Case Analysis

Comment: This was a well-researched answer. Here’s some tips going forward to elevate your responses. First, you can safely skip the recap and summary at the beginning: Assume the readers are already familiar with the facts of the case. Second, while you did a nice job of telling us *what* you were advocating for, you can also lay out your decision criteria early on in that first thesis statement to make your argument easier to follow. Third, there were a couple of nuances mentioned in the live chat discussion that could have enriched your answer (it's actually not hard to raise capital in the current environment, and being out competed isn't the only risk to pursing one customer-- think also complexity and scale). Grade: B+