research paper continuation

Does the thesis ask or answer a research question?

Y

What's the purpose of each body paragraph?

Anything to change or add?

Body 1:

Thesis

Body 2:

Give more examples (statistics)

-revenues of corporations

-huge even compared to the banks

Change the word organization → corporations

Body 3:

Drug distribution

-negative effect on society

-Oxy

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Body 4:

why do physicians collab with pharma to distribute dangerous drugs

-bribes

-money from big pharma

Talk about swag? And the perks (vacations)

Body 5:

Testimony of the executives

talk about how executives are getting arrested and the fines, discuss the criminal activity in detail

Body 6:

What should we do

legalize other treatments? Marijuana, MDMA, Ketamine...

Body 7:

Marketing techniques

Body 8:

Body 9:

Works Cited: Do you have two academic sources, and at least two more reliable sources?