ADHD In Children

Overall the proposal looks ok.  In section no 2, the rationale part.....it’s good to include some information from Singapore. Include citations for Singapore too and of course followed by the ref in No 5, I have changed and highlighted the yellow part which is OK, but look at the red words.....the words was mine but lecturer needs more info e.g.  How do we know kids are certified with ADHD?

Use attached to make the changes. Don’t stress. I also request you to please bold the revision input to help me easily identify the changes made.