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PepsicoInternationalizationCulture.edited.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

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12/0 PepsicoInternationalizationCulture.edited.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

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PAGE 1

Comment 1

This is a very general statement

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Comment 2

(date) 

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Comment 3

Which organisation? 

Comment 4

The reader needs to know some background to a specific company and its operation in a second country and the frameworks you will introduce to analyse the IHRM issues that

arise.  

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

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Comment 5

This is the first mention of the company you are analysing. Some background needed to their operation is needed. 

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Comment 6

Why are you introducing the Philippines here? 

Comment 7

assumed? 

Comment 8

Are you discussing China or the Philippines? 

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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Comment 9

You really need to focus on one host country. 

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QM

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

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Comment 11

Reference

APA please

You must use APA version 6. Consider using Refworks or click HERE to read the guidance provided by the library.