Sincerely,
Dr. Marni Swain
COMPETENCY: Analyze trends and changes in the laws on diversity, gender, and harassment.
CRITERION: Discuss event’s relation to current trends.
DISTINGUISHED
PROFICIENT
BASIC
NON-PERFORMANCE
Proficient
Discusses event’s relation to current trends.
Faculty Comments:“
You made a nice start with this objective. However, I would like to see your content developed further to clearly analyze your topic of ethical treatment of employees and it's relation to current trends, because your current discussion is brief and I am not able to gain a full sense of this based on the information provided. Please note that when you are asked to analyze information it is important to include information from outside resources to substantiate the points you make. This information should be cited in APA format both in the body of your assignment and on your References page as well.
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COMPETENCY: Apply the laws and safety issues in the workplace.
CRITERION: Identify an event that impacts today’s workplace.
DISTINGUISHED
PROFICIENT
BASIC
NON-PERFORMANCE
Basic
Identifies an event, but is unclear on how it impacts today’s workplace.
Faculty Comments:“
You made a nice start with this objective. However, I would like to see your content developed further to clearly evaluate your topic and it's impact today in the workplace, because your content is brief and I am not able to gain a full sense of this based on the limited information provided. Please note that when you are asked to evaluate information it is important to include information from outside resources to substantiate the points you make. This information should be cited in APA format both in the body of your assignment and on your References page as well.
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CRITERION: Describe personal opinion on event’s significance.
DISTINGUISHED
PROFICIENT
BASIC
NON-PERFORMANCE
Proficient
Describes personal opinion on event’s significance.
Faculty Comments:“
You made a nice start with this objective. I would like to see you develop your content further to evaluate your opinion on the significance of the event you describe. Please note that when you are asked to evaluate information it is important to include information from outside resources to substantiate the points you make. This information should be cited in APA format both in the body of your assignment and on your References page as well.
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COMPETENCY: Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for members of the human resource profession.
CRITERION: Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for members of the human resource profession.
DISTINGUISHED
PROFICIENT
BASIC
NON-PERFORMANCE
Distinguished
Communicates in a manner that is scholarly and professional that addresses the intended audience and is free of grammatical and mechanical errors.
Faculty Comments:“
You successfully met the requirements for this objective.
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