English Help with Assignment

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This paragraph is very vague. It doesn’t mention your thesis of the two text you will be using.

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You need to introduce and explain quotes. You also have to discuss how the quote connects to your main point in the paragraph.

The sentence she is talking about is this one below.

For instance, only white people were called for interviews compared to black people. (Bayor)

Up to this point there is no thesis statement or mention of text selected for the essay.

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Italicize Show titles.

Dear White People

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Cited sources are not in correct order according to her.

1. Huguley

2. Wang

3. McKersie

4. Harris

5. Hooper

The first steps were choosing the two texts. You also had to come up with a thesis statement that connects the two texts. What film/show/song/book and reading from class are you going to use? What is the argument that connects them? If you want to discuss the negative impacts of racial and ethnic discrimination, think of a film or show that showcases it (you mention Dear White People here, perhaps you can use Dear White People). Then, find the text from class best suited to discuss and analyze the show (perhaps Cornel West's Race Matters). Please do so in order to complete the essay assignment correctly.