and held. The article focuses on how human beings tend to think, and concludes that our ability for reasoning as human beings is subject to a staggering number of biases.

What might be an alternative way to explain Kolbert’s conclusions?

The explanations of the author regarding the three studies that she has combined in her article and their outcomes were supper. However, the author could have tried to connect these points in her political conclusion. Lack of doing this has made it very difficult to distinguish what is her main point. Nonetheless, the author’s attempt of appealing the audience’s emotions has weakened her argument and credibility as she concludes.

References

Kolbert, E. (2017). Why facts don’t change our minds. The New Yorker27(2017), 47. Retrieved from: http://faculty.bennington.edu/~sherman/alternative%20facts/Why%20Facts%20Don%E2%80%99t%20Change%20Our%20Minds%20-%20The%20New%20Yorker.pdf

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English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions for the News Evaluation Essay

Essay Writer's Name: Jessenia Gosin

Essay's Title: Jessenia's Rough Draft

Peer Reviewer's Name:

 

1. Does the writer effectively make his/her thesis clear to readers? In other words, is it clear what the writer's argument is about the coverage that he/she will be discussing and analyzing?

In the article, the author created a comprehensive thesis statement stating why the article is written; the author also stated the title of the article that is being written on, the media house that is covering the news, and what is being written on. In this case, the article's title is the effects of coronavirus on the minorities, which were covered by CNN.

2. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might narrow his/her focus on improving the overall essay?

In the essay, the author clearly stated the points that are going to be discussed in brief. The thesis was expanded or illustrate the various categories of individuals that are termed as the minority in the context. However, the introduction is not targeting to catch the reader's attention, like stating why the topic is of concern. The thesis was also precise and to the point on the media coverage is focused on and the title. 

3. Has the writer completed a thorough and fair study of a variety of news sources?

In the article, the author did not include a thorough analysis of the various news sources. The main focus was on how CNN was using Instagram and Twitter to pass their information. It would be better to look at this media as independent of CNN.

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

The author provided some specific textual evidence of the news where the information was obtained by stating the resources that were provided by CNN n the news. However, it would be more appropriate if the author provided the links to the textual information. 

5. Does the writer refer to specific news coverage by listing the source clearly and precisely? This includes the name of the network, social media platform, or publication, the day and time of the news story if appropriate, and the author(s) of the article if appropriate? What needs more clarification or explanation?

The author provided information on the specific case coverage on the news, which includes the news title, the media covering the news. A brief description (CNN has a video titled: "Son: 3 hospitals denied my dad before he died of Covid-19".) however, there is no mention of the person anchoring the news. The story is relevant to the topic under discussion. 

6. Is the essay developed clearly and thoroughly? Where does it look incomplete or vague? What do readers need more information about?

The essay has been developed clearly with the information relating to the previous one. It is categorized into three parts which are introduction, body, and conclusion.

7. How is the structure of the essay and the organization of ideas? How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make a note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. Or additional details and support would help most.

The article has been appropriately developed, linking the information to the title and the thesis statement. I found it and to connect the questions in the thesis statement to either the development of the essay or the introduction

8. How could the evaluation of the various news sources, stories, or outlets be more objective?

It would be more effective if the author used Twitter as an independent source to evaluate the information rather than link it to CNN.

9. Is word choice clear and precise? Has the writer avoided over-generalizing? Where is the revision needed?

The author of the article has avoided generalization in the media selection since the main focus has been on CNN coverage of the news. The area that I feel the author repeated most was the impacts of the virus on black Americans. 

10. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive, or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? Does it discuss what's at stake, for example, if readers ignore the argument the writer is making? What suggestions do you have to make the conclusion even better?

 

The paper ends with a conclusion on what the author has learned from the news coverage and using the different media types to enrich the understanding of the topic. The author, however, did not tie the conclu7sion to the thesis. The author could have u8sed the conclusion to summarize the paper.

11. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmates' thinking. Ignore any issues that don't get in the way of your understanding.

There is no grammar error and structuring of the essay. The author used the right choice of words, mainly when referring to the minority group, Latinos, and African Americans.

12. Are there any formatting issues? Has your classmate included a separate Works Cited page that includes ONLY those sources that he/she referenced in the essay? Are the essay and the separate Works Cited page in the correct MLA format? If not, practice writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn.

The author did not include the references at the end of the essay; neither was their in-text citation. However, there was the utilization of the MLA format in the structure of the paper, (Ho, 2017).

13. What is your overall impression of the essay? Is it a worthy end to all this writer's work this semester? If not, what suggestions do you have for revising?

The essay communicates clear information about the impacts of Covid-19. There is the utilization of correct structuring, formatting, and organization of work. The issues I have pointed out the need to be rechecked for a more comprehensive essay.

Reference

Ho, D. E. (2017). Does peer review work: An experiment of experimentalism. Stan. L. Rev.69, 1.

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Essay Writer's Name: Paige Tincu

Essay's Title: Paige's Rough Draft

Peer Reviewer's Name: 

1. Does the writer effectively make his/her thesis clear to readers? 

The author of the article introduced the article by stating the main reasons he will look into the topic. Later, the author introduced the topic that will be discussed, which is the news coverage by different Media on the outbreak of the Corona Virus. . The thesis statement was brief. However, the author did not state clearly the contents that are going to be discussed in the paper.

2. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? 

The thesis did not provide enough information that the author is planning to discuss in the article. It would be more appropriate to include the points that will be discussed in the body in the thesis statement. However, the author stated the sources of the feeds utilized in obtaining the news coverage on coronavirus cases. 

3. Has the writer completed a thorough and fair study of a variety of news sources?

The author made a thorough analysis of the news sources, including television news, newspaper articles, internet news stories, and social media. It would be more effective if the author stated the various types of social media platforms utilized in gaining the news, including WhatsApp, Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc. 

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

In the article, the author provided specific evidence that supports the thesis statement. First, the author utilized The New York Times in the evaluation, where real-time information about the coronavirus was available. To be more precise, the author looked at the article written by Mitch Smith, Amy Harmon on the most hit areas by the virus, (Tenório, et al, 2016).

5. Does the writer refer to specific news coverage by listing the source clearly and precisely? This includes the name of the network, social media platform, or publication, the day and time of the news story if appropriate, and the author(s) of the article if appropriate? What needs more clarification or explanation?

The author of the article referred to some specific news coverage, including the name of the article or the news topic, the media that 2was covers the news, the persons covering it, and the period. The only information that the author did not provide, which I think is essential is when the news was covered. An example of such detail in the article is, "I usually choose to watch the local news on WDTN Channel 2. They always give the daily coronavirus updates and recap what Mike Dewine says during his daily briefings. An article from November 18, 2020, Coronavirus in Ohio."

6. Is the essay developed clearly and thoroughly? Where does it look incomplete or vague? What do readers need more information about?

The developed the article clearly and precisely basing on the thesis statement. The development was sequential, enabling the reader to relate the information being passed. The only part I feel that was inconsistent is where the author failed to provide some of the specific information being broadcasted, such as the coronavirus cases. 

7. How is the structure of the essay and the organization of ideas? How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make a note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. Or additional details and support would help most.

As I had stated earlier, the information that was passed by the author was consistent to enable the reader to draw a clear connection between what is being passed across. However, the author did not provide a conclusion that summarizes the article. 

8. How could the evaluation of the various news sources, stories, or outlets be more objective?

The author could have focused on specific news coverage in different media channels and provide extensive analysis to be more objective. It will have been better if the author relates the news feeds from different media. 

9. Is word choice clear and precise? Has the writer avoided over-generalizing? Where is the revision needed?

It is good that the author focused on the cases of coronavirus in Ohio and the measure that the government had taken to curb the spread, which was a curfew. However, it is not clear whether the article focused on the number of infections or the government's measures to curb the infections.

10. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? 

In the article, the author did not include a conclusion. This leaves the reader not satisfied since the author does not state whether the objectives were met. I will advise the author of the article to include a conclusion tied to the thesis statement.

11. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmates' thinking. Ignore any issues that don't get in the way of your understanding.

The grammar of the article and structuring was precise. However, there were some repetitions which I believe would have been easily avoided, such as "When I watch the news, I usually choose to watch the local……." Are there any formatting issues? 

The author provided a correct formatting style basing on the MLA style; however, there was no reference at the end of the article. There was neither intent citation to show the source of information.

12. What is your overall impression of the essay? Is it a worthy end to all this writer's work this semester? If not, what suggestions do you have for revising?

The author was comprehensive enough to include all the learnings in the semester. There are just a few issues that I have pointed out, such as the use of in-text citation that should be worked upon.

 

 

 

Reference

Ho, D. E. (2017). Does peer review work: An experiment of experimentalism. Stan. L. Rev.69, 1.

Tenório, T., Bittencourt, I. I., Isotani, S., & Silva, A. P. (2016). Does peer assessment in on-line learning environments work? A systematic review of the literature. Computers in Human Behavior64, 94-107.

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English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions for the News Evaluation Essay

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the writer effectively make his/her thesis clear to readers? In other words, is it clear what the writer’s argument is about the coverage that he/she will be discussing and analyzing?

2. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay?

3. Has the writer completed a thorough and fair study of a variety of news sources?

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

5. Does the writer refer to specific news coverage by listing the source clearly and precisely? This includes the name of the network, social media platform, or publication; the day and time of the news story if appropriate; and the author(s) of the article if appropriate? What needs more clarification or explanation?

6. Is the essay developed clearly and thoroughly? Where does it look incomplete or vague? What do readers need more information about?

7. How is the structure of the essay and the organization of ideas? How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details and/or support would help most.

8. How could the evaluation of the various news sources, stories, or outlets be more objective?

9. Is word choice clear and precise? Has the writer avoided over-generalizing? Where is revision needed?

10. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive, or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? Does it discuss what’s at stake, for example, if readers don’t pay attention to the argument the writer is making? What suggestions do you have to make the conclusion even better?

11. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmate’s thinking. Ignore any issues that don’t get in the way of your understanding.

12. Are there any issues with formatting? Has your classmate included a separate Works Cited page that includes ONLY those sources that he/she referenced in the essay? Are the essay and the separate Works Cited page in the correct MLA format? If not, practice writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn.

13. What is your overall impression of the essay? Is it a worthy end to all this writer’s work this semester? If not, what suggestions do you have for revising?

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Paige Tincu

Dair Arnold

English 1201

19 November 2020

News Evaluation Essay

For most of my life, I have not been the most avid news consumer. However, in 2020 it

has been impossible to not pay attention to the news. There has been so much going on this year

in our world, with the coronavirus being the most important. The coronavirus pandemic has been

tragic for so many people in the world and has taken the lives of so many people. As the

coronavirus is a very hot topic right now, I thought it would be interesting to see how different

news sources covered it. Over the past seven days I have looked at newspaper articles, television

news coverage, internet news stories, and social media to compare how they all cover the

coronavirus pandemic and why the numbers are on the rise right now.

When I first began looking for sources to evaluate for this essay, I had to think about a

specific aspect of the coronavirus to research because there are so many news stories about it. As

cases are higher than ever right now, I decided to look at why there are so many cases now and

what we need to do to help stop the spread of the virus. After choosing to look at stories that

focus on this aspect of the pandemic, it made it so much easier to find sources to evaluate.

The first source I evaluated was from The New York Times. The New York Times is

available online and always has up to date information on what is going on around the world. I

thought it would be one of the best sources to track the coronavirus pandemic and why it is

hitting harder now. The article I chose from The New York Times is “What Places Are Hardest

Hit by the Coronavirus? It Depends on the Measure” is written by Mitch Smith, Amy Harmon,

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Lucy Tompkins, and Thomas Fuller. This article looks at how the Coronavirus is hitting different

parts of the country harder than others. It shows city by city how the Coronavirus is affecting

cities differently. Many of these cities are considered “hot spots” for the Coronavirus in the

United States. Also, The New York Times considered this a “live” article which means it was

being updated as the numbers are changing around the country. I had never seen something like

this until reading this article. This type of news is especially relevant with the coronavirus

because the numbers are always changing.

As far as local news goes, it is not always as up to date about what is going on around the

country but gives updates on what is going on in our hometown. However, Ohio has been one of

the hotspots for the fall coronavirus surge. When I watch the news, I usually choose to watch the

local news on WDTN Channel 2. They always give the daily coronavirus updates and recap what

Mike Dewine says during his daily briefings. An article from November 18, 2020, “Coronavirus

in Ohio: Dewine said western Ohio is hotspot for coronavirus in Ohio” explains how the

coronavirus is affecting this area of Ohio. It also explains that Ohio could receive a vaccine as

early as December. Because of the high numbers in Ohio, the article also introduced Mike

Dewine’s curfew to help stop the spread of coronavirus. The curfew in Ohio goes from 10pm at

night until 5am in the morning, Dewine believes this could help make a difference in the

coronavirus numbers in Ohio. I believe this could help make a difference but probably not for all

states.

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English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions for the News Evaluation Essay

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the writer effectively make his/her thesis clear to readers? In other words, is it clear what the writer’s argument is about the coverage that he/she will be discussing and analyzing?

2. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay?

3. Has the writer completed a thorough and fair study of a variety of news sources?

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

5. Does the writer refer to specific news coverage by listing the source clearly and precisely? This includes the name of the network, social media platform, or publication; the day and time of the news story if appropriate; and the author(s) of the article if appropriate? What needs more clarification or explanation?

6. Is the essay developed clearly and thoroughly? Where does it look incomplete or vague? What do readers need more information about?

7. How is the structure of the essay and the organization of ideas? How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details and/or support would help most.

8. How could the evaluation of the various news sources, stories, or outlets be more objective?

9. Is word choice clear and precise? Has the writer avoided over-generalizing? Where is revision needed?

10. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive, or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? Does it discuss what’s at stake, for example, if readers don’t pay attention to the argument the writer is making? What suggestions do you have to make the conclusion even better?

11. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmate’s thinking. Ignore any issues that don’t get in the way of your understanding.

12. Are there any issues with formatting? Has your classmate included a separate Works Cited page that includes ONLY those sources that he/she referenced in the essay? Are the essay and the separate Works Cited page in the correct MLA format? If not, practice writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn.

13. What is your overall impression of the essay? Is it a worthy end to all this writer’s work this semester? If not, what suggestions do you have for revising?

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Paige Tincu

Dair Arnold

English 1201

19 November 2020

News Evaluation Essay

For most of my life, I have not been the most avid news consumer. However, in 2020 it

has been impossible to not pay attention to the news. There has been so much going on this year

in our world, with the coronavirus being the most important. The coronavirus pandemic has been

tragic for so many people in the world and has taken the lives of so many people. As the

coronavirus is a very hot topic right now, I thought it would be interesting to see how different

news sources covered it. Over the past seven days I have looked at newspaper articles, television

news coverage, internet news stories, and social media to compare how they all cover the

coronavirus pandemic and why the numbers are on the rise right now.

When I first began looking for sources to evaluate for this essay, I had to think about a

specific aspect of the coronavirus to research because there are so many news stories about it. As

cases are higher than ever right now, I decided to look at why there are so many cases now and

what we need to do to help stop the spread of the virus. After choosing to look at stories that

focus on this aspect of the pandemic, it made it so much easier to find sources to evaluate.

The first source I evaluated was from The New York Times. The New York Times is

available online and always has up to date information on what is going on around the world. I

thought it would be one of the best sources to track the coronavirus pandemic and why it is

hitting harder now. The article I chose from The New York Times is “What Places Are Hardest

Hit by the Coronavirus? It Depends on the Measure” is written by Mitch Smith, Amy Harmon,

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Lucy Tompkins, and Thomas Fuller. This article looks at how the Coronavirus is hitting different

parts of the country harder than others. It shows city by city how the Coronavirus is affecting

cities differently. Many of these cities are considered “hot spots” for the Coronavirus in the

United States. Also, The New York Times considered this a “live” article which means it was

being updated as the numbers are changing around the country. I had never seen something like

this until reading this article. This type of news is especially relevant with the coronavirus

because the numbers are always changing.

As far as local news goes, it is not always as up to date about what is going on around the

country but gives updates on what is going on in our hometown. However, Ohio has been one of

the hotspots for the fall coronavirus surge. When I watch the news, I usually choose to watch the

local news on WDTN Channel 2. They always give the daily coronavirus updates and recap what

Mike Dewine says during his daily briefings. An article from November 18, 2020, “Coronavirus

in Ohio: Dewine said western Ohio is hotspot for coronavirus in Ohio” explains how the

coronavirus is affecting this area of Ohio. It also explains that Ohio could receive a vaccine as

early as December. Because of the high numbers in Ohio, the article also introduced Mike

Dewine’s curfew to help stop the spread of coronavirus. The curfew in Ohio goes from 10pm at

night until 5am in the morning, Dewine believes this could help make a difference in the

coronavirus numbers in Ohio. I believe this could help make a difference but probably not for all

states.

work-2/Final Peer Feedback Questions for the News Evaluation Essay.docx

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions for the News Evaluation Essay

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the writer effectively make his/her thesis clear to readers? In other words, is it clear what the writer’s argument is about the coverage that he/she will be discussing and analyzing?

2. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay?

3. Has the writer completed a thorough and fair study of a variety of news sources?

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

5. Does the writer refer to specific news coverage by listing the source clearly and precisely? This includes the name of the network, social media platform, or publication; the day and time of the news story if appropriate; and the author(s) of the article if appropriate? What needs more clarification or explanation?

6. Is the essay developed clearly and thoroughly? Where does it look incomplete or vague? What do readers need more information about?

7. How is the structure of the essay and the organization of ideas? How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details and/or support would help most.

8. How could the evaluation of the various news sources, stories, or outlets be more objective?

9. Is word choice clear and precise? Has the writer avoided over-generalizing? Where is revision needed?

10. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive, or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? Does it discuss what’s at stake, for example, if readers don’t pay attention to the argument the writer is making? What suggestions do you have to make the conclusion even better?

11. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmate’s thinking. Ignore any issues that don’t get in the way of your understanding.

12. Are there any issues with formatting? Has your classmate included a separate Works Cited page that includes ONLY those sources that he/she referenced in the essay? Are the essay and the separate Works Cited page in the correct MLA format? If not, practice writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn.

13. What is your overall impression of the essay? Is it a worthy end to all this writer’s work this semester? If not, what suggestions do you have for revising?

work-2/Jessenia's Rough Draft.pdf

Jessenia Gosin

News Source Evaluation Essay Introduction: In this essay I will be discussing how news sources portray news differently on their social

media platform, websites, and on national television programs. The national news organization

that I covered was CNN, and the story was on how Covid-19 affects minorities. More

specifically, Black, Latino and Native American people. The news story covers the experience

that Black, Latino, and Native American people face when they go to the Hospital to get tested

or treated for Covid-19. I was drawn to this particular news story because these minority groups

that are affected, fall under races/ ethnicities that make up who I am. I generally identify as

African American and I do have Native American blood in me. I chose this story because, later

on in life I am planning on working in healthcare. I was initially curious about this story because

I wanted gain more insight on Covid-19, as well as what is going on in the healthcare system

relating to Covid-19. In this analysis I have learned that national news sources approach pushing

out news in similar ways, regardless of the platform they are using whether it be, social media,

national television, and on their websites. THESIS

Rough Draft Plan:  Discus CNN TV coverage cite YouTube videos  Cite CNN coverage on Instagram posted two posts about Covid-19, not relating to the article.

o It appears that CNN is putting more effort into IG posts rather than Twitter posts. State the dates of each media coverage regardless of platform, discuss what was said. Be careful because you are not writing an opinion-based essay. Mention the following on each platform because that is an estimate of their target audience. Possibly mention the likes.

 Support you claim in a few paragraphs  Inform your target audience about each news platform you have tracked and analyzed  Start with your stronger claims as far as your arguments made, then …

Body: In my research analysis the title of the news source I covered is, “Covid-19 is sending

Black, Latino and Native American people to the hospital at about 4 times the rate of others”. In

this news evaluation process, I began with reading the article, that I was most interested in. CNN

expressed in their article that there are studies showing that these racial groups are not treated

equally by hospitals, in comparison to white or non-Hispanic White people. The article

demonstrates that unfortunately, many lives were lost, when that did not have to be the case.

CNN provided links to resources, so that the reader can make judgment for themselves. The

resources provided is data from the CDC, and the US Census. However, many of the links for

readers to investigate are previously written CNN News Articles. Although all these sources are

accurate and credible it does present itself with a few biases. Towards the beginning of the article

CNN has a video titled: “Son: 3 hospitals denied my dad before he died of Covid-19”. The video

provided by CNN, displays a story of a man who lost his father to Covid-19. The man shares his

trials and tribulations in finding a hospital for his father. The speaker Keith Gambrell, in the

video expressed the pain of being denied care, and how it resulted in the death of his father. The

speaker himself had Covid-19 as well as his mother, and they all were denied access to

healthcare. This video provided by CNN, was aired on their national television platform, under

the title: “Virus disproportionately affects African Americans, who are dying at more than twice

the rate of white people”. Gambrell also explains that he lost his Grandfather to Covid-19, and he

and his siblings all caught the virus while being in the same household.

While following this topic, I went on to social media platforms to see the coverage of

Covid-19. The social media platform I used was Twitter. On Twitter, I found that CNN, did not

create a post specifically for Covid-19. Meaning they did not tweet anything that was specifically

constructed for Twitter. CNN’s Twitter page, simply tweeted the directed link to the article,

“Covid-19 is sending Black, Latino and Native American people to the hospital at about 4 times

the rate of others”. The post headlines with “Black, Hispanic and Native American people

infected with Covid-19 are about four times more likely to be hospitalized than others, CDC data

shows.” This headline then shows the top image of the article, with the title of the article

portrayed at the bottom of the post. As stated earlier the tweet only presents a direct link to the

article. On Twitter there are other posts from CNN’s social platform relating to Covid-19, but

nothing else relating to Covid-19 and it’s effects on minorities at the time when I evaluated CNN

as a news platform.

Conclusion: In this News Source Evaluation, I have come to the understanding that national news

sources converge pushing out news in similar ways, regardless of the platform they are using.

They put out news in similar ways on their social media platforms, national television platforms,

as well as on their websites.

MLA Works Cited

  • Introduction:
  • Rough Draft Plan:
  • Body:
  • Conclusion:
  • MLA Works Cited

dec-01/work-2/Final Peer Feedback Questions for the News Evaluation Essay.docx

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions for the News Evaluation Essay

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the writer effectively make his/her thesis clear to readers? In other words, is it clear what the writer’s argument is about the coverage that he/she will be discussing and analyzing?

2. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay?

3. Has the writer completed a thorough and fair study of a variety of news sources?

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

5. Does the writer refer to specific news coverage by listing the source clearly and precisely? This includes the name of the network, social media platform, or publication; the day and time of the news story if appropriate; and the author(s) of the article if appropriate? What needs more clarification or explanation?

6. Is the essay developed clearly and thoroughly? Where does it look incomplete or vague? What do readers need more information about?

7. How is the structure of the essay and the organization of ideas? How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details and/or support would help most.

8. How could the evaluation of the various news sources, stories, or outlets be more objective?

9. Is word choice clear and precise? Has the writer avoided over-generalizing? Where is revision needed?

10. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive, or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? Does it discuss what’s at stake, for example, if readers don’t pay attention to the argument the writer is making? What suggestions do you have to make the conclusion even better?

11. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmate’s thinking. Ignore any issues that don’t get in the way of your understanding.

12. Are there any issues with formatting? Has your classmate included a separate Works Cited page that includes ONLY those sources that he/she referenced in the essay? Are the essay and the separate Works Cited page in the correct MLA format? If not, practice writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn.

13. What is your overall impression of the essay? Is it a worthy end to all this writer’s work this semester? If not, what suggestions do you have for revising?

dec-01/work-2/Jessenia's Rough Draft.pdf

Jessenia Gosin

News Source Evaluation Essay Introduction: In this essay I will be discussing how news sources portray news differently on their social

media platform, websites, and on national television programs. The national news organization

that I covered was CNN, and the story was on how Covid-19 affects minorities. More

specifically, Black, Latino and Native American people. The news story covers the experience

that Black, Latino, and Native American people face when they go to the Hospital to get tested

or treated for Covid-19. I was drawn to this particular news story because these minority groups

that are affected, fall under races/ ethnicities that make up who I am. I generally identify as

African American and I do have Native American blood in me. I chose this story because, later

on in life I am planning on working in healthcare. I was initially curious about this story because

I wanted gain more insight on Covid-19, as well as what is going on in the healthcare system

relating to Covid-19. In this analysis I have learned that national news sources approach pushing

out news in similar ways, regardless of the platform they are using whether it be, social media,

national television, and on their websites. THESIS

Rough Draft Plan:  Discus CNN TV coverage cite YouTube videos  Cite CNN coverage on Instagram posted two posts about Covid-19, not relating to the article.

o It appears that CNN is putting more effort into IG posts rather than Twitter posts. State the dates of each media coverage regardless of platform, discuss what was said. Be careful because you are not writing an opinion-based essay. Mention the following on each platform because that is an estimate of their target audience. Possibly mention the likes.

 Support you claim in a few paragraphs  Inform your target audience about each news platform you have tracked and analyzed  Start with your stronger claims as far as your arguments made, then …

Body: In my research analysis the title of the news source I covered is, “Covid-19 is sending

Black, Latino and Native American people to the hospital at about 4 times the rate of others”. In

this news evaluation process, I began with reading the article, that I was most interested in. CNN

expressed in their article that there are studies showing that these racial groups are not treated

equally by hospitals, in comparison to white or non-Hispanic White people. The article

demonstrates that unfortunately, many lives were lost, when that did not have to be the case.

CNN provided links to resources, so that the reader can make judgment for themselves. The

resources provided is data from the CDC, and the US Census. However, many of the links for

readers to investigate are previously written CNN News Articles. Although all these sources are

accurate and credible it does present itself with a few biases. Towards the beginning of the article

CNN has a video titled: “Son: 3 hospitals denied my dad before he died of Covid-19”. The video

provided by CNN, displays a story of a man who lost his father to Covid-19. The man shares his

trials and tribulations in finding a hospital for his father. The speaker Keith Gambrell, in the

video expressed the pain of being denied care, and how it resulted in the death of his father. The

speaker himself had Covid-19 as well as his mother, and they all were denied access to

healthcare. This video provided by CNN, was aired on their national television platform, under

the title: “Virus disproportionately affects African Americans, who are dying at more than twice

the rate of white people”. Gambrell also explains that he lost his Grandfather to Covid-19, and he

and his siblings all caught the virus while being in the same household.

While following this topic, I went on to social media platforms to see the coverage of

Covid-19. The social media platform I used was Twitter. On Twitter, I found that CNN, did not

create a post specifically for Covid-19. Meaning they did not tweet anything that was specifically

constructed for Twitter. CNN’s Twitter page, simply tweeted the directed link to the article,

“Covid-19 is sending Black, Latino and Native American people to the hospital at about 4 times

the rate of others”. The post headlines with “Black, Hispanic and Native American people

infected with Covid-19 are about four times more likely to be hospitalized than others, CDC data

shows.” This headline then shows the top image of the article, with the title of the article

portrayed at the bottom of the post. As stated earlier the tweet only presents a direct link to the

article. On Twitter there are other posts from CNN’s social platform relating to Covid-19, but

nothing else relating to Covid-19 and it’s effects on minorities at the time when I evaluated CNN

as a news platform.

Conclusion: In this News Source Evaluation, I have come to the understanding that national news

sources converge pushing out news in similar ways, regardless of the platform they are using.

They put out news in similar ways on their social media platforms, national television platforms,

as well as on their websites.

MLA Works Cited

  • Introduction:
  • Rough Draft Plan:
  • Body:
  • Conclusion:
  • MLA Works Cited

nov_03/2-works.zip

Homework for Tuesday.docx

Homework for Tuesday:

Choose one online national news organization and one social media platform that are reporting on the same hard news story (this can be the same hard news story that you are tracking in your News Source Evaluation Chart or something completely different). Read the article from each source, making sure you apply the critical reading and thinking strategies that we’ve been discussing and practicing all semester.

Then, I’d like you to answer and/or do the following:

· Identify the national news organization and the social media platform that you have chosen, as well as the title and author of each article.

· Answer the question: What is the main point of each article? In other words, what are readers of the article being asked to think, feel, believe, understand, or do? How exactly do you know that?

· Determine who or what sources are used by each article’s writer to support his or her main ideas. List these sources here.

· Based on what you’ve learned about the CRAAP method for evaluating sources, would you consider the sources being used in each article appropriate and credible? In either case, explain your answer using specific examples from each source you identified above.

· Is the information included in the article verified in any way (by a link, data, or a quote from someone credible, for example)? How? If not, could it be verified? If so, how?

· What biases or assumptions are evident in the story?

· Click on this link for an explanation of bias: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/bias

· Click on this link for examples of biased reporting: www.studentnewsdaily.com/archive/example-of-media-bias/

Please bring this assignment with you to class on Tuesday.

Homework for Tuesday:

Choose

one online

national news

organ

ization

and one social media platform

that are reporting

on

the same

hard

news story

(this can be the same hard news story that you are tracking in your

News Source Evaluation Chart or something completel

y different)

.

R

ead the

article

from

each

sourc

e

, m

ak

ing

sure you apply the critical reading and thinking strategies that

we’ve

been

discussing and practicing all semester

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case, explain your answer using specific examples from each source

you identified

above

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·

Is the information

included in the article

verified

in any way (

by a link

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bring this assignment with y

ou to class on Tuesday.

Homework for Tuesday:

Choose one online national news organization and one social media platform that are reporting

on the same hard news story (this can be the same hard news story that you are tracking in your

News Source Evaluation Chart or something completely different). Read the article from each

source, making sure you apply the critical reading and thinking strategies that we’ve been

discussing and practicing all semester.

Then, I’d like you to answer and/or do the following:

 Identify the national news organization and the social media platform that you have

chosen, as well as the title and author of each article.

 Answer the question: What is the main point of each article? In other words, what are

readers of the article being asked to think, feel, believe, understand, or do? How exactly

do you know that?

 Determine who or what sources are used by each article’s writer to support his or her

main ideas. List these sources here.

 Based on what you’ve learned about the CRAAP method for evaluating sources, would

you consider the sources being used in each article appropriate and credible? In either

case, explain your answer using specific examples from each source you identified above.

 Is the information included in the article verified in any way (by a link, data, or a quote

from someone credible, for example)? How? If not, could it be verified? If so, how?

 What biases or assumptions are evident in the story?

o Click on this link for an explanation of bias:

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/bias

o Click on this link for examples of biased reporting:

www.studentnewsdaily.com/archive/example-of-media-bias/

Please bring this assignment with you to class on Tuesday.

Informal Writing 8.docx

Informal Writing #8

Overall, do you feel that as a global citizen and as an American citizen you are given accurate and ample information about news events as they are occurring? Why or why not?

What specific criteria do you use right now to judge news sources? For instance, do you judge the quality of a news article by how well it answers the questions who, what, when, where and how, or do you have different criteria that is important to you?

Hopefully, we will have some time at the end of class available for you to start on this. However, if we don’t, please submit your approximately one-page response to the appropriate Dropbox by tomorrow at midnight!

Informal Writing #8

Overall, do you feel that as a global citizen

and as an American citizen

you are given accurate

and ample information about news events as they are occurring? Why or why not?

What specific criteria do you use

right now

to judge news sources? For instance, do you judge

the quality of a news article by how well it answers the questions who, what, when, where and

how, or do you have different criteria that is important to you?

Hopefully, we will have some time

at the end of class

available for you to

start on th

is.

However, if we don

t, please submit your

approximately one

-

page response to the appropriate

Dropbox by tomorrow at midnight!

Informal Writing #8

Overall, do you feel that as a global citizen and as an American citizen you are given accurate

and ample information about news events as they are occurring? Why or why not?

What specific criteria do you use right now to judge news sources? For instance, do you judge

the quality of a news article by how well it answers the questions who, what, when, where and

how, or do you have different criteria that is important to you?

Hopefully, we will have some time at the end of class available for you to start on this.

However, if we don’t, please submit your approximately one-page response to the appropriate

Dropbox by tomorrow at midnight!

nov_03/ans/Articleanalysis.docx

Running head: ANALYSIS 1

ANALYSIS 2

Article analysis

Student’s name

Institutional affiliation

Date

The national news organization that I have chosen is The New York Times and the social media platform that I have chosen is The Business Insider. The New York Times named their article ‘Capital One Data Breach Compromises Data of Over 100 Million’ and was written by Emily Flitter and Karen Weise (Flitter & Weise, 2019). The article on the same story by the business insider was entitled ‘Capital One's data breach affected over 100 million customers’ and was written by Gregory Magana.

The article on New York times informs the readers of the occurrence of the capitol one breach. It enlightens the readers of the events that happened leading to the breach, the people responsible, damage that happened and how it happened. The article also explains the consequences of the act, both to the bank, and to the individual. The article gives adequate information about the hacker, Paige, and how she was arrested. It also gives the views of the bank after this event occurred. The article by the business insider focuses on the business implications of the breach. The article gives an opinion by an expert in breaches, about the implications for capitol one, and for the banking industry in general (Magana, 2019).

The authors of the article in New York times use sources from the federal prosecutors and court documents from Seattle. The business insider uses information from TechCrunch to estimate the number of those affected from the breach.

Using CRAAP on the new York times article, the information is current, being published in 2019, it is authentic relevant because it describes how data security is important, the authors have the authority because Flitter is a banking writer and Weise covers amazon and Microsoft in Seattle, it is accurate because it comes from court proceedings, and it has a purpose of informing readers of the occurrences. The article from the business insider is not credible because the authority of the author has not been discussed.

Information from the articles are verifiable because there are links attached to each of the articles. The biases in this story is that it dies not consider both sides of the story. It is mainly focused on the hacking of the bank, not giving attention to the reasons of the hacker hacking the bank.

References

Flitter, E. & Weise, K. (2019) Capital One Data Breach Compromises Data of Over 100 Million. The New York Times. Retrieved from https://www.nytimes.com/2019/07/29/business/capital-one-data-breach-hacked.html

Magana, G. (2019) Capital One's data breach affected over 100 million customers. Business Insider. Retrieved from https://www.businessinsider.com/capitol-one-data-breach-has-heavy-implications-2019-7?IR=T&itm_source=twitter&itm_medium=social&itm_content=briefings_post&itm_campaign=7-31-2019

nov_03/ans/Informalwriting.docx

Running head: INFORMAL WRITING 1

INFORMAL WRITING 2

Informal writing

Student’s name

Institutional affiliation

Date

As a citizen, I do not feel like there is accurate information being given on events. Sometimes, there are very important aspects of information that are being left out by news articles and reports. For example, most of the news articles just give a summary of events without creating a context for the story. For example, if there was a breach on the capitol one bank, the news articles will immediately pick up the story from when the event occurred. Not all of us are aware of capital one bank.

I believe the news articles should first begin by explaining capital one bank, the explaining who hacked their systems, why she did it, how she was caught and the court proceedings. Most of the articles vaguely touch on the matter and this fails to give sufficient information about many topics. Also, most of the news sources will reveal approximate figures instead of the accurate ones. Because of this, there are numerous contradicting sources, with others saying 48 million, for example, and the other saying approximately 50 million.

While judging the news sources, I first look at the proficiency of the language used. There are news articles that have grammatical errors. These articles immediately come out as vague to me. I also consider the depth of information being provided. Those ones that provide summaries are not considered as quality sources.

In addition, I also consider news articles that state the sources of information. News articles are considered secondary sources and I would love to know from where the information was sourced. News articles that do not outline from what source they got their information are considered as hearsay.

nov_03/Homework for Tuesday.docx

Homework for Tuesday:

Choose one online national news organization and one social media platform that are reporting on the same hard news story (this can be the same hard news story that you are tracking in your News Source Evaluation Chart or something completely different). Read the article from each source, making sure you apply the critical reading and thinking strategies that we’ve been discussing and practicing all semester.

Then, I’d like you to answer and/or do the following:

· Identify the national news organization and the social media platform that you have chosen, as well as the title and author of each article.

· Answer the question: What is the main point of each article? In other words, what are readers of the article being asked to think, feel, believe, understand, or do? How exactly do you know that?

· Determine who or what sources are used by each article’s writer to support his or her main ideas. List these sources here.

· Based on what you’ve learned about the CRAAP method for evaluating sources, would you consider the sources being used in each article appropriate and credible? In either case, explain your answer using specific examples from each source you identified above.

· Is the information included in the article verified in any way (by a link, data, or a quote from someone credible, for example)? How? If not, could it be verified? If so, how?

· What biases or assumptions are evident in the story?

· Click on this link for an explanation of bias: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/bias

· Click on this link for examples of biased reporting: www.studentnewsdaily.com/archive/example-of-media-bias/

Please bring this assignment with you to class on Tuesday.

Homework for Tuesday:

Choose

one online

national news

organ

ization

and one social media platform

that are reporting

on

the same

hard

news story

(this can be the same hard news story that you are tracking in your

News Source Evaluation Chart or something completel

y different)

.

R

ead the

article

from

each

sourc

e

, m

ak

ing

sure you apply the critical reading and thinking strategies that

we’ve

been

discussing and practicing all semester

.

Th

en, I

’d like you to

ans

wer and/or do

the following:

·

Identify the national news organization and the social media plat

form that yo

u

have

chosen, as well

as the title and author of

each article

.

·

Answer the question: What is the main point of

eac

h

article

?

In o

ther words, what

are

read

ers of the

article

being asked to think, feel, believe, understand, o

r do?

How exactly

do you know that?

·

D

etermine who or what sources are used

by each

article

’s

writer

to support

his or her

main ideas. List the

se sources

here

.

·

Based on what you

’ve learned about

the CRAAP method for evaluatin

g sources, would

you consider the sources being used

in each

article

appropriate and credible

? In either

case, explain your answer using specific examples from each source

you identified

above

.

·

Is the information

included in the article

verified

in any way (

by a link

, data, or

a quote

from someone credible

, for e

xample)?

How? If not, could it be verified? If so, how?

·

What biase

s or assumptions are evident in the story?

o

Click o

n

this link

for an

explanation of bias

:

http://dictionary

.

reference

.

com/browse/bias

o

Click on

this link

for examples

of biased reporting:

www.studentnewsdaily

.com/archive/example

-

of

-

media

-

bias/

P

lease

bring this assignment with y

ou to class on Tuesday.

Homework for Tuesday:

Choose one online national news organization and one social media platform that are reporting

on the same hard news story (this can be the same hard news story that you are tracking in your

News Source Evaluation Chart or something completely different). Read the article from each

source, making sure you apply the critical reading and thinking strategies that we’ve been

discussing and practicing all semester.

Then, I’d like you to answer and/or do the following:

 Identify the national news organization and the social media platform that you have

chosen, as well as the title and author of each article.

 Answer the question: What is the main point of each article? In other words, what are

readers of the article being asked to think, feel, believe, understand, or do? How exactly

do you know that?

 Determine who or what sources are used by each article’s writer to support his or her

main ideas. List these sources here.

 Based on what you’ve learned about the CRAAP method for evaluating sources, would

you consider the sources being used in each article appropriate and credible? In either

case, explain your answer using specific examples from each source you identified above.

 Is the information included in the article verified in any way (by a link, data, or a quote

from someone credible, for example)? How? If not, could it be verified? If so, how?

 What biases or assumptions are evident in the story?

o Click on this link for an explanation of bias:

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/bias

o Click on this link for examples of biased reporting:

www.studentnewsdaily.com/archive/example-of-media-bias/

Please bring this assignment with you to class on Tuesday.

nov_03/Informal Writing 8.docx

Informal Writing #8

Overall, do you feel that as a global citizen and as an American citizen you are given accurate and ample information about news events as they are occurring? Why or why not?

What specific criteria do you use right now to judge news sources? For instance, do you judge the quality of a news article by how well it answers the questions who, what, when, where and how, or do you have different criteria that is important to you?

Hopefully, we will have some time at the end of class available for you to start on this. However, if we don’t, please submit your approximately one-page response to the appropriate Dropbox by tomorrow at midnight!

Informal Writing #8

Overall, do you feel that as a global citizen

and as an American citizen

you are given accurate

and ample information about news events as they are occurring? Why or why not?

What specific criteria do you use

right now

to judge news sources? For instance, do you judge

the quality of a news article by how well it answers the questions who, what, when, where and

how, or do you have different criteria that is important to you?

Hopefully, we will have some time

at the end of class

available for you to

start on th

is.

However, if we don

t, please submit your

approximately one

-

page response to the appropriate

Dropbox by tomorrow at midnight!

Informal Writing #8

Overall, do you feel that as a global citizen and as an American citizen you are given accurate

and ample information about news events as they are occurring? Why or why not?

What specific criteria do you use right now to judge news sources? For instance, do you judge

the quality of a news article by how well it answers the questions who, what, when, where and

how, or do you have different criteria that is important to you?

Hopefully, we will have some time at the end of class available for you to start on this.

However, if we don’t, please submit your approximately one-page response to the appropriate

Dropbox by tomorrow at midnight!

nov-10/Essay Assignment Sheet.docx

ENG 1201

Essay #3 – News Source Evaluation Essay Assignment Sheet

General Information about the Assignment

This multi-step assignment requires you to use the summarizing skills you used in writing your Summary and Critical Response assignment and apply them to multiple sources. In addition, you will complete a source tracking chart that I’ll provide and that you will use to write your next paper.

The first step in this assignment is to peruse several news outlets for a news story that interests you. Please track only one news event or story that appears in three different news outlets. Be sure the story is a hard news story - not entertainment or sports news. Because you need practice evaluating several different kinds of sources, please make sure you find a source that fits each of the categories below. Types of Sources to Track

1. If you have access to it, the first type of source is a print newspaper - this will require you to look at a printed paper each day for seven days. While this can seem time consuming, it is a valuable part of the assignment and helps you see how stories are organized and news is prioritized when printed on paper vs. online. If you do not have access to a print newspaper, please go to the newspaper’s website directly or use the Sinclair library databases.

2. The second type of source is a popular local news source (tv broadcast, printed source, or another type of media).

3. The third source is an online news source. This will be your second online news source if you did not have access to a print newspaper for #1.

4. The fourth type of source needs to be opinion-based. An opinion-based source or opinion-piece or editorial from a website like  The Huffington Post or On the Media (NPR) will provide one or more strong views on a single issue. These sources present arguments for or against an issue. If you cannot find an editorial each day, then you can compare editorial websites for this category.

Once you've found your four sources, keep track of how they report on the story each day for seven consecutive days by filling in the tracking chart. If there is no coverage of your story on one day, then note it. I should be able to find your sources easily. Please fill out the appropriate column/row for each day.

Reminder: Each of the sources you are tracking will appear in MLA format on your essay’s Works Cited.

The Writing Task

The second step for this assignment is to write your News Source Evaluation Essay.

Drafting Your News Source Evaluation Essay

After you've tracked your story, it is time to write a short, evaluative study of your sources. Your paper will be 2-3 pages, and in it you will present a claim about the quality and consistency of the news coverage you’ve been tracking. Please note that you aren't presenting your opinion about the story you tracked; instead, you are presenting your opinion about the COVERAGE of the story.

· Here are some key ideas for you to consider in writing your essay:

· Were you given accurate and ample information about this news event? How do you know this?

· Which news outlets and/or sources did you gather the most information from? Why do you think there is a difference?

· What specific criteria are you using to judge the sources? For instance, if a news article is answering the questions who, what, when, where and how, how do the sources fulfill those criteria?

· Instead of summarizing what has developed each day, step back and evaluate that information. How do the outlets differ in what they presented over the course of a week?

· As you begin writing, make sure your essay contains the following points:

· An introduction that explains your topic and your interest in the story. Why did you choose it?

· Your claim (thesis) that states the position you are taking about the story's coverage you tracked over the past seven days.

· A developed discussion that supports your claim. In other words, assume your audience is interested in the news story and you are writing to inform them about the coverage you've tracked. As you write, consider how you rank the sources. What are their strengths and weaknesses? Be specific -- make sure that the examples you choose support your claim.

· Move your paper toward a conclusion. Perhaps you want to structure your paper with the strong and weak sources contrasting one another. Or you might start with the strong and follow with the weak. Perhaps you find all the sources equal in terms of their coverage. If so, what similarities do they have? Finally, how can you offer your readers a new concluding thought so that they are thinking about the importance of understanding different kinds of coverage?

Formatting Instructions

· Final drafts must be typed in 12-point Times New Roman or Calibri font. The default setting in Microsoft Word is 11-point Calibri, so remember that you will always have to go in and change the font size when you begin to write something new.

· Make sure your essay double-spaced with one-inch margins. The default margin setting is already at one inch. However, you must change the spacing above and below the line.

· There is no separate title page, so in the upper left-hand corner of page one, you will type your name, my name (Dair Arnold), course number and section (ENG 1201.R07) and the date.

· Use MLA format for citing your news sources. This applies to in-text parenthetical documentation and to your separate Works Cited page.

ENG 1201

Essay #3

News Source Evaluation Essay Assignment Sheet

General Information

about

the Assignment

This

multi

-

step

assignment requires you to use the summarizing skills you used in writing your

Summary and Critical Response

assignment and apply them to multiple sources.

In addition

,

you

will

complete

a source tracking chart that I

’ll

provide

and that you will use to

write your next

paper.

The first step

in this assignment is to peruse several news outlets for a news story that inte

rests

you. Please track only one news event or story that appears in three different news outlets.

Be

sure the story is a hard news story

-

not entertainment or sports news

. Because you need

practice evaluating several different kinds of sources, please ma

ke sure you find a source that fits

each of the categories below.

Types of Sources

t

o Track

1.

If you have access to it, t

he first type of source is a print newspaper

-

this will require you to

look at a printed paper each day for

seven

days. While this c

an seem time consuming, it is a

valuable part of the assignment and helps you see how stories are organized and news is

prioritized when printed on paper vs. online.

If you do not have access to a print newspaper,

please go to the newspaper’s website dire

ctly or use the Sinclair library databases.

2. The second type of source is a popular local news source (tv broadcast, printed source, or

another type of media).

3. The third source is an online news source.

This will be your second online

news source if you

did not have access to a print

newsp

aper for #1.

4. The

fourth

type of source needs to be opinion

-

based. An opinion

-

based source or

opinion

-

piece

or

editorial

from a website like

The Huffington Post

or

On the Media

(NPR) will provide

one or more strong views on a single issue. These sources present arguments for or against an

issue. If you cannot find an editorial each day, then you can compare editorial websites for this

category.

Once you've found y

our

four

sources, keep track of how they report on the story each day for

seven

consecutive days by filling in the tracking chart. If there is no coverage of your story on

one day, then note it. I should be able to find your sources easily. Please fill out the

appropriate

column/row for each day.

Reminder: Each of the sources you are tracking will appear in MLA format on your essay’s Works Cited.

ENG 1201

Essay #3 – News Source Evaluation Essay Assignment Sheet

General Information about the Assignment

This multi-step assignment requires you to use the summarizing skills you used in writing your

Summary and Critical Response assignment and apply them to multiple sources. In addition, you

will complete a source tracking chart that I’ll provide and that you will use to write your next

paper.

The first step in this assignment is to peruse several news outlets for a news story that interests

you. Please track only one news event or story that appears in three different news outlets. Be

sure the story is a hard news story - not entertainment or sports news. Because you need

practice evaluating several different kinds of sources, please make sure you find a source that fits

each of the categories below.

Types of Sources to Track

1. If you have access to it, the first type of source is a print newspaper - this will require you to

look at a printed paper each day for seven days. While this can seem time consuming, it is a

valuable part of the assignment and helps you see how stories are organized and news is

prioritized when printed on paper vs. online. If you do not have access to a print newspaper,

please go to the newspaper’s website directly or use the Sinclair library databases.

2. The second type of source is a popular local news source (tv broadcast, printed source, or

another type of media).

3. The third source is an online news source. This will be your second online news source if you

did not have access to a print newspaper for #1.

4. The fourth type of source needs to be opinion-based. An opinion-based source or opinion-

piece or editorial from a website like The Huffington Post or On the Media (NPR) will provide

one or more strong views on a single issue. These sources present arguments for or against an

issue. If you cannot find an editorial each day, then you can compare editorial websites for this

category.

Once you've found your four sources, keep track of how they report on the story each day for

seven consecutive days by filling in the tracking chart. If there is no coverage of your story on

one day, then note it. I should be able to find your sources easily. Please fill out the appropriate

column/row for each day.

Reminder: Each of the sources you are tracking will appear in MLA format on your essay’s Works Cited.

nov-10/Essay Assignment Sheet.zip

Essay Assignment Sheet.docx

ENG 1201

Essay #3 – News Source Evaluation Essay Assignment Sheet

General Information about the Assignment

This multi-step assignment requires you to use the summarizing skills you used in writing your Summary and Critical Response assignment and apply them to multiple sources. In addition, you will complete a source tracking chart that I’ll provide and that you will use to write your next paper.

The first step in this assignment is to peruse several news outlets for a news story that interests you. Please track only one news event or story that appears in three different news outlets. Be sure the story is a hard news story - not entertainment or sports news. Because you need practice evaluating several different kinds of sources, please make sure you find a source that fits each of the categories below. Types of Sources to Track

1. If you have access to it, the first type of source is a print newspaper - this will require you to look at a printed paper each day for seven days. While this can seem time consuming, it is a valuable part of the assignment and helps you see how stories are organized and news is prioritized when printed on paper vs. online. If you do not have access to a print newspaper, please go to the newspaper’s website directly or use the Sinclair library databases.

2. The second type of source is a popular local news source (tv broadcast, printed source, or another type of media).

3. The third source is an online news source. This will be your second online news source if you did not have access to a print newspaper for #1.

4. The fourth type of source needs to be opinion-based. An opinion-based source or opinion-piece or editorial from a website like  The Huffington Post or On the Media (NPR) will provide one or more strong views on a single issue. These sources present arguments for or against an issue. If you cannot find an editorial each day, then you can compare editorial websites for this category.

Once you've found your four sources, keep track of how they report on the story each day for seven consecutive days by filling in the tracking chart. If there is no coverage of your story on one day, then note it. I should be able to find your sources easily. Please fill out the appropriate column/row for each day.

Reminder: Each of the sources you are tracking will appear in MLA format on your essay’s Works Cited.

The Writing Task

The second step for this assignment is to write your News Source Evaluation Essay.

Drafting Your News Source Evaluation Essay

After you've tracked your story, it is time to write a short, evaluative study of your sources. Your paper will be 2-3 pages, and in it you will present a claim about the quality and consistency of the news coverage you’ve been tracking. Please note that you aren't presenting your opinion about the story you tracked; instead, you are presenting your opinion about the COVERAGE of the story.

· Here are some key ideas for you to consider in writing your essay:

· Were you given accurate and ample information about this news event? How do you know this?

· Which news outlets and/or sources did you gather the most information from? Why do you think there is a difference?

· What specific criteria are you using to judge the sources? For instance, if a news article is answering the questions who, what, when, where and how, how do the sources fulfill those criteria?

· Instead of summarizing what has developed each day, step back and evaluate that information. How do the outlets differ in what they presented over the course of a week?

· As you begin writing, make sure your essay contains the following points:

· An introduction that explains your topic and your interest in the story. Why did you choose it?

· Your claim (thesis) that states the position you are taking about the story's coverage you tracked over the past seven days.

· A developed discussion that supports your claim. In other words, assume your audience is interested in the news story and you are writing to inform them about the coverage you've tracked. As you write, consider how you rank the sources. What are their strengths and weaknesses? Be specific -- make sure that the examples you choose support your claim.

· Move your paper toward a conclusion. Perhaps you want to structure your paper with the strong and weak sources contrasting one another. Or you might start with the strong and follow with the weak. Perhaps you find all the sources equal in terms of their coverage. If so, what similarities do they have? Finally, how can you offer your readers a new concluding thought so that they are thinking about the importance of understanding different kinds of coverage?

Formatting Instructions

· Final drafts must be typed in 12-point Times New Roman or Calibri font. The default setting in Microsoft Word is 11-point Calibri, so remember that you will always have to go in and change the font size when you begin to write something new.

· Make sure your essay double-spaced with one-inch margins. The default margin setting is already at one inch. However, you must change the spacing above and below the line.

· There is no separate title page, so in the upper left-hand corner of page one, you will type your name, my name (Dair Arnold), course number and section (ENG 1201.R07) and the date.

· Use MLA format for citing your news sources. This applies to in-text parenthetical documentation and to your separate Works Cited page.

ENG 1201

Essay #3

News Source Evaluation Essay Assignment Sheet

General Information

about

the Assignment

This

multi

-

step

assignment requires you to use the summarizing skills you used in writing your

Summary and Critical Response

assignment and apply them to multiple sources.

In addition

,

you

will

complete

a source tracking chart that I

’ll

provide

and that you will use to

write your next

paper.

The first step

in this assignment is to peruse several news outlets for a news story that inte

rests

you. Please track only one news event or story that appears in three different news outlets.

Be

sure the story is a hard news story

-

not entertainment or sports news

. Because you need

practice evaluating several different kinds of sources, please ma

ke sure you find a source that fits

each of the categories below.

Types of Sources

t

o Track

1.

If you have access to it, t

he first type of source is a print newspaper

-

this will require you to

look at a printed paper each day for

seven

days. While this c

an seem time consuming, it is a

valuable part of the assignment and helps you see how stories are organized and news is

prioritized when printed on paper vs. online.

If you do not have access to a print newspaper,

please go to the newspaper’s website dire

ctly or use the Sinclair library databases.

2. The second type of source is a popular local news source (tv broadcast, printed source, or

another type of media).

3. The third source is an online news source.

This will be your second online

news source if you

did not have access to a print

newsp

aper for #1.

4. The

fourth

type of source needs to be opinion

-

based. An opinion

-

based source or

opinion

-

piece

or

editorial

from a website like

The Huffington Post

or

On the Media

(NPR) will provide

one or more strong views on a single issue. These sources present arguments for or against an

issue. If you cannot find an editorial each day, then you can compare editorial websites for this

category.

Once you've found y

our

four

sources, keep track of how they report on the story each day for

seven

consecutive days by filling in the tracking chart. If there is no coverage of your story on

one day, then note it. I should be able to find your sources easily. Please fill out the

appropriate

column/row for each day.

Reminder: Each of the sources you are tracking will appear in MLA format on your essay’s Works Cited.

ENG 1201

Essay #3 – News Source Evaluation Essay Assignment Sheet

General Information about the Assignment

This multi-step assignment requires you to use the summarizing skills you used in writing your

Summary and Critical Response assignment and apply them to multiple sources. In addition, you

will complete a source tracking chart that I’ll provide and that you will use to write your next

paper.

The first step in this assignment is to peruse several news outlets for a news story that interests

you. Please track only one news event or story that appears in three different news outlets. Be

sure the story is a hard news story - not entertainment or sports news. Because you need

practice evaluating several different kinds of sources, please make sure you find a source that fits

each of the categories below.

Types of Sources to Track

1. If you have access to it, the first type of source is a print newspaper - this will require you to

look at a printed paper each day for seven days. While this can seem time consuming, it is a

valuable part of the assignment and helps you see how stories are organized and news is

prioritized when printed on paper vs. online. If you do not have access to a print newspaper,

please go to the newspaper’s website directly or use the Sinclair library databases.

2. The second type of source is a popular local news source (tv broadcast, printed source, or

another type of media).

3. The third source is an online news source. This will be your second online news source if you

did not have access to a print newspaper for #1.

4. The fourth type of source needs to be opinion-based. An opinion-based source or opinion-

piece or editorial from a website like The Huffington Post or On the Media (NPR) will provide

one or more strong views on a single issue. These sources present arguments for or against an

issue. If you cannot find an editorial each day, then you can compare editorial websites for this

category.

Once you've found your four sources, keep track of how they report on the story each day for

seven consecutive days by filling in the tracking chart. If there is no coverage of your story on

one day, then note it. I should be able to find your sources easily. Please fill out the appropriate

column/row for each day.

Reminder: Each of the sources you are tracking will appear in MLA format on your essay’s Works Cited.

nov-10/NewsSourceEvaluationEssay.docx

Surname 10

Your Name

Supervisor Name

Course Name

Due Date

News Source Evaluation Essay

Accuracy of News Sources

The news outlets that I chose gave accurate news since they are credible media houses that have been in operation for a long time. The BBC, CNBC, Aljazeera and CNN are all of the media outlets have been registered by the government meaning all information provided is accurate. The media outlets chosen provided me with credible information over the entire seven-day period required for analysis. I started the analysis on November fourth and got critical information every single day. I chose the four media outlets since majority of Americans trust their information. Another positive quality about the online news sources is that they reported on different topics surrounding the 2020 elections yet the main concern was to properly inform citizens of critical environmental factors.

Difference Between the Sources

The news outlets that I gathered my information from were BBC, CNBC, Aljazeera and CNN. The four media outlets applied diverse methods of covering news since they report on news concerning elections but each media outlet reported on the same topic in different ways. When I analyzed the new outlets, I expected to find information majorly concerning vote counting or voter registration news. This was not the case since some of the news outlets decided to report on societal issues directly connected to the elections and candidates. On the fourth of November, an outlet like the BBC reported on gender representation and how a transgender woman got elected as a senator (“US Election 2020: Sarah Mcbride To Be First Trans State Senator”.). On the same day, CNBC majored on reporting election analysts expected Trump to win all electoral votes in Ohio (Breuninger and Miao). On the same day, Aljazeera reported how Biden was projected to win the entire elections (Newton et al.).

Similarities Between the Sources

Instead of summarizing what has developed each day, step back and evaluate that information. How do the outlets differ in what they presented over the course of a week?

Even though the online news sources majored on spreading news about election votes and candidates, they still reported the wellbeing of citizens during the election period. On November 5th, CNN reported how coronavirus cases had increased by 115,000 (Yeung et al.). On the same day, Aljazeera reported on how Indians in Kamala Harris’s ancestral home conducted prayers for her and publicly showed their support. This reveals similarities between the media outlets where they increased their relevance to readers. Analysis of the BBC news further revealed their coverage of how women celebrated the victory of Kamala Harris. There were days when the BBC reported on how coronavirus did not deter people from voting in person. From this point of view, I was able to understand the online sources provided holistic coverage of societal issues so that readers would be accurately informed.

Weaknesses of the Outlets and Recommendations

The main weakness that I noted was that the news sources were mainly focused on reporting about the elections and issues surroundings the elections. The main information seen once I clicked on the sources’ link was election news. The websites were covered with big pictures and content concerning elections. There were also banners and numerous links that increased attention on election news coverage.

To surmise, it is important to analyse media outlets so that you can find the most suitable content for any topic. Media outlets have hundreds of employees ranging from camera men, field reports, analysts and editors. This means news goes through the scrutiny of many professional individuals before it gets delivered to the public. As such, it is important to gather information from different media outlets on the same topic in order to find accurate and verifiable information.

Works Cited

Breuninger, Kevin, and Hannah Miao. "President Trump Projected To Win Ohio’s 18 Electoral Votes". CNBC, 2020, https://www.cnbc.com/2020/11/03/ohio-election-results-2020.html. Accessed 11 Nov 2020.

"Harris’s ancestral village in India hopeful as Biden leads count". Aljazeera, 2020, https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2020/11/5/harriss-ancestral-village-in-india-hopeful-as-biden-leads-count.

"US Election 2020: Sarah Mcbride To Be First Trans State Senator". BBC News, 2020, https://www.bbc.com/news/election-us-2020-54806677. Accessed 11 Nov 2020.

Yeung, Jessie et al. "US Records More Than 100,000 New Coronavirus Cases In A Single Day For The First Time". CNN, 2020, https://edition.cnn.com/world/live-news/coronavirus-pandemic-11-05-20-intl/h_992046d594602b8d3ef9536a3baf022e. Accessed 11 Nov 2020.

oct-13/Nouf_Almutairi.docx

FAMILY REPSRESENTATION 2

Family Representation

Students Name:

Running head: FAMILY REPSRESENTATION 1

University Affiliation:

Above is an image of the late Bryant Kobe who was a basketball superstar. The image was posted on his social media with one main aim of convening people that despite all the work that they have family time is the best. This is because Bryant is a basketball superstar who is very famous with a lot of money and yet all that is not enough. He appreciates family time. More to this the picture was also trying to persuade people to love their children equally despite their gender, all children deserve equal love. This is demonstrated by the fact that he is all smiles and yet he has a family made up of girls only. The image also convinces the user that family time is the best and that is the reason why all the people in the image have very bright smiles on their faces. The rhetorical pathos used in this case is that Bryant is pathos that tries to demonstrate that she gives equal amount of love to children despite their gender, Bryant is standing along with four girls, and he still keeps his smile showing how happy they make him. Some people think that families should be made up of both genders to be happy but the image convinces the viewer otherwise.

References

Bennett, P. N., Bonner, A., Andrew, J., Nandkumar, J., & Au, C. (2013). Using images to communicate the hidden struggles of life on dialysis. Journal of Communication in Healthcare6(1), 12-21.

Der Derian, J. (2005). Imaging terror: Logos, pathos and ethos. Third World Quarterly26(1), 23-37.

oct-13/question-nouf-oct-12.jpeg

oct-22/Denise's Rough Draft.pdf

1DNiyomugeni

Denise Niyomugeni

Dair Arnold

ENG 1201.215

13 October 2020

Summertime City

Many people do not realize the benefits of teaching and letting our children socialize at a

young age. Kadir Nelson photograph was uploaded on December 18th,2019 on The New Yorker

Magazine Cover called, “Summertime City.” I believe the overall argument and his purpose of

this image are to show people especially parents the happiness of children when they spend time

outside of their apartment and play with other kids.

The rhetorical appeals that operate in this painting is pathos because there are more than

seven kids in this photograph playing in the back of their apartment and 95% of those children

have a smile on their face which indicate their emotion. This means that most kids love playing

outside with others instead of staying inside of their homes. I would like my readers to see

positive outcomes toward children when they spend time playing outdoors with other children as

an important part of a child’s life. Interacting with other children impacts them in several ways:

provides good mental exercise, promotes personal development, and develops social skills.

Specifically, I can relate to this cover because of my background. I was born and raised in a

village called Gihembe Refugee Camp, where I and the kids in my village would spend most of

our free time playing together. I consider myself as being a lucky person to have grown up in a

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generation where playing outdoors was a regular occurrence, where boys and girls played

together in mixed ability and mixed age groups.

I have nieces and nephews here in America, and I wanted to continue the great experiences that

I had as child by encouraging them to play outdoors with other children instead of letting them

stay indoors. Nelson’s painting shows how happy children are when they are outdoors and

playing with each other. It is exactly the same reaction my nieces and nephews get when I tell

them that we’re going to play outside. My argument for this paper is to support parents to help

them feel confidents about letting their children play together outside. Once they understand the

benefits, I feel confident they will agree.

Finally, it may be concluded that the purpose of the image is to show the happiness kids

get when they get out of their house and spend time with other kids playing outside.

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Work Cited

Kadir Nelson, “With Kids Around an Open Hydrant.” The New Yorker. 18 December 2019.

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Student Name

Date

Feedback to Denise Niyomugeni: “Summertime City”

Q1: The introduction draws any reader's attention to read on.

Q2: Yes, the introduction has highlighted the context of the image in detail.

Q3: I believe that you should have articulated the argument of the image as; the rising temperatures in the neighborhood draw the attention of children and adults towards the ice-cold water.

Q4: The thesis statement is not stated clearly. According to the peer, the image is persuasive, articulates pathos to persuade readers and mentions children smiling that takes the reader back to the image.

Q5: The writer identifies parents as the audience of the image to encourage them to allow children to play outside with other kids. It is not organized in a different paragraph.

Q6: All the topic sentences are related to the thesis statement even though the thesis statement is weak and unclear. There is unity in the paragraphs to support the idea of the thesis.

Q7: The text presented on the image is the name of the magazine that published the image.

Q8: The rhetorical appeals identified by the peer are pathos. The peer provided readers with evidence of the smiles the children had on their faces to express emotions of happiness (Kadir, 2019). The photographer aims to persuade the audience to allow children to interact with one another.

Q9: I feel that the writer should have provided more details on the benefits of children spending time together in the neighborhoods to support the claim that parents should let their children play outside (Kadir, 2019).

Q10: The thesis and the concluding paragraph is a repetition. The concluding paragraph should not restate the thesis statement; rather, the conclusion should reflect what has been learned.

Q11: The sentences in the essay are clear.

Q12: The most interesting part of your essay is the personal narrative you included to persuade the readers.

Q13: Overall improvements include a clear thesis statement, topic sentences that support the thesis and a concluding paragraph that does not repeat the thesis.

Q14: The image was not included in the essay. The works cited are presented on a different page.

Q15: The rhetorical strategies that I would deploy from my classmate include narration, where the readers are provided with background and context for the arguments. A personal testimony provides the readers with an opportunity to relate. The argument by testimony can be used in communication to provide visual analysis to readers.

References

Kadir, N. (18 December 2019). “With Kids around an Open Hydrant.” The New Yorker.

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Q1: The introduction draws any reader's attention to read on.

Q2: Yes, the introduction has highlighted the context of the image in detail.

Q3: I believe that you should have articulated the argument of the image as; the

rising temperatures in the neighborhood draw the attention of children and

adults towards the ice-cold water.

Q4: The thesis statement is not stated clearly. According to the peer, the image

is persuasive, articulates pathos to persuade readers and mentions children

smiling that takes the reader back to the image.

Q5: The writer identi�es parents as the audience of the image to encourage

them to allow children to play outside with other kids. It is not organized in a

different paragraph.

Q6: All the topic sentences are related to the thesis statement even though the

thesis statement is weak and unclear. There is unity in the paragraphs to

support the idea of the thesis.

Q7: The text presented on the image is the name of the magazine that

published the image.

Q8: The rhetorical appeals identi�ed by the peer are pathos. The peer provided

readers with evidence of the smiles the children had on their faces to express

emotions of happiness (Kadir, 2019). The photographer aims to persuade the

audience to allow children to interact with one another.

Q9: I feel that the writer should have provided more details on the bene�ts of

children spending time together in the neighborhoods to support the claim that

parents should let their children play outside (Kadir, 2019).

Q10: The thesis and the concluding paragraph is a repetition. The concluding

paragraph should not restate the thesis statement; rather, the conclusion

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should re�ect what has been learned.

Q11: The sentences in the essay are clear.

Q12: The most interesting part of your essay is the personal narrative you

included to persuade the readers.

Q13: Overall improvements include a clear thesis statement, topic sentences

that support the thesis and a concluding paragraph that does not repeat the

thesis.

Q14: The image was not included in the essay. The works cited are presented on

a different page.

Q15: The rhetorical strategies that I would deploy from my classmate include

narration, where the readers are provided with background and context for the

arguments. A personal testimony provides the readers with an opportunity to

relate. The argument by testimony can be used in communication to provide

visual analysis to readers.

References

Kadir, N. (18 December 2019). "With Kids around an Open Hydrant." The New

Yorker.

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oct-22/Peer Feedback Questions for the Visual Analysis - Essay #2.docx

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the introduction draw your attention and make you want to read on? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

2. In the first couple of sentences of the introduction, does your classmate identify the genre and context of the image (where and when it was published; what was happening in the world at the time of publication; who the artist or graphic designer is)? If not, please help your classmate add this information.

3. Does your classmate make a claim about the image in terms of what the image is presenting as its argument? If this isn’t clearly articulated, please provide detailed suggestions for revising this important piece of information.

4. Is your classmate’s thesis clearly stated? In other words, do you know the focus of the writer’s response to the image? Does he/she find the image to be effective/persuasive? Does the writer clearly and carefully articulate how the image works to persuade? Make sure this articulation is detailed and takes the reader back to the image again and again.

5. Does the writer discuss the audience of the image and give reasons and examples as support? Is this organized into a paragraph with a clear topic sentence?

6. Do all the topic sentences relate to the thesis statement? Mark any that don’t and write the reason that they don’t. What you are doing here is helping your classmate write a unified, cohesive essay.

7. If there is text in or with the image, does the writer address the language used and analyze their effect on the overall argument presented by the image?

8. Are the rhetorical appeals in the image identified by your classmate? Are there symbolic (historical, cultural, political, and/or religious, for example) elements that the writer can discuss to clarify the appeal to the viewer?

9. Is there enough explanation in each paragraph for you to understand the point that your classmate is making? If not, indicate where more explanation is needed.

10. Compare the thesis and the concluding paragraph. Can you see a logical connection between the two and not just a repetition of information? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

11. Underline any sentences that are unclear and need to be revised for clarity.

12. What is the most interesting part of the essay?

13. Do you have any overall suggestions for improvement? Please be specific.

14. Has your classmate included the image in his/her essay (as fig.1), referred to it throughout, and included its MLA citation on a separated Works Cited page?

15. What techniques or strategies does your classmate use to communicate his/her argument clearly and fairly that you would like to try in your own Visual Analysis?

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Denise's Rough Draft.pdf

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Denise Niyomugeni

Dair Arnold

ENG 1201.215

13 October 2020

Summertime City

Many people do not realize the benefits of teaching and letting our children socialize at a

young age. Kadir Nelson photograph was uploaded on December 18th,2019 on The New Yorker

Magazine Cover called, “Summertime City.” I believe the overall argument and his purpose of

this image are to show people especially parents the happiness of children when they spend time

outside of their apartment and play with other kids.

The rhetorical appeals that operate in this painting is pathos because there are more than

seven kids in this photograph playing in the back of their apartment and 95% of those children

have a smile on their face which indicate their emotion. This means that most kids love playing

outside with others instead of staying inside of their homes. I would like my readers to see

positive outcomes toward children when they spend time playing outdoors with other children as

an important part of a child’s life. Interacting with other children impacts them in several ways:

provides good mental exercise, promotes personal development, and develops social skills.

Specifically, I can relate to this cover because of my background. I was born and raised in a

village called Gihembe Refugee Camp, where I and the kids in my village would spend most of

our free time playing together. I consider myself as being a lucky person to have grown up in a

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generation where playing outdoors was a regular occurrence, where boys and girls played

together in mixed ability and mixed age groups.

I have nieces and nephews here in America, and I wanted to continue the great experiences that

I had as child by encouraging them to play outdoors with other children instead of letting them

stay indoors. Nelson’s painting shows how happy children are when they are outdoors and

playing with each other. It is exactly the same reaction my nieces and nephews get when I tell

them that we’re going to play outside. My argument for this paper is to support parents to help

them feel confidents about letting their children play together outside. Once they understand the

benefits, I feel confident they will agree.

Finally, it may be concluded that the purpose of the image is to show the happiness kids

get when they get out of their house and spend time with other kids playing outside.

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Work Cited

Kadir Nelson, “With Kids Around an Open Hydrant.” The New Yorker. 18 December 2019.

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Peer Feedback Questions for the Visual Analysis - Essay #2.docx

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the introduction draw your attention and make you want to read on? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

2. In the first couple of sentences of the introduction, does your classmate identify the genre and context of the image (where and when it was published; what was happening in the world at the time of publication; who the artist or graphic designer is)? If not, please help your classmate add this information.

3. Does your classmate make a claim about the image in terms of what the image is presenting as its argument? If this isn’t clearly articulated, please provide detailed suggestions for revising this important piece of information.

4. Is your classmate’s thesis clearly stated? In other words, do you know the focus of the writer’s response to the image? Does he/she find the image to be effective/persuasive? Does the writer clearly and carefully articulate how the image works to persuade? Make sure this articulation is detailed and takes the reader back to the image again and again.

5. Does the writer discuss the audience of the image and give reasons and examples as support? Is this organized into a paragraph with a clear topic sentence?

6. Do all the topic sentences relate to the thesis statement? Mark any that don’t and write the reason that they don’t. What you are doing here is helping your classmate write a unified, cohesive essay.

7. If there is text in or with the image, does the writer address the language used and analyze their effect on the overall argument presented by the image?

8. Are the rhetorical appeals in the image identified by your classmate? Are there symbolic (historical, cultural, political, and/or religious, for example) elements that the writer can discuss to clarify the appeal to the viewer?

9. Is there enough explanation in each paragraph for you to understand the point that your classmate is making? If not, indicate where more explanation is needed.

10. Compare the thesis and the concluding paragraph. Can you see a logical connection between the two and not just a repetition of information? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

11. Underline any sentences that are unclear and need to be revised for clarity.

12. What is the most interesting part of the essay?

13. Do you have any overall suggestions for improvement? Please be specific.

14. Has your classmate included the image in his/her essay (as fig.1), referred to it throughout, and included its MLA citation on a separated Works Cited page?

15. What techniques or strategies does your classmate use to communicate his/her argument clearly and fairly that you would like to try in your own Visual Analysis?

oct-27/Access and Verification of News Sources.docx

Running head: ACCESS AND VERIFICATION OF NEWS SOURCES 1

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Access and Verification of News Sources

Student Name

Date

Access and Verification of News Sources

I am a cautious news consumer and for that reason, I rely on various news sources. I have customized my phone to include news from particular sources such as BBC, Aljazeera, CNN, and the New York Times. I believe that the above-mentioned sources are reliable and up-to-date. The international news broadcasters such as CNN and BBC have a huge following and for that reason have experienced journalists who share up to date and relevant news. I also sit down and watch local news whenever I have the time. The local news complements the national and international news I have received on my phone. Furthermore, I watch and discuss news content with my parents as much as possible. Through news discussions, it is possible to decipher what is true and what is not (Cooke, 2018). Also, one gets to have different opinions as regards news content. I have also contributed to the creation of news sharing on social media sites. I, however, am sensitive and aware of what I share. I only share confirmed news as opposed to up-hazard sharing. According to Duffy, Tandoc, and Ling (2019), the sharing of unconfirmed news often leads to propaganda.

References

Cooke, N. A. (2018). Fake news and alternative facts: Information literacy in a post-truth era. American Library Association.

Duffy, A., Tandoc, E., & Ling, R. (2019). Too good to be true, too good not to share: the social utility of fake news. Information, Communication & Society, 1-15. Retrieved from https://doi.org/10.1080/1369118X.2019.1623904

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Informal Writing #7 The modern information landscape is flooded with thousands of news and “news-like” sources. The sheer volume of these sources presents a unique challenge to each one of us being news literate ourselves. To be truly news literate today, it is no longer sufficient to be familiar with just a handful of news sources you trust solely based on their reputations. Nor is it sufficient to rely on a handful of shortcuts or “tips and tricks” to determine what to trust. Today’s news literacy requires being able to evaluate the unfamiliar. It requires acquiring, developing, and continuously practicing a series of ever-evolving information evaluation skills. To get us started on this process together, I’d like you to spend some time reflecting in a paragraph or two on the following question: What type of news consumer are you? I know this is open ended and will make some of you nervous! There’s no wrong answer – just really think critically about your habits as a consumer of information. Do you sit down and watch the nightly news with your parents each evening? Do you discuss news at the dinner table? Do you receive most of your news on your cell phone? Have you customized your home page to include news from particular sources? Have you contributed to the creation of news via postings on social media sites? You have the first 20 minutes of class to work on this assignment. When you finish, please submit it to the Dropbox. If you need more time, please submit this to the appropriate Dropbox (Submit Informal Writing #7 HERE) by midnight tonight.

oct-28/work+peer-feedback.zip

Denise's Feedback for Nouf.pdf

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name: Nouf Almutairi

Essay’s Title: Visual Text Analysis

Peer Reviewer’s Name: Denise Niyomugeni

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the introduction draw your attention and make you want to read on? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

 After you provided the date image were published, it would sound better if you would add something interesting about that art to draw attention before explaining the main purpose of the image.

2. In the first couple of sentences of the introduction, does your classmate identify the genre and context of the image (where and when it was published; what was happening in the world at the time of publication; who the artist or graphic designer is)? If not, please help your classmate add this information.

 She identified the genre and context of the image such as when, where and who published not only that but she provided the purpose of the image. “meant to communicate the theme of nurture.” However is would be better if she tells us why that was important or why people would care at the time that image were published.

3. Does your classmate make a claim about the image in terms of what the image is presenting as its argument? If this isn’t clearly articulated, please provide detailed suggestions for revising this important piece of information.

 Yes she made a claim about the image in term of what the image is presenting as its argument.

4. Is your classmate’s thesis clearly stated? In other words, do you know the focus of the writer’s response to the image? Does he/she find the image to be effective/persuasive? Does the writer clearly and carefully articulate how the image works to persuade? Make sure this articulation is detailed and takes the reader back to the image again and again.

 At the end of the introduction I am having trouble with figure out which one is your thesis. After you said “The artist has also used shape to achieve balance (Williams, 66). For example, the bottom part of the woman is wider than the top. Shape also helps us to view the picture as real.” It would be better to provide the hypothesis that would give us an idea of what next paragraph or you overall essay.

5. Does the writer discuss the audience of the image and give reasons and examples as support? Is this organized into a paragraph with a clear topic sentence?

 Definitely, you discussed the audience of the image very well and give reasons and example as support.

6. Do all the topic sentences relate to the thesis statement? Mark any that don’t and write the reason that they don’t. What you are doing here is helping your classmate write a unified, cohesive essay.

 As I read whole essay I think she did great with staying on topic and provide more information relate to the thesis statement except that that she did not lay out thesis in introduction

7. If there is text in or with the image, does the writer address the language used and analyze their effect on the overall argument presented by the image?

 Definitely, the writer addressed the language used and analyze their effect on the overall argument presented by the image.

8. Are the rhetorical appeals in the image identified by your classmate? Are there symbolic (historical, cultural, political, and/or religious, for example) elements that the writer can discuss to clarify the appeal to the viewer?

 Yes there are rhetorical appeals in the image that she identified such as pathos, logic and ethos for example, she explain that anyone that sees the image would feel some warmth inside and see how motherhood is beautiful which indicate pathos not only that but she also explain that how they use logos ins showing the image of the women flowers and child holding flower. “It means that we have to nurture what those who will come after us will enjoy, which is just about the rule of life. These rhetorical appeals enable the audience to better understand the image and increase the author's persuasiveness in giving her argument.”

9. Is there enough explanation in each paragraph for you to understand the point that your classmate is making? If not, indicate where more explanation is needed.

 There is enough explanation in each paragraph for to understand the point that she is making.

10. Compare the thesis and the concluding paragraph. Can you see a logical connection between the two and not just a repetition of information? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

 You did great, I can see a logical connection between thesis and the concluding paragraph clearly and understandable with not just repeating information.

11. Underline any sentences that are unclear and need to be revised for clarity.

 All sentences were clear.

12. What is the most interesting part of the essay?

 I think the entire essay is very interesting especially when you were talking about how the image depicts the picture of a woman with her child. which means that the woman is nurturing the child. Also, the woman is watering the flowers, which also means that she is nurturing the flowers. The child is holding a flower, which can be translated to mean that we nurture so that others can enjoy our work's fruits. This is extremely strong message.

13. Do you have any overall suggestions for improvement? Please be specific.

 Beside providing more information in introduction for overall essay I think you did great job.

14. Has your classmate included the image in his/her essay (as fig.1), referred to it throughout, and included its MLA citation on a separated Works Cited page?

 Yes she included the image in the first page of her essay and MLA citation (Work Cited) on separated paper. However on right corner of the pages where it says page number you should put first initial and you lastname instead of ( surname 1)

15. What techniques or strategies does your classmate use to communicate his/her argument clearly and fairly that you would like to try in your own Visual Analysis?

 After reading entire essay I think the strategies my classmate used to communicate her argument was to try to explain her main arguments and provides examples to make the essay clearly and fairly that I would like to try in my own visual analysis.

Visualtextanalysis-3.docx

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Surname 1

Name: Nouf Almutairi

Instructor: Arnold Dair

Course: ENG -1201-R07

Date: 10.12.2020

Visual text analysis

C:\Users\hp\Documents\My Shapes\CoverStory-STORY_loveis-fiction.jpg

Date accessed: 14/10/2020

This is an image by Loveis Wise, which appeared on the New Yorker cover on the 4th and 11th of June 208. The image was meant to communicate the theme of nurture. There are various elements of art that we can see from this image. One of these is line. The artist has used line to make the picture look real (Williams, 66). Even though there is no physical distance in the picture, we can perceive, for example, that there is a distance between the woman and the flowers in front of her. The artist has also used shape to achieve balance (Williams, 66). For example, the bottom part of the woman is wider than the top. Shape also helps us to view the picture as real.

There is the use of color by the artist. Apart from aesthetics, it helps us identify the various objects in the image (Williams, 67). We can, for example, tell that flowers, underground vegetation, and people, among others. The artist has also utilized the element of space in the image. There is an unpainted section in the image, which helps to bring about the element of space. Lastly, the artist uses texture, which is brought out by how the artist uses color in the image (Williams, 67). For example, we can tell that the texture of the woman's skin is different from that of her hair.

The overall argument and purpose of this image are to enhance the theme of nurture. The image is suitable for a general audience as the theme of nurture is a general topic among many. The image depicts the picture of a woman with her child. This means that the woman is nurturing the child. Also, the woman is watering the flowers, which also means that she is nurturing the flowers. The child is holding a flower, which can be translated to mean that we nurture so that others can enjoy our work's fruits. This is a very strong message.

We can tell that the artist uses rhetorical appeals to bring out the visual argument. In appealing to ethos, the artist is renowned for her many images, which usually communicate love and oneness. The artist uses pathos greatly to bring out the argument. Motherhood is beautiful, and anyone who would see this would feel some warmth inside. She also uses logos in showing the image of a woman watering flowers and a child holding a flower. It means that we have to nurture what those who will come after us will enjoy, which is just about the rule of life. These rhetorical appeals enable the audience to better understand the image and increase the author's persuasiveness in giving her argument.

The visual and verbal cues in this image work together to bring out the argument of the artist. The image is titled 'nurture'. The visual work comes in to emphasize this theme. It shows the image of a woman with a child and the woman watering a flower, both of which illustrate nurture. By showing the image of a child holding a flower, the visual emphasizes the author's argument that we have to nurture for the sake of ourselves and others. In this case, the context is the importance of nurturing, and it makes the image more impactful.

In reading this analysis, I would like the reader to think about the elements of art and how they have been used by the author to bring out meaning in the image. I would also want them to think about the argument that the artist was trying to pass across in her image. The image's theme is clearly indicated (nurture), but what does the artist want us to learn about nurture? The unique perspective of this image is how the author has used it to hide meaning to engage the audience's mind. It communicates several things in one picture, including what nurture is and its importance. My argument for this paper is that by nurturing, we give our future generations something to enjoy.

Works Cited

Williams, Wendy R. "Attending to the visual aspects of visual storytelling: using art and design concepts to interpret and compose narratives with images." Journal of Visual Literacy 38.1-2 (2019): 66-82. Retrieved from https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1051144X.2019.1569832

Wise, Loveis. “Nurture” (2018). Retrieved from https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.newyorker.com%2Fculture%2Fcover-story%2Fcover-story-2018-06-04&psig=AOvVaw1-gwVTR3XJEYxzlAylG5vG&ust=1602769590253000&source=images&cd=vfe&ved=0CAIQjRxqFwoTCNjY27ChtewCFQAAAAAdAAAAABAD

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oct-28/work+peer-feedback/Denise's Feedback for Nouf.pdf

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name: Nouf Almutairi

Essay’s Title: Visual Text Analysis

Peer Reviewer’s Name: Denise Niyomugeni

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does the introduction draw your attention and make you want to read on? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

 After you provided the date image were published, it would sound better if you would add something interesting about that art to draw attention before explaining the main purpose of the image.

2. In the first couple of sentences of the introduction, does your classmate identify the genre and context of the image (where and when it was published; what was happening in the world at the time of publication; who the artist or graphic designer is)? If not, please help your classmate add this information.

 She identified the genre and context of the image such as when, where and who published not only that but she provided the purpose of the image. “meant to communicate the theme of nurture.” However is would be better if she tells us why that was important or why people would care at the time that image were published.

3. Does your classmate make a claim about the image in terms of what the image is presenting as its argument? If this isn’t clearly articulated, please provide detailed suggestions for revising this important piece of information.

 Yes she made a claim about the image in term of what the image is presenting as its argument.

4. Is your classmate’s thesis clearly stated? In other words, do you know the focus of the writer’s response to the image? Does he/she find the image to be effective/persuasive? Does the writer clearly and carefully articulate how the image works to persuade? Make sure this articulation is detailed and takes the reader back to the image again and again.

 At the end of the introduction I am having trouble with figure out which one is your thesis. After you said “The artist has also used shape to achieve balance (Williams, 66). For example, the bottom part of the woman is wider than the top. Shape also helps us to view the picture as real.” It would be better to provide the hypothesis that would give us an idea of what next paragraph or you overall essay.

5. Does the writer discuss the audience of the image and give reasons and examples as support? Is this organized into a paragraph with a clear topic sentence?

 Definitely, you discussed the audience of the image very well and give reasons and example as support.

6. Do all the topic sentences relate to the thesis statement? Mark any that don’t and write the reason that they don’t. What you are doing here is helping your classmate write a unified, cohesive essay.

 As I read whole essay I think she did great with staying on topic and provide more information relate to the thesis statement except that that she did not lay out thesis in introduction

7. If there is text in or with the image, does the writer address the language used and analyze their effect on the overall argument presented by the image?

 Definitely, the writer addressed the language used and analyze their effect on the overall argument presented by the image.

8. Are the rhetorical appeals in the image identified by your classmate? Are there symbolic (historical, cultural, political, and/or religious, for example) elements that the writer can discuss to clarify the appeal to the viewer?

 Yes there are rhetorical appeals in the image that she identified such as pathos, logic and ethos for example, she explain that anyone that sees the image would feel some warmth inside and see how motherhood is beautiful which indicate pathos not only that but she also explain that how they use logos ins showing the image of the women flowers and child holding flower. “It means that we have to nurture what those who will come after us will enjoy, which is just about the rule of life. These rhetorical appeals enable the audience to better understand the image and increase the author's persuasiveness in giving her argument.”

9. Is there enough explanation in each paragraph for you to understand the point that your classmate is making? If not, indicate where more explanation is needed.

 There is enough explanation in each paragraph for to understand the point that she is making.

10. Compare the thesis and the concluding paragraph. Can you see a logical connection between the two and not just a repetition of information? If not, make suggestions for improvement.

 You did great, I can see a logical connection between thesis and the concluding paragraph clearly and understandable with not just repeating information.

11. Underline any sentences that are unclear and need to be revised for clarity.

 All sentences were clear.

12. What is the most interesting part of the essay?

 I think the entire essay is very interesting especially when you were talking about how the image depicts the picture of a woman with her child. which means that the woman is nurturing the child. Also, the woman is watering the flowers, which also means that she is nurturing the flowers. The child is holding a flower, which can be translated to mean that we nurture so that others can enjoy our work's fruits. This is extremely strong message.

13. Do you have any overall suggestions for improvement? Please be specific.

 Beside providing more information in introduction for overall essay I think you did great job.

14. Has your classmate included the image in his/her essay (as fig.1), referred to it throughout, and included its MLA citation on a separated Works Cited page?

 Yes she included the image in the first page of her essay and MLA citation (Work Cited) on separated paper. However on right corner of the pages where it says page number you should put first initial and you lastname instead of ( surname 1)

15. What techniques or strategies does your classmate use to communicate his/her argument clearly and fairly that you would like to try in your own Visual Analysis?

 After reading entire essay I think the strategies my classmate used to communicate her argument was to try to explain her main arguments and provides examples to make the essay clearly and fairly that I would like to try in my own visual analysis.

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N. Almutairi

Name: Nouf Almutairi

Instructor: Arnold Dair

Course: ENG -1201-R07

Date: 10.12.2020

Visual Text Analysis

C:\Users\hp\Documents\My Shapes\CoverStory-STORY_loveis-fiction.jpg

Date accessed: 14/10/2020

This is an image by Loveis Wise, which appeared on the New Yorker cover on the 4th and 11th of June 2018. The image is of a woman watering flowers while carrying an infant. Loveis Wise’s combination of colors in the flowers, the clothes and the jug is what makes the image attractive and eye catching. The image was meant to communicate the theme of nurture; a theme that comes from her mother’s nurturing habit of the garden that she wanted to pass down to the siblings. There are various elements of art that we can see from this image. One of these is line. The artist has used line to make the picture look real (Williams, 66). Even though there is no physical distance in the picture, we can perceive, for example, that there is a distance between the woman and the flowers in front of her. The artist has also used shape to achieve balance (Williams, 66). For example, the bottom part of the woman is wider than the top. Shape also helps us to view the picture as real. How the elements are arranged and the activities in the image depict nurture as the theme.

There is the use of color by the artist. Apart from aesthetics, it helps us identify the various objects in the image (Williams, 67). We can, for example, tell that flowers, underground vegetation, and people, among others. The artist has also utilized the element of space in the image. There is an unpainted section in the image, which helps to bring about the element of space. Lastly, the artist uses texture, which is brought out by how the artist uses color in the image (Williams, 67). For example, we can tell that the texture of the woman's skin is different from that of her hair.

The overall argument and purpose of this image are to enhance the theme of nurture. The image is suitable for a general audience as the theme of nurture is a general topic among many. The image depicts the picture of a woman with her child. This means that the woman is nurturing the child. Also, the woman is watering the flowers, which also means that she is nurturing the flowers. The child is holding a flower, which can be translated to mean that we nurture so that others can enjoy our work's fruits. This is a very strong message.

We can tell that the artist uses rhetorical appeals to bring out the visual argument. In appealing to ethos, the artist is renowned for her many images, which usually communicate love and oneness. The artist uses pathos greatly to bring out the argument. Motherhood is beautiful, and anyone who would see this would feel some warmth inside. She also uses logos in showing the image of a woman watering flowers and a child holding a flower. It means that we have to nurture what those who will come after us will enjoy, which is just about the rule of life. These rhetorical appeals enable the audience to better understand the image and increase the author's persuasiveness in giving her argument.

The visual and verbal cues in this image work together to bring out the argument of the artist. The image is titled 'nurture'. The visual work comes in to emphasize this theme. It shows the image of a woman with a child and the woman watering a flower, both of which illustrate nurture. By showing the image of a child holding a flower, the visual emphasizes the author's argument that we have to nurture for the sake of ourselves and others. In this case, the context is the importance of nurturing, and it makes the image more impactful.

In reading this analysis, I would like the reader to think about the elements of art and how they have been used by the author to bring out meaning in the image. I would also want them to think about the argument that the artist was trying to pass across in her image. The image's theme is clearly indicated (nurture), but what does the artist want us to learn about nurture? The unique perspective of this image is how the author has used it to hide meaning to engage the audience's mind. It communicates several things in one picture, including what nurture is and its importance. My argument for this paper is that by nurturing, we give our future generations something to enjoy.

Works Cited

Williams, Wendy R. "Attending to the visual aspects of visual storytelling: using art and design concepts to interpret and compose narratives with images." Journal of Visual Literacy 38.1-2 (2019): 66-82. Retrieved from https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1051144X.2019.1569832

Wise, Loveis. “Nurture” (2018). Retrieved from https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.newyorker.com%2Fculture%2Fcover-story%2Fcover-story-2018-06-04&psig=AOvVaw1-gwVTR3XJEYxzlAylG5vG&ust=1602769590253000&source=images&cd=vfe&ved=0CAIQjRxqFwoTCNjY27ChtewCFQAAAAAdAAAAABAD

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oct-28/work+peer-feedback/Visualtextanalysis-3.0.docx

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Surname 1

Name: Nouf Almutairi

Instructor: Arnold Dair

Course: ENG -1201-R07

Date: 10.12.2020

Visual text analysis

C:\Users\hp\Documents\My Shapes\CoverStory-STORY_loveis-fiction.jpg

Date accessed: 14/10/2020

This is an image by Loveis Wise, which appeared on the New Yorker cover on the 4th and 11th of June 208. The image was meant to communicate the theme of nurture. There are various elements of art that we can see from this image. One of these is line. The artist has used line to make the picture look real (Williams, 66). Even though there is no physical distance in the picture, we can perceive, for example, that there is a distance between the woman and the flowers in front of her. The artist has also used shape to achieve balance (Williams, 66). For example, the bottom part of the woman is wider than the top. Shape also helps us to view the picture as real.

There is the use of color by the artist. Apart from aesthetics, it helps us identify the various objects in the image (Williams, 67). We can, for example, tell that flowers, underground vegetation, and people, among others. The artist has also utilized the element of space in the image. There is an unpainted section in the image, which helps to bring about the element of space. Lastly, the artist uses texture, which is brought out by how the artist uses color in the image (Williams, 67). For example, we can tell that the texture of the woman's skin is different from that of her hair.

The overall argument and purpose of this image are to enhance the theme of nurture. The image is suitable for a general audience as the theme of nurture is a general topic among many. The image depicts the picture of a woman with her child. This means that the woman is nurturing the child. Also, the woman is watering the flowers, which also means that she is nurturing the flowers. The child is holding a flower, which can be translated to mean that we nurture so that others can enjoy our work's fruits. This is a very strong message.

We can tell that the artist uses rhetorical appeals to bring out the visual argument. In appealing to ethos, the artist is renowned for her many images, which usually communicate love and oneness. The artist uses pathos greatly to bring out the argument. Motherhood is beautiful, and anyone who would see this would feel some warmth inside. She also uses logos in showing the image of a woman watering flowers and a child holding a flower. It means that we have to nurture what those who will come after us will enjoy, which is just about the rule of life. These rhetorical appeals enable the audience to better understand the image and increase the author's persuasiveness in giving her argument.

The visual and verbal cues in this image work together to bring out the argument of the artist. The image is titled 'nurture'. The visual work comes in to emphasize this theme. It shows the image of a woman with a child and the woman watering a flower, both of which illustrate nurture. By showing the image of a child holding a flower, the visual emphasizes the author's argument that we have to nurture for the sake of ourselves and others. In this case, the context is the importance of nurturing, and it makes the image more impactful.

In reading this analysis, I would like the reader to think about the elements of art and how they have been used by the author to bring out meaning in the image. I would also want them to think about the argument that the artist was trying to pass across in her image. The image's theme is clearly indicated (nurture), but what does the artist want us to learn about nurture? The unique perspective of this image is how the author has used it to hide meaning to engage the audience's mind. It communicates several things in one picture, including what nurture is and its importance. My argument for this paper is that by nurturing, we give our future generations something to enjoy.

Works Cited

Williams, Wendy R. "Attending to the visual aspects of visual storytelling: using art and design concepts to interpret and compose narratives with images." Journal of Visual Literacy 38.1-2 (2019): 66-82. Retrieved from https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1051144X.2019.1569832

Wise, Loveis. “Nurture” (2018). Retrieved from https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.newyorker.com%2Fculture%2Fcover-story%2Fcover-story-2018-06-04&psig=AOvVaw1-gwVTR3XJEYxzlAylG5vG&ust=1602769590253000&source=images&cd=vfe&ved=0CAIQjRxqFwoTCNjY27ChtewCFQAAAAAdAAAAABAD

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sep_22/Peer Feedback Questions for the Summary and Critical Response - Essay.docx

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does your classmate include the title of the article, the author’s name, the title of the publication the article appears in, and the date of publication in the first and/or second sentence of paragraph one?

2. Does your classmate summarize the article’s main idea concisely and objectively? Are there any minor details from the original article that should not be included? Where can you suggest additional specific improvements for the summary section?

3. Identify your classmate’s thesis statement/overall argument about the article he/she is analyzing. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay?

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

5. In the analysis section, is your classmate’s voice the one you are hearing from most? In other words, are there places where your classmate is quoting from the text too much? If there are, please copy and paste one of those sections here and suggest a revision.

6. How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details and/or support would help most.

7. Are there paragraphs that seem less coherent or less convincing than others? If so, choose one and explain how it might be clarified and/or better supported.

8. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive, or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? What suggestions do you have to make the conclusion even better?

9. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmate’s thinking. Ignore any issues that don’t get in the way of your understanding.

10. Are there any issues with formatting? Has your classmate included a separate Works Cited page as his/her last page? Is the article in the correct MLA format? If not, practice writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn.

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

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Essay’s Title:

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English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name:

Essay’s Title:

Peer Reviewer’s Name:

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does your classmate include the title of the article, the author’s name, the title of the

publication the article appears in, and the date of publication in the first and/or second

sentence of paragraph one?

2. Does your classmate summarize the article’s main idea concisely and objectively? Are

there any minor details from the original article that should not be included? Where can

you suggest additional specific improvements for the summary section?

3. Identify your classmate’s thesis statement/overall argument about the article he/she is

analyzing. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in

the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might

narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay?

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to

support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make

the essay even more effective?

5. In the analysis section, is your classmate’s voice the one you are hearing from most? In

other words, are there places where your classmate is quoting from the text too much? If

there are, please copy and paste one of those sections here and suggest a revision.

6. How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding

or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading

and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details

and/or support would help most.

sep_22/Rough Draft by Devin Nolan.pdf

Devin Nolan

Dair Arnold

English 1201

9/20/20

Rough Draft

“For Whom the Tok Tiks”

The article “For Whom the Tok Tiks” is about the app of TikTok. I will be discussing

their involvement with the US government as well as how they are many people saying that it is

not good for people and their wellbeing. Why is it not good for the people and their wellbeing?

In the article they discuss how the US government does not like how the app is owned

completely by a Chinese company. The president, Trump, wants a US owned company to

purchase the app in order to let the app keep their availability in America. As of right now I

believe the company Oracle has purchased the app and it will be continuing in the United States.

The set date that the company had to be purchased by was actually today, September 15th. The

reason all of this was such a big commotion was because a Chinese company had all of the

information of the United States users of the app and our government did not like that all.

Although the article states that the government would rather a US company own the app

they also talk about how US citizens are skeptical of any government having the information of

the app such as the United States. The United States has had issues in the past with using the data

that other social media platforms to their advantage. “Look at all the

trouble Facebook, Instagram, Google, Twitter, and others have gotten into regarding their choke

hold on information and their questionable stewardship of its use.”

Tik Tok is not a good app for the people and might only get worse as time goes on.

“TikTok is going to be America’s problem in America, or America’s problem in China, or both.”

The article I read was “For Whom the Tok Tiks” I believe that the company will stay

around due to the fact that an American owned company purchased it. The concerns about the

US government are definingly real and I feel that more people should talk about it.

sep_22/Rough Draft by Jessenia Gosin.pdf

Rough Draft In his August 13, 2020 article for The Atlantic titled “The Wikipedia War That Shows How Ugly This Election Will Be”, Joshua Benton contends that…

 Harris is Joe Biden’s vice-presidential nominee  Controversy surrounding whether or not Kamala Harris is African American

I consider her to be an African American African American means many things and I feel as though Kamala Harris fits under that category

I think that the article was highly informative. The article stated several claims of the wiki users as well as their own claims. Research was provided to inform readers about the correct information regarding who Kamala Harris is. The article was pretty clear. It was easier to decipher the claims of the wiki users versus the facts that Benton provided about Harris. Examples of this includes … when wiki users criticized her for considering herself an African American. Wiki users disrespected Harris and referred to her as “Cuntala Harris”. The article made it a point to grant the proper information in order to correct the misinformed individuals who edited Kamala’s Wikipedia page. This article also openly discussed some of the backlash that Kamala received outside of the Wikipedia controversy. On Fox News Tucker Carlson, deliberately mispronounced Kamala’s name.

I consider Kamala Harris to be African American. There are many forms of being an African American. One way would be a person whose ancestors were from the continent of Africa. Another possibility is that an individual was born in Africa, then became a citizen of the United States of America, then they are considered an African American. This is because as a citizen of the U.S., you are an American. I feel as though the term African American is treated as if it is someone’s identity. A lot of the wiki users in the text brought up Kamala’s ethnicity, of being Jamaican & Indian and tried to associate it with race. You can also be African American if you are born to parents where one is African the other American. For Kamala, she is a citizen of the united states, and her father is of African descent. Her father being Jamaican, has roots that go back to Africa. The term African American to me, falls under both categories of Race and Ethnicity. “Wikipedia administrators and other senior editors have shed by the use of African American, noting the many years of news stories and official documents that have identified her as such. Wikipedia editing thrives on consensus, and amid all the debate, the consensus of editors was that a consensus had been reacted. (The word consensus currently appears 49 times in the discussion.)”. (Benton, The Atlantic).

I do believe the writer accomplished his purpose in writing the essay.

It is vital to understand that criticizing a woman is unacceptable. The fact that we live in a society that still is derogatory towards women, honestly just blows my mind. We have come so far as a society but at the same time it feels as if our leaps to move forward were just minor baby steps. Unfortunately, Kamala Harris was referred to as “Cuntala Harris” and people did not want to consider her to be African American. My question is to all those people is why does it matter?

Why does it bother you that Kamala considers herself to African American? Is it because you know she’s very powerful and confident, so you fear her potential as a Vice President? Why are attacking Harris and stating that she is ineligible to become a Vice President? Do you not want a woman to hold such a position of power?

sep_27/Feedback from D.pdf

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name: Nouf Almutairi

Essay’s Title: Critical Response

Peer Reviewer’s Name: Devin Nolan

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does your classmate include the title of the article, the author’s name, the title of the publication the article appears in, and the date of publication in the first and/or second sentence of paragraph one?

 The article name is in the first sentence but you will need to add the authors name as well as the date of the publication of the article.

2. Does your classmate summarize the article’s main idea concisely and objectively? Are there any minor details from the original article that should not be included? Where can you suggest additional specific improvements for the summary section?

 The main idea of the article is summarized. Although I have not read this article, I do not believe that there are any details that should have been left out of your draft.

3. Identify your classmate’s thesis statement/overall argument about the article he/she is analyzing. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay?

 “The current pandemic has unraveled many college football’s flaws” I think this is good to show what the article and you are trying to get across to the reader.

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make the essay even more effective?

 You have a good amount of in text citation to back up what you and the article are saying and it is well written.

5. In the analysis section, is your classmate’s voice the one you are hearing from most? In other words, are there places where your classmate is quoting from the text too much? If there are, please copy and paste one of those sections here and suggest a revision.

 You do talk a lot about what the author feels and talks about so you could add more of your beliefs and how certain things make you feel.

6. How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details and/or support would help most.

 The draft is together well just needing some finishing up with the works cited and more of how this makes you feel. Paragraphs flow fine and no trouble reading anywhere.

7. Are there paragraphs that seem less coherent or less convincing than others? If so, choose one and explain how it might be clarified and/or better supported.

 Honestly, I think that it is really well written.

8. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive, or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? What suggestions do you have to make the conclusion even better?

 I feel like you agree with the article in that there needs to be more guidelines regarding these players and what they should go through due to the worlds current state of covid.

9. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmate’s thinking. Ignore any issues that don’t get in the way of your understanding.

 Everything looks good you just need to change a few times where you meant to say to and only put a ‘t’ in the fifth and sixth paragraph. In the sixth you also put ‘d’ instead of do.

10. Are there any issues with formatting? Has your classmate included a separate Works Cited page as his/her last page? Is the article in the correct MLA format? If not, practice writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn.

 I do not see any issues at all with formatting you will just need to add a works cited page.

sep_27/Feedback from O.pdf

English 1201 / Peer Feedback Questions

Essay Writer's Name: Nouf Almutairi

Essay’s Title: College Football’s Great Unraveling Critical Response

Peer Reviewer’s Name: Oliver Kelly

Read through the paper completely before answering any of the following questions.

1. Does your classmate include the title of the article, the author’s name, the title of the

publication the article appears in, and the date of publication in the first and/or second

sentence of paragraph one? Nouf includes the title of the article but not the author, publication, or date of publication.

2. Does your classmate summarize the article’s main idea concisely and objectively? Are

there any minor details from the original article that should not be included? Where can

you suggest additional specific improvements for the summary section? The summary of the article begins by stating the article’s opinions, which I would not consider objective. Could you try saving the opinion for the second paragraph and introduce without opinions but rather facts?

3. Identify your classmate’s thesis statement/overall argument about the article he/she is

analyzing. Does this thesis give the reader any indication of the points to be covered in

the essay? Would the essay be improved if it did? Are there ways your classmate might

narrow his/her focus to improve the overall essay? The thesis of this essay is that college football is collapsing, Nouf does a good job of using plenty of evidence to support this claim.

4. In the analysis section, what kinds of textual evidence does your classmate include to

support his/her thesis? Are there places where additional textual evidence would make

the essay even more effective? Nouf uses quotes from the text and also a lot of information from the text. While with some pieces she explains what it is she is talking about, other pieces are a bit hard to follow if you don’t know much about the topic.

5. In the analysis section, is your classmate’s voice the one you are hearing from most? In

other words, are there places where your classmate is quoting from the text too much? If

there are, please copy and paste one of those sections here and suggest a revision. I don’t think so.

6. How does the draft hold together? Which paragraphs don't connect well with preceding

or subsequent ones? Make note of any places in the draft where you have trouble reading

and note whether a transition, clearer wording, more clarification. or additional details

and/or support would help most. I think that Nouf’s rough draft is good, there are a bit of things that need to be cleaned up such as simple typos, perhaps adding some more explaining to people who have not read the article.

7. Are there paragraphs that seem less coherent or less convincing than others? If so, choose

one and explain how it might be clarified and/or better supported. Personally, I do not know much about this topic. With that though I found what I learned from Nouf’s rough draft informative.

8. Does the paper conclude with a whimper or a shout? Is the conclusion merely repetitive,

or does it suggest new directions of thought or provide a call to action? What suggestions

do you have to make the conclusion even better? I would say that the article concluded with a shout about the problems happening in college football.

9. Note problems with sentence structure, grammar, word choice, and other mechanical

issues that make it difficult for you to follow your classmate’s thinking. Ignore any

issues that don’t get in the way of your understanding. Just a few typos, most of which didn’t interfere with my understanding.

10. Are there any issues with formatting? Has your classmate included a separate Works

Cited page as his/her last page? Is the article in the correct MLA format? If not, practice

writing the citation for your classmate, using the guidelines in eLearn. The rough draft does follow MLA format very well! The only piece I noticed was a lack of page numbers in the header but that’s an easy fix. Also, no works cited but that is also a simple fix.

sep_27/MY_Work_CRITICAL_RESPONSE.docx

Almutairi

Almutairi

CRITICAL RESPONSE

Nouf Almutairi

ENG 1201.113

Sep 15,2020

COLLEGE FOOTBALL’S GREAT UNRAVELING CRITICAL RESPONSE

According to the article "College Football's Great Unraveling," the author believes that the current pandemic has unraveled many college football’s flaws. She says that way before the coming of the coronavirus pandemic; college football has been wavering for a very long time. When the coronavirus hit the United States, the Big 10, a conference that comprises of the Midwest's major football, became the first one to fall by canceling its fall season, followed by the Pac-12, which represents significant programs on the West Coast. 

She says that despite these two conferences, The Big 10 and Pac-12 conferences canceling their football, the other three conferences continued with their football uninterrupted. Despite the two conferences giving valid reasons why they called off the game schedules, the two, just like the other three conferences, have the same concerns but handle the matter differently. The author continues to point at various flaws that are in college football. 

To start with, the author believes that top college football's decentralized chaos is one o the biggest issues. Hundreds of teams are organized in the same way as Power 5, while others do not align with these conferences. This means that no law guides college football, giving it a peculiar regionalism. She continues to state that some states do not even notice college football. 

According to the author, this decentralization has given the leaders of college football in maintaining a very dangerous status quo. There are many students who play for free in these games while their schools collect a lot of money at their expense. The schools and these conferences do not look at the safety and future health of these players, thus putting them in very big danger. " The most serious ramifications for college players relate to health and safety, a situation only exacerbated during the pandemic. They are not governed by occupational health and safety provisions, nor do they have employer-provided health insurance." (Mull, 2020)

On the other hand, the students continue playing hard with the hope of joining the national football league, but this does not materialize at the end, not the day. The leaders have literary done no effort t change the current system citing that NCAA adheres to the amateurism principle. This is the principle where the schools are prohibited from paying these players. These are some of the regulations that the author believes are hindering college football from progressing. 

Similarly, NCAA's principle of amateurism is also putting the students at a very big risk. For instance, according to t the author, with the opening of schools, the players are at a very great risk of contracting the coronavirus disease (Hart, 2019 pg 2). However, NCAA bars schools from giving the players any special treatment, such as restricting their access to bars and parties and special clearance to d online classes. They are therefore not given any kind of protection. The students also do not have any formal way of lobbying for fair treatments since they are considered amateurs. The status of the armature is a threat to the safety f the players and the viability of the college football. 

I agree with the author that the cancellation of college football is not the biggest issue. The biggest issue is that there is a big problem that needs to be discussed soberly about amateurism and greed in college football, making the games go crumbling. "The NCAA's role in modern football is primarily to regulate what athletes can do and receive while enrolled in school. It sets limits on the frequency and conditions of practice, and restricts improper benefits, including paychecks and cash bonuses." (Mull, 2020) Amateurism in college football is a very big issue. As the college sports continue growing, money becomes a byproduct of increased popularity. This means that the students become more like employees than students. 

The players' hard work and commitment benefit the schools and the many selfish leaders who plunder the resources. 

There is a dire need to ensure that the players' well being is taken care of, which includes taking good care of the players. Changes must be made to ensure that their full costs are taken care of. The players are not given an opportunity, and they do not have any role to play in making decisions regarding how the football should carry on. This is only left to the leaders who make important decisions citing NCAA as the guiding principle. The players have continued working hard, but the greedy football leaders reap their efforts. According to the author, "schools use  myriad accounting tricks  to make the legal argument that their athletic departments don't have much money on hand at all—among them, pouring the profits into facilities upgrades like  weight-room DJ booths  and  indoor waterfalls  in locker rooms." (Mull, 2020)

In conclusion, therefore, it is important the players also reap from their hard work. This can e doe y giving them a token of appreciation, which may e inform of giving them fair wagers just like the other employees in the school and providing them with expanded health benefits. This can only happen if the players are no longer seen as armatures. Therefore, this means that the NCAA armature principle is doing more harm than good to college football.

Work cited

Hart, Steven. "Amateurism, Player Compensation, and College Sports an Analysis of the Perceived Effects of a Free Market Model on the National Collegiate Athletic Association and Three Stakeholders of Division I Athletics." (2019). Retrieved from: https://diginole.lib.fsu.edu/islandora/object/fsu%3A722535/

Mull, A. College Football’s Great Unraveling: The pandemic is bringing the sport face-to-face with its deepest flaws. The Atlantic, 2020 retrieved from: https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2020/08/college-football-falling-apart/615277/?utm_source=atl&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=share

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English 1201

Essay #1 – Summary and Critical Response

The Purpose of this Writing Assignment

The Critical Response assignment is designed to give you an opportunity to:

· Practice thinking critically:

When you think critically, you do not simply accept ideas at face value. Instead, you question these ideas, analyzing them to understand them better. You also challenge their underlying assumptions and form your own judgments about them.

· Practice reading critically:

Reading critically does not mean arguing with every idea you encounter. What it does mean is commenting, questioning, and judging. As a critical reader, you do not simply accept that what you are reading is true or reasonable. Instead, you assess the accuracy of the facts in the text(s) you are reading, and you consider whether opinions are convincingly supported by evidence. You try to judge the appropriateness and reliability of the text(s), and you evaluate the scope and depth of the evidence and the relevance of that evidence to the topic. You also consider opposing arguments carefully, measuring them against the arguments developed by the writer. Finally, you watch out for possible bias in the text(s) you are reading – and you work hard to keep your own biases in check.

· Practice writing critically:

Before you can respond in writing to an argument, you need to be sure that you understand what the writer means to get across and that you have a sense of how the ideas are arranged – and why. You also need to consider how convincingly the writer conveys his or her position.

Begin by reading the argument carefully, annotating it and thinking about it as we’ve discussed in class. From here you should have a good idea about what the writer wants to communicate to readers as well as how successfully the argument makes its point.

Begin writing down your ideas and own responses, considering the evidence presented as you began to make your own reasoned conclusions. Keep in mind that the most common features of critical writing are:

· a clear and confident refusal to accept the conclusions of other writers without evaluating the arguments and evidence that they provide

· a balanced presentation of reasons why the conclusions of other writers may be accepted or may need to be treated with caution

· a clear presentation of your own evidence and argument, leading to your conclusion; and

· a recognition of the limitations in your own evidence, argument, and conclusion.

The Writing Task

In an approximately 3-5 – page Summary and Critical Response, summarize and analyze the ideas and arguments presented by just one of the essays that I have included in our eLearn shell. Then, express your personal reactions.

Begin by identifying the source and its author; then write a clear, concise summary of the writer’s position. Next, analyze the argument’s supporting points one by one, considering the strength of the evidence that is presented. Also, consider whether the writer addresses all significant opposing arguments and whether those arguments are refuted convincingly. Quote, paraphrase, and summarize the writer’s key points as you go along, being careful to do so accurately so that you do not misrepresent the writer’s ideas or distort them by using them out of context.

Identify arguments you find unconvincing, poorly supported, or irrelevant, or those arguments that you find well-supported, compelling, and effective. At the end of your response, sum up your assessment of the argument in a strong concluding statement that engages your reader one last time and keeps him/her thinking about your response for years to come. It could happen!

Include a final Works Cited page. Because this is a single-source essay, your Works Cited will include only the citation in MLA format for the essay you chose to analyze.

Formatting Instructions

· Final drafts must be typed in 12-point Times New Roman or Calibri font. The default setting in Microsoft Word is 11-point Calibri, so remember that you will always have to go in and change the font size when you begin to write something new.

· Make sure your essay double-spaced with one inch margins. The default margin setting is already at one inch. However, you must change the spacing above and below the line. Look again at the formatting of the student sample, or ask me if you have any questions. This is the first paper of the semester, so there are NO dumb questions, especially about formatting!

· Staple your final draft in the upper left-hand corner.

· Use only plain white paper.

· There is no separate title page, so in the upper left-hand corner of page one, you will type your name, my name (Dair Arnold), course number and section (ENG 1201.113) and the date (this is the date that you actually turn in the paper...so, if you turn the paper in late, or if you submit a revision of the paper later in the term, the date would reflect that new day).

· Use MLA format for citing sources. This applies to in-text parenthetical documentation and to Works Cited pages.

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https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2020/08/college-football-falling-apart/615277/?utm_source=atl&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=share

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Almutairi

Almutairi

CRITICAL RESPONSE

Nouf Almutairi

ENG 1201.113

Sep 15,2020

COLLEGE FOOTBALL’S GREAT UNRAVELING CRITICAL RESPONSE

According to the article "College Football's Great Unraveling," the author believes that the current pandemic has unraveled many college football’s flaws. She says that way before the coming of the coronavirus pandemic; college football has been wavering for a very long time. When the coronavirus hit the United States, the Big 10, a conference that comprises of the Midwest's major football, became the first one to fall by canceling its fall season, followed by the Pac-12, which represents significant programs on the West Coast. 

She says that despite these two conferences, The Big 10 and Pac-12 conferences canceling their football, the other three conferences continued with their football uninterrupted. Despite the two conferences giving valid reasons why they called off the game schedules, the two, just like the other three conferences, have the same concerns but handle the matter differently. The author continues to point at various flaws that are in college football. 

To start with, the author believes that top college football's decentralized chaos is one o the biggest issues. Hundreds of teams are organized in the same way as Power 5, while others do not align with these conferences. This means that no law guides college football, giving it a peculiar regionalism. She continues to state that some states do not even notice college football. 

According to the author, this decentralization has given the leaders of college football in maintaining a very dangerous status quo. There are many students who play for free in these games while their schools collect a lot of money at their expense. The schools and these conferences do not look at the safety and future health of these players, thus putting them in very big danger. " The most serious ramifications for college players relate to health and safety, a situation only exacerbated during the pandemic. They are not governed by occupational health and safety provisions, nor do they have employer-provided health insurance." (Mull, 2020)

On the other hand, the students continue playing hard with the hope of joining the national football league, but this does not materialize at the end, not the day. The leaders have literary done no effort t change the current system citing that NCAA adheres to the amateurism principle. This is the principle where the schools are prohibited from paying these players. These are some of the regulations that the author believes are hindering college football from progressing. 

Similarly, NCAA's principle of amateurism is also putting the students at a very big risk. For instance, according to t the author, with the opening of schools, the players are at a very great risk of contracting the coronavirus disease (Hart, 2019 pg 2). However, NCAA bars schools from giving the players any special treatment, such as restricting their access to bars and parties and special clearance to d online classes. They are therefore not given any kind of protection. The students also do not have any formal way of lobbying for fair treatments since they are considered amateurs. The status of the armature is a threat to the safety f the players and the viability of the college football. 

I agree with the author that the cancellation of college football is not the biggest issue. The biggest issue is that there is a big problem that needs to be discussed soberly about amateurism and greed in college football, making the games go crumbling. "The NCAA's role in modern football is primarily to regulate what athletes can do and receive while enrolled in school. It sets limits on the frequency and conditions of practice, and restricts improper benefits, including paychecks and cash bonuses." (Mull, 2020) Amateurism in college football is a very big issue. As the college sports continue growing, money becomes a byproduct of increased popularity. This means that the students become more like employees than students. 

The players' hard work and commitment benefit the schools and the many selfish leaders who plunder the resources. 

There is a dire need to ensure that the players' well being is taken care of, which includes taking good care of the players. Changes must be made to ensure that their full costs are taken care of. The players are not given an opportunity, and they do not have any role to play in making decisions regarding how the football should carry on. This is only left to the leaders who make important decisions citing NCAA as the guiding principle. The players have continued working hard, but the greedy football leaders reap their efforts. According to the author, "schools use  myriad accounting tricks  to make the legal argument that their athletic departments don't have much money on hand at all—among them, pouring the profits into facilities upgrades like  weight-room DJ booths  and  indoor waterfalls  in locker rooms." (Mull, 2020)

In conclusion, therefore, it is important the players also reap from their hard work. This can e doe y giving them a token of appreciation, which may e inform of giving them fair wagers just like the other employees in the school and providing them with expanded health benefits. This can only happen if the players are no longer seen as armatures. Therefore, this means that the NCAA armature principle is doing more harm than good to college football.

Work cited

Hart, Steven. "Amateurism, Player Compensation, and College Sports an Analysis of the Perceived Effects of a Free Market Model on the National Collegiate Athletic Association and Three Stakeholders of Division I Athletics." (2019). Retrieved from: https://diginole.lib.fsu.edu/islandora/object/fsu%3A722535/

Mull, A. College Football’s Great Unraveling: The pandemic is bringing the sport face-to-face with its deepest flaws. The Atlantic, 2020 retrieved from: https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2020/08/college-football-falling-apart/615277/?utm_source=atl&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=share

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English 1201

Essay #1 – Summary and Critical Response

The Purpose of this Writing Assignment

The Critical Response assignment is designed to give you an opportunity to:

· Practice thinking critically:

When you think critically, you do not simply accept ideas at face value. Instead, you question these ideas, analyzing them to understand them better. You also challenge their underlying assumptions and form your own judgments about them.

· Practice reading critically:

Reading critically does not mean arguing with every idea you encounter. What it does mean is commenting, questioning, and judging. As a critical reader, you do not simply accept that what you are reading is true or reasonable. Instead, you assess the accuracy of the facts in the text(s) you are reading, and you consider whether opinions are convincingly supported by evidence. You try to judge the appropriateness and reliability of the text(s), and you evaluate the scope and depth of the evidence and the relevance of that evidence to the topic. You also consider opposing arguments carefully, measuring them against the arguments developed by the writer. Finally, you watch out for possible bias in the text(s) you are reading – and you work hard to keep your own biases in check.

· Practice writing critically:

Before you can respond in writing to an argument, you need to be sure that you understand what the writer means to get across and that you have a sense of how the ideas are arranged – and why. You also need to consider how convincingly the writer conveys his or her position.

Begin by reading the argument carefully, annotating it and thinking about it as we’ve discussed in class. From here you should have a good idea about what the writer wants to communicate to readers as well as how successfully the argument makes its point.

Begin writing down your ideas and own responses, considering the evidence presented as you began to make your own reasoned conclusions. Keep in mind that the most common features of critical writing are:

· a clear and confident refusal to accept the conclusions of other writers without evaluating the arguments and evidence that they provide

· a balanced presentation of reasons why the conclusions of other writers may be accepted or may need to be treated with caution

· a clear presentation of your own evidence and argument, leading to your conclusion; and

· a recognition of the limitations in your own evidence, argument, and conclusion.

The Writing Task

In an approximately 3-5 – page Summary and Critical Response, summarize and analyze the ideas and arguments presented by just one of the essays that I have included in our eLearn shell. Then, express your personal reactions.

Begin by identifying the source and its author; then write a clear, concise summary of the writer’s position. Next, analyze the argument’s supporting points one by one, considering the strength of the evidence that is presented. Also, consider whether the writer addresses all significant opposing arguments and whether those arguments are refuted convincingly. Quote, paraphrase, and summarize the writer’s key points as you go along, being careful to do so accurately so that you do not misrepresent the writer’s ideas or distort them by using them out of context.

Identify arguments you find unconvincing, poorly supported, or irrelevant, or those arguments that you find well-supported, compelling, and effective. At the end of your response, sum up your assessment of the argument in a strong concluding statement that engages your reader one last time and keeps him/her thinking about your response for years to come. It could happen!

Include a final Works Cited page. Because this is a single-source essay, your Works Cited will include only the citation in MLA format for the essay you chose to analyze.

Formatting Instructions

· Final drafts must be typed in 12-point Times New Roman or Calibri font. The default setting in Microsoft Word is 11-point Calibri, so remember that you will always have to go in and change the font size when you begin to write something new.

· Make sure your essay double-spaced with one inch margins. The default margin setting is already at one inch. However, you must change the spacing above and below the line. Look again at the formatting of the student sample, or ask me if you have any questions. This is the first paper of the semester, so there are NO dumb questions, especially about formatting!

· Staple your final draft in the upper left-hand corner.

· Use only plain white paper.

· There is no separate title page, so in the upper left-hand corner of page one, you will type your name, my name (Dair Arnold), course number and section (ENG 1201.113) and the date (this is the date that you actually turn in the paper...so, if you turn the paper in late, or if you submit a revision of the paper later in the term, the date would reflect that new day).

· Use MLA format for citing sources. This applies to in-text parenthetical documentation and to Works Cited pages.

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https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2020/08/college-football-falling-apart/615277/?utm_source=atl&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=share

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https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2020/08/college-football-falling-apart/615277/?utm_source=atl&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=share

sep16-work/question-1.txt

In no more than 1-2 pages, write down your initial thoughts about the essay you have chosen to write about in your first major essay of the term, the Summary and Critical Response. Please use the skills/strategies you have learned about critical thinking and reading. You might begin by making note of not just what the argument(s) being presented are but also HOW these arguments are being presented. Who is the audience for the article you’ve chosen? How do you know this? Do you see appeals to emotion, logic, and/or authority/credibility? Are these effective, given the audience you’ve identified? Why or why not? You might also point out specific passages that you found particularly weak or strong? Type up these passages (you’ll need textual evidence for this essay, so it’s smart to begin making note of these sections now) and describe what you are thinking about them. And finally, do you like the article? Do you connect with it? Do you have questions about it? In other words, what is your personal response to it? When you have completed this assignment, please submit it in the appropriate Dropbox in eLearn. While this assignment is informal (it can literally be a list of your notes!) and you do not have to worry about MLA formatting, please make sure you proofread and edit your writing carefully!

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https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2020/08/college-football-falling-apart/615277/?utm_source=atl&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=share

question-1.txt

In no more than 1-2 pages, write down your initial thoughts about the essay you have chosen to write about in your first major essay of the term, the Summary and Critical Response. Please use the skills/strategies you have learned about critical thinking and reading. You might begin by making note of not just what the argument(s) being presented are but also HOW these arguments are being presented. Who is the audience for the article you’ve chosen? How do you know this? Do you see appeals to emotion, logic, and/or authority/credibility? Are these effective, given the audience you’ve identified? Why or why not? You might also point out specific passages that you found particularly weak or strong? Type up these passages (you’ll need textual evidence for this essay, so it’s smart to begin making note of these sections now) and describe what you are thinking about them. And finally, do you like the article? Do you connect with it? Do you have questions about it? In other words, what is your personal response to it? When you have completed this assignment, please submit it in the appropriate Dropbox in eLearn. While this assignment is informal (it can literally be a list of your notes!) and you do not have to worry about MLA formatting, please make sure you proofread and edit your writing carefully!

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It’s completely fine to be working on this during class on Thursday, 9/17. Our entire class period on this day will be spent drafting and conferencing with me (if you’d like to), so please use the time in a way that is most helpful to you. If that means working on this Informal Writing Assignment, great. If you want to begin thinking and drafting in a different way, you can save this Informal Writing Assignment for later in the day. 1. Review the Essay Template in eLearn and begin to outline (or free-write or whatever it is you do to begin drafting in earnest) your ideas for this essay. If you do this in a word doc or google doc, you’ll be able to return to this document again and again, ultimately shaping it into a rough draft and then a final draft that you are proud to call your own. Once you’ve got some ideas about what you want to write about (what you will be arguing or sharing with readers), start to think about the flow/logical development of your ideas and the textual evidence you will be using from the article to support your claims and ideas. Jot down these ideas in the order in which you think you will address them. Plug in to this outline (or free-write or whatever it is you do…) the exact quotes that you think you will use to support some of your ideas. Please note: You’ll plug in the direct quote now, knowing that you may change some of these into summaries and paraphrases later. 2. Given your purpose and the other ideas you shared in question #1, what is the call to action or the urgent message that you think you will leave your readers with in your awesome, exciting, can’t-look-away concluding paragraph(s)? 3. Reread the article again. 4. Come back to this working document, this time inserting additional ideas, comments, questions, textual evidence, and even worries in a different color. Here’s where you are having a conversation with yourself as you begin to shape your ideas and fill in gaps. You can even use the Review feature in the tool bar and insert comments to yourself. Just remember that you don’t have to have the answers to your questions or perfect ideas at this point! 5. Step back and look at what you’ve written. What you’ve just done is huge. Now submit it in all its imperfections to the appropriate Dropbox!!

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It’s completely fine to be working on this during class on Thursday, 9/17. Our entire class period on this day will be spent drafting and conferencing with me (if you’d like to), so please use the time in a way that is most helpful to you. If that means working on this Informal Writing Assignment, great. If you want to begin thinking and drafting in a different way, you can save this Informal Writing Assignment for later in the day. 1. Review the Essay Template in eLearn and begin to outline (or free-write or whatever it is you do to begin drafting in earnest) your ideas for this essay. If you do this in a word doc or google doc, you’ll be able to return to this document again and again, ultimately shaping it into a rough draft and then a final draft that you are proud to call your own. Once you’ve got some ideas about what you want to write about (what you will be arguing or sharing with readers), start to think about the flow/logical development of your ideas and the textual evidence you will be using from the article to support your claims and ideas. Jot down these ideas in the order in which you think you will address them. Plug in to this outline (or free-write or whatever it is you do…) the exact quotes that you think you will use to support some of your ideas. Please note: You’ll plug in the direct quote now, knowing that you may change some of these into summaries and paraphrases later. 2. Given your purpose and the other ideas you shared in question #1, what is the call to action or the urgent message that you think you will leave your readers with in your awesome, exciting, can’t-look-away concluding paragraph(s)? 3. Reread the article again. 4. Come back to this working document, this time inserting additional ideas, comments, questions, textual evidence, and even worries in a different color. Here’s where you are having a conversation with yourself as you begin to shape your ideas and fill in gaps. You can even use the Review feature in the tool bar and insert comments to yourself. Just remember that you don’t have to have the answers to your questions or perfect ideas at this point! 5. Step back and look at what you’ve written. What you’ve just done is huge. Now submit it in all its imperfections to the appropriate Dropbox!!