DUE IN 3 HOURS Portfolio - Reflecting English course Semester

Correction: Final essay #1 –

JUST FOCUS ON PURPLE CONTEXT

1. An - You may need to remove this from the article

2. Faculty -You may need to use an article before this word

3. Faculty make - This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

4. Related regulation - This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation, Proofread the sentence to be sure that it has an independent clause with a complete subject and predicate

5. Institution staff – This part of the sentence contains an error or misspelling that make your meaning clear.

6. on – You may be using the wrong preposition

7. Consequences –

8. A – you may need to remove this from the article

9. Award – Review the rules for punctuation marks.

10. University – You may need to use an article before this word.

11. The - You may want to remove e this from the article.

12. Nonetheless, they are expected to become self-sufficient by gaining knowledge to critically analyze others’ work, weigh competing arguments, and arrive to their own judgements. – You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

13. The – You may want to remove e this from the article.

14. Mollie Hemingway, federalist senior editor, wrote “Bidens first failed run for the presidency was ended by his dishonesty over his academic record and his plagiarism, including the biography and speeches of British labor politician Neil Kinnock.” – You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

15. Is seeks – This may be incorrect. Proofread the sentence to make sure you have used the correct form of the verb.

16. He written – This may be incorrect. Proofread the sentence to make sure you have used the correct form of the verb.

17. Degrees – Review the rules possessive nouns.

18. Pals – Review the rules for punctuation marks.

19. Data - you may need to use an article before this

FEEDBACK FROM PROFESSOR:

Leila,

Be careful to state that "plagiarism ... encourages laziness and lack of effort over time" without citing evidence that supports this claim. You must cite a study that gives proof of this claim otherwise without the proof, you have to omit this claim.

I think your suggestions for penalties are good and they seem to be fashioned to hold all parties accountable in schools, but you need to offer proof that your suggestions would work in reducing plagiarism and the impact of plagiarism.

You did an excellent job with your Works Cited page. There is a strange #2 on the top left that needs to me omitted, but everything else looks good.

· Keep in mind that I do not understand some of the comments. But hopefully you understand completely. I just copy and paste the notes she put down.

· I listed all the mistakes which should be in order, I even put down the easiest mistake so if you choose to you can write about the little mistakes I encountered.

Corrections: Final essay #2

1. Rights – you have used either an imprecise word or an incorrect word.

2. Article – you may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article “the”.

3. The – Did you type “the” instead of “they”, or have you left out a word?

4. The – you may need to remove this article

5. Article – you may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article “the”.

6. The – You may need to remove this article

7. The – you may need to remove this article

8. The – you may need to remove this article

9. Articles - Article – you may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article “the”.

10. The – you may need to remove this article

11. The – you may need to remove this article

12. Way- you may need to use an article before this word.

· As you can see, I made allot of wordiness mistakes lol. You can maybe write about that if you choose.

FEEDBACK FROM PROFESSOR:

Leila,

You are so close to fulfilling this assignment successfully. What you've written is an annotated bibliography. What I've asked you to write is an evaluative annotated bibliography.

You need to review the instructions for this assignment and the supporting videos and lectures to differentiate between what you've written and what the instructions are. For example, your refer to a research paper that is not a part of this assignment or a part of an assignment for this course at all.