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Compare contrast comments

See specific comments in the paper and pay a little more attention to grammar. 

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Dr. Puri 

Literature Review comments

the review of the literature. Focus on grammar issues now, and seek help from a writing specialist. Minor issues with APA in reference list - include issue and volume numbers in all references. 

Dr. Puri 

Discussion comments

Para 2: You need to replace this with an evidence based program. Look up a program please, offered at a university. 

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Dr. Puri