Researching Media In Everyday Lives
Question of the Essay.
In your view, what are the most important future directions for researching media in everyday lives? And why do you consider these to be the most important? You must justify your answers with reference to several previous studies in this area of investigation, chosen from among those discussed on the module.
Correction to be made to the essay.
Introduction: The whole introduction doesn't have any correlation with the essay, You cant talk about the meaning of future directions in the introduction, you need to say in the essay what you are going to say in the essay. " for example, this essay with discuss" something like this.
Overview of future direction; the overview should be used as the introduction.
Media Multitasking: you talked a lot about ESS but you didn't mention why it is important for media research, rewrite and explain why it is important for media research.
Body positive content: you talk about body image which is a representation issue, but does it really matter for future media research, if yes, explain and prove how it might influence future media research.
Conclusion : You cant keep discussing the issue . you have to just summarise what you were talking about in the essay ( the is why it is called conclusion ).
Refrence : i dont understand what this means and can you please use good refrences and not this The Referencing is not the correct Havard style, you don't include page numbers in reference and you need to include an access date.