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The Impacts of Violent Video Games

Video games have been around for a very long time , however, are ever-changing. That is, different war-time scenarios are utilized and although that is true, there is one consistency in gaming. Which would be the fact that many games both in the past and to date have been increasingly violent. Yes, games that do not encourage violence still exist, however, these aren’t the games we will necessarily focus on throughout this paper. As research suggests, each individual is different in how they perceive games as well as how they react to them. Because of this fact both good and bad outcomes arise from the use of violent video games. And although efforts have been conducted to try and mitigate risks, one fact remains which is that these games will ultimately always exist in society. Violent video games have both negative and positive impacts on users, however, primarily the effects are geared more negatively by far.

One of the most common negative impacts that violent games have on individuals would be that these individuals lose interest in family and friend time. That is, instead of meeting and spending time with said people, the gamer will use most time in playing these games. Overall, it has been proven that video can lead to an addiction. There are many personal stories of individuals who have lost all social lives due to these violent video games. It was also found that said games can be very straining on romantic relationships as well. As more and more time of the addict is given to completing only one more match or game (Science Daily, 1).

Another major issue with these types of games would be the fact that many people claim violent games cause violence in real life. This is surely the most popular claim that is against these games. Although this is true , to some degree researchers cannot be too certain as to whether or not violent video games pose any real threats or not. Children more so than other groups are more susceptible tot the content and themes in video games. As revealed games such as Call of Duty ultimately have about 21% of gamers who are aged 10-14 playing (Stanton, 1). And although this may not appear to be a high value, these games are surely not intended for such age groups overall. There are various reasons as to why it is difficult to say whether or not games cause such violence as author Stanton explains throughout his article. One reason that is provided would be that many headlines in the media negatively reflect the reality of situations. Because of this and several other factors Stranton says that no one really knows these answers (Stranton, 1).

Works Cited

Science Daily. “Video Games Linked To Poor Relationships With Friends, Family.” Science Daily. 25 January 2009. https://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2009/01/090123075000.htm

Stanton, R. “ Do video games make children violent? Nobody knows – and this is why.” The Guardian. 14 February 2018. https://www.theguardian.com/technology/2016/mar/09/do-video-games-make-children-violent-nobody-knows-and-this-is-why

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Correction_Work/Friend_Work/Outline For Video Game Essay.docx

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March 16, 2020

Outline For Video Game Essay:

I. Introduction:

a. Discuss prevalence of children playing video games, use statistics

i. 90% of children and 95% of teens play video games

b. Discuss the prevalence of violence in video games, use statistics

i. 85% of video games have violence in them

c. Talk about how media has pushed that there is a link between video games and aggressive behavior

II. Body Paragraph 1:

a. Topic Sentence:

i. Although there have been connections to aggressive behavior, there are many positive qualities that can be developed through moderate use of video games.

b. Discuss the positives of playing video games

i. Improves coordination

ii. Improves problem-solcing

iii. Enhances memory

iv. Enhances multitasking

c. Talk about how children use it to socialize and create healthy competition

i. Increases decision making

ii. Makes you less anti-social

d. Talk about how generally violence is not the main reason to play

i. Beating the game is

III. Body Paragraph 2:

a. Topic Sentence:

i. However, there are still scientists that have found connections between violent video games and aggressive behavior.

b. Possible Effects to discuss

i. Noticeable changes to behavior:

1. Aggression

2. https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fpsyg.2019.00384/full

ii. Ignoring or not prioritizing responsibilities

iii. Difficulty sleeping

iv. Declining grades

v. Social isolation

vi. Poor time management

IV. Refute Body Paragraph 2:

a. Topic Sentence:

i. Nevertheless, these negative effects are only noticed when excessive game play is used. In moderation children can gain the bountiful positive effects.

ii. https://www.nydailynews.com/life-style/health/playing-video-games-moderation-benefit-kids-study-article-1.1891008

b. Talk about how the links to aggression are incorrect:

i. Most studies did not study cause and effect

ii. Studies did not link to real life aggression (violence)

iii. The crime rate for youth has decreased since 1996

c. Discuss that most things in excess are bad, video games are no different

i. TV

ii. Eating

iii. Sitting

V. Conclusion:

a. Discuss the main points from each paragraph

i. Positives

ii. Negatives

iii. Tie in why positives outweigh the negatives

b. Discuss how video games now reward those who are good, E-Sports

c. Talk about how it is now an important part of culture in this growing age of technology

i. We cannot ban children from playing, it is all around us.

ii. We need to learn how to develop moderation

Correction_Work/Friend_Work/Video games free write.docx

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Free Write Exercise

Video games have only increased in prevalence over the last twenty to thirty years. Now more than 90% of U.S. children play some sort of video game. And when considering ages twelve to seventeen the figure increases to 97%. Considering the large amount of adolescents and children who play video games, 85% of video games contain some amount of violence in them. It is concerning to see whether there are harmful effects to violence in video games as it Is so prevalent in our society. The news and media often turn to video games to explain mass casualty events or acts of violence by teens. This coverage adds to the significance of this discussion and why the scientific community has been taking serious steps to create a connection. However, there are some important key points to remember. First of all, most of the research on violent video game use relies on measures to assess aggression that do not correlate with real-world violence. Some studies are observational and do not prove cause and effect. Secondly, federal crime statistics suggest that serious violent crimes among youths have decreased since 1996, even as video game sales have soared. Finally, parents can protect children from potential harm by limiting the use of video games and taking other common-sense precautions.

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Australian Bushfire: Climate Changes

Bushfires are common in Australia over the past century and it has been problematic because the underlying root cause of the fires is not clear. The topic is interesting because the unprecedented bushfires have continued to unfold and the principal causes of the fires are still a competing argument. In 2019, the temperatures in Australia was above average and the rising levels of the greenhouse gases into the atmosphere caused the lack of radiation balance on earth leading to less escape of heat. What are the underlying causes and negative factors that favor the occurrence of Australia’s bushfires? What is the role of climate change in relation to these devastating fires?

After the devastation of fire in Australia several things were impacted. Billions of animals were dying as a result of lack of habitat and food. The bushfire affected the biodiversity and caused the population of animals and plants to reduce. The fire also caused smoke and caused air pollution which reduced the quality of air in the affected regions. This affected the human health and the living things in the region since they breathed contaminated air with too much smoke (Head 180). However, “Australia is prepared to debate radical changes to where people live and how land is used, the limits to adaptation imply the need for mitigation. This means supporting ambitious global greenhouse emissions reductions targets (Bowman 66).”

The researchers at the World Weather Attribution say that the climate changes had advanced the risk of the Australian’s weather condition which drove fire for about 30%. Climate change greatly contributed to the occurrence of fire in the country. According to several researches, since models have a tendency to underestimate the trends of extreme heat in the region. Looking at the bushfire, the scientists utilizing Fire Weather Index measurement method took into account humidity, temperature, wind and rainfall to realize the risk of fire.

Climate change is the major factor that caused the occurrence of the bushfire in Australia. According to most of the researchers, the drought condition left the land bare and dry that facilitated the spread of fire. Bushfire is explained to be intensified by the drought conditions as well as the unprecedented heat. Australia is known for division and climate denial and debate has erupted through the bushfire control as well climate change. Weather control might be an answer to the control change. “There is no single risk reduction strategy. Controlled burning remains key to control the condition in Bushfire in Australia (Brennan 2960).”

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Brennan, Karl EC, Fiona J. Christie, and Alan York. "Global climate change and litter decomposition: more frequent fire slows decomposition and increases the functional importance of invertebrates." Global Change Biology 15.12 (2019): 2958-2971. Retrieved from https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com

Bowman, David MJS, et al. "Forest fire management, climate change, and the risk of catastrophic carbon losses." Frontiers in Ecology and the Environment 11.2 (2018): 66-67. Retrieved from https://esajournals.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1890/13.WB.005

Dowdy, Andrew J. "Climatological variability of fire weather in Australia." Journal of applied meteorology and climatology 57.2 (2018): 221-234. Retrieved from https://journals.ametsoc.org/

Eckstein, David, et al. "Global Climate Risk Index 2020." Bonn: German watch (2019). Retrieved from https://www.germanwatch.org/sites/germanwatch.org

Head, Lesley, et al. "Climate change and Australia." Wiley Interdisciplinary Reviews: Climate Change 5.2 (2019): 175-197. Retrieved from https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/

Hughes, Lesley, and Will Steffen. Be prepared: climate change and the Australian bushfire threat. Climate Council of Australia, 2020. Retrieved from https://www.climatecouncil.org.au/

Horton, Graeme, Liz Hanna, and Brian Kelly. "Drought, drying and climate change: emerging health issues for ageing Australians in rural areas." Australasian Journal on Ageing 29.1 (2018): 2-7. Retrieved from https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/

Hope, Pandora, et al. "On Determining the Impact of Increasing Atmospheric CO2 on the Record Fire Weather in Eastern Australia in February 2020." Bulletin of the American Meteorological Society 100.1 (2019): S111-S117. Retrieved from https://journals.ametsoc.org/doi/abs/

Morrissey, Shirley A., and Joseph P. Reser. "Natural disasters, climate change and mental health considerations for rural Australia." Australian Journal of Rural Health 15.2 (2017): 120-125. Retrieved from https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi

Nicholls, Neville. "Comments on “influence of location, population, and climate on building damage and Fatalities due to Australian bushfire: 1925–2015”." Weather, Climate, and Society 3.1 (2016): 61-62. Retrieved from https://journals.ametsoc.org/doi/full/

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Australian Bushfire and climate change

Bushfires are common in Australia over the past century and it has been problematic because the underlying root cause of the fires is not clear. The topic is interesting because the unprecedented bushfires have continued to unfold and the principal causes of the fires are still a competing argument. In 2019, the temperatures in Australia were above average and the rising levels of the greenhouse gases into the atmosphere caused the lack of radiation balance on earth leading to less escape of heat. The above findings led to the desire to know what the underlying causes and negative factors that favor the occurrence of Australia’s bushfires are as well as the role of climate change concerning these devastating fires.

To gain clarity on the matter, I decided to carry out research. My research was divided into three sections. Section one involved me reading as much information as possible on Australian bush fires, Section two involved the visitation of one of the areas affected by the fires. The main purpose of the visitation was to confirm the negative effects of the fires as well as see if I can observe possible causes of the fires. The last section involved interviewing an expert on the Australian bushfires to gain insight on the bush fires.

Researching on the Australian bushfires

Upon conducting my study on the Australian bush fires, I was able to know four main things about the fires. The first finding was that the majority of the country’s bush fires ignited when there were record-breaking heatwaves. Before the fires started, the country was hot and dry. As much as there are various ways in which the fires started: some by arsons, some by lightning, it is the dry and hot climatic conditions of the country that supported the growth of the fires as well as their spreading.

The second finding was that climate change and weather variability can be held partly responsible for the fires. A look at Australia’s climate one cannot help note that the nation has been facing severe drought which has been spurred by three winter periods (Lesley et al., 2019 p. 183) The combination of the two extreme seasons has left the country with little precipitation (Dowdy, 2018 p. 223). Also, the country was hit by the Indian ocean dipole which pushed moisture gathering clouds further away from Australia making the country drier and more susceptible to heatwaves.

The third finding was that the continent is a biodiversity hotspot. The occurrences of bush fires are putting plants and animals at risk. The continent has close to 250 species of mammals however with the rise of bush fires, the number is bound to drop and this will put a strain on the country’s ecological system (Resnick,  Irfan, and Samuel, 2020). The fires either burn the animals and plants or destroy the foods that they depend on.

The fourth finding was that thousands of people’s lives have been disrupted by the fires. In the last Australian fires, about 4000 people in Victoria were forced to head to the beach as their communities were ravaged by fires. The fires made it impossible for rescue teams to get to the people via roads as the fires had closed them off. The only escape route they had was via the sea and air. The fires not only destroyed homes, but as well destroyed and interrupted food supplies, power supplies and even fuel supply (Berglez, Peter, and Lidsko, 2019 p. 386). The smoke as a result of the fires has also exposed many people to respiratory complications. Furthermore, farming has been interrupted creating a vacuum in terms of food supply.

My observations after visiting one of the areas affected by the bushfires

To find out more information about the reason why the Australian bushfires started as well as the impact of the bushfires, on 16th March I went to Kangaroo Island in South Australia which is a good location to observe the impacts of the fire and to evaluate the underlying causes and negative factors that favor the occurrence of Australia’s bushfires. I spent four hours in the area, combing through what remained of the famous park.

Over the four hours, I was able to notice three main things. The first thing was that the park was dry. The bushes and the grass were dry; the color of the vegetation was bordering between green and brown which is not usual of the park’s vegetation. When there is ample rain, the park’s vegetation is greenish. Also, I noted that the park was extraordinarily hot and dry. From the first observation, I was able to conclude that the park was extraordinarily dry and that is a potential cause of the bushfires that affected the park.

Besides, I noticed that there was a black smoke that filled the park, even though the bushfires that ravaged the park were extinguished a while back. Furthermore, the park was in black color which is a result of the effect of the fire on the park’s vegetation. I as well noted that the park was full of burnt flesh smell. Upon enquiring from those in the site with me at the time of the visit, I was told that it was the scent of burnt carcasses of Kangaroos and Koala bears. I was further redirected to an animal mass grave. The grave was dug to house the park animals that were burnt by the bushfires or that that died due to inhaling smoke. From the observation of burnt carcasses, I was able to identify the impact of the bushfires not only on vegetation but also on animals.

Interview with a climate expert

In addition to the information I have already provided through my interest and knowledge about the Australian bushfires, and my informative observation on this subject, I had the great fortune, on March 17th, 2020, to interview Ken Thompson, co-founder of Emergency Leaders for Climate Action an expert in the field of climatology. First, I thanked Thompson for taking the time out of his busy schedule to grant me this interview. Then I asked him what role climate played in the Australian bushfires since climatic changes had been identified as a contributor to the bushfires. He responded by saying that global warming more so due to greenhouses gases had raised the heat level in the country, thereby making Australia more susceptible to bush fires considering of its vegetative cover.

The second asked him was what the immediate effects of the fires are. He responded by saying “as you can see a lot of plant cover has been destroyed, some animals have died as a result of the fire and human activities have been disrupted.” I then asked him what the long term effects of the bushfires were. He responded by stating that “the bushfires had disrupted Australia’s ecological system and that would affect the climatic condition of Australia in a long time.” The last thing I asked him was what could be done to prevent future bushfires and he responded by stating that reforestation would help as well as adopting measures to reduce greenhouse gas emissions. AS our interview came to a close, I again thanked Ken Thompson for agreeing to answer my questions about bushfires and climatic change to which he graciously wished me much luck as I continue to research my topic.

Conclusion

Based on the research, I was able to note three main things. First, climatic and weather changes have played a significant role in the Australian bush fires. Secondly, the impact of the bushfires is not only immediate but also long term due to the disruption of the country’s ecological system. Lastly, for the country to prevent similar fires in the future, reforestation must happen as well as the adoption of measures to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.

Works Cited

Dowdy, Andrew J. "Climatological variability of fire weather in Australia." Journal of applied meteorology and climatology 57.2 (2018): 221-234. Retrieved from https://journals.ametsoc.org/

Head, Lesley, et al. "Climate change and Australia." Wiley Interdisciplinary Reviews: Climate Change 5.2 (2019): 175-197. Retrieved from https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/

 Brian Resnick, Umair Irfan, and Sigal Samuel. “8 things everyone should know about Australia’s bushfire disaster.”(2020). Retrieved from https://www.vox.com/science-and-health/2020/1/8/21055228/australia-fires-map-animals-koalas-wildlife-smoke-donate

Berglez, Peter, and Rolf Lidskog. "Foreign, domestic, and cultural factors in climate change reporting: Swedish media’s coverage of bushfires in three continents." Environmental Communication 13.3 (2019): 381-394. Retrieved from https://doi.org/10.1080/17524032.2017.1397040