multiple source essay topic: should everyone go to college? stay on the yes side

college education draft 3.docx by Roseline Ojo

Submission date: 03-Jul-2020 11:43AM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1353070393 File name: college_education_draft_3.docx (20.41K) Word count: 1276 Character count: 6564

Use double-space for every single line!

No need to provide the page numbers for the summary in the introduction.

wordy thesis.

better topic S

S1

May combine them to one summary.

S2 Need more discussion.

some people believe that No outside examples.

Must use an evidence from the article.

also

S3

Should use the evidence from the article.

Whose claim is it?

Q1

Incomplete: Need to comment on the quote.

This topic S idea is too narrow.

T S4

This is a far-fetched idea.

No new information in the conclusion.

You are not supposed to use outside examples as supporting evidences in the body paragraphs! Your Topic S 1 is better than the other 2. See the Rubric.

FINAL GRADE

/100

college education draft 3.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

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PAGE 1

Text Comment. Use double-space for every single line!

Text Comment. No need to provide the page numbers for the summary in the introduction.

PAGE 2

Text Comment. wordy thesis.

Text Comment. better topic S

Text Comment. S1

Text Comment. May combine them to one summary.

Text Comment. S2

Text Comment. Need more discussion.

Text Comment. some people believe that

Text Comment. No outside examples.

Text Comment. Must use an evidence from the article.

Text Comment. also

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Text Comment. S3

Text Comment. Should use the evidence from the article.

Text Comment. Whose claim is it?

Text Comment. Q1

Text Comment. Incomplete: Need to comment on the quote.

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Text Comment. This topic S idea is too narrow.

Text Comment. T

Text Comment. S4

Text Comment. This is a far-fetched idea.

Text Comment. No new information in the conclusion.

Text Comment. no comment

Text Comment. You are not supposed to use outside examples as supporting evidences in the body paragraphs! Your Topic S 1 is better than the other 2. See the Rubric.

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