Internal and External Environments that Affect Strategic Planning

Overall feedback:

You addressed most all of the assignment requirements. The assignment had several requirements including, but not limited to: an introduction, 3 questions, conclusion, and at least 2 scholarly references to support your claims. You did include an introduction. However, the introduction should briefly identify the key areas/sections to be covered in the paper. This helps the reader navigate through the organization of both your paper and thought process. You did address the question requirements. The assignment required at least 2 scholarly peer reviewed journal articles. Although you included several references, I only saw one scholarly peer reviewed journal article. Moving forward. Be sure to carefully review the instructions before and after you complete your final draft to ensure all requirements have been met. Second, always include an introduction which briefly describes what areas will be covered. Finally, make sure that you include the required number of scholarly peer reviewed journal articles to support your claims. If you have questions, please contact me.

be sure to fully address the question with terminology and concepts from the book to apply to the case. This demonstrates proficiency at the required tasks. For example, question 2 asked: 

Question #2: Discuss your plans for developing formal job descriptions for the employees at the second shop    

For this question, I was looking for your approach in terms of methods discussed in the text (interviews, observations, questionnaires, etc.) and application to the case study to show application of the concepts/theories. 

As far as the scholarly peer reviewed journal articles, this is an essential part of supporting your claims at the graduate level of writing. The assignment required 2 scholarly peer reviewed journal articles. I only saw one? The purpose of this requirement is to ensure that you are supporting your claims with contemporary research within the management/business discipline. Second, this also gives credit to the author's ideas. While I do not point out every error or missing item on your paper, I focus on those areas/content that are required and can be improved.  Moving forward, be sure to fully address each question with terminology from the text/material, as well as provide examples to demonstrate the ability to apply the concepts to the case study. I look forward to receiving your next paper. Second, be sure to include the required number of current (within past 5 years) scholarly peer reviewed journal articles to support your paper.

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