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The current paper has; been rvritten to discuss the f'actors help the LBGT parent's success.

To develop the research fbur essential aspects have been explored that are Parental reaction and

support towards LIGIIT conrmunity, i child vulnerability, secretive behavior and social

stability of the LGB:I comraunity. To discuss the issue, existing literature has been gathered to

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Introduction

f;,llot,r LGBT community is facing several issues in society that rLeed to bc e.xplored to see the

support and reaction" increased

child vulnerability, secretive behal and stability. LGBT community needs to be viewed

in the light of these factors that are problematic and how the social

made important and benefic bctler social support of such environment can

communities.

Ruthman, E. F.

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(2012). Parents, Su Reactions to Sexual Orientation Disclosure

Better Health: Res- a Population-Based Suwe5, of LGB Adults in

Massachusetts. J Homosex. Sge,f lg6_200. .. ,-I()u T,- - . Qt'

and social support help students deal with the behavioral issue and helps t\m to involve in e(er health safety behaviors. The research has concluded that the parental non-accelrtance is dangerous

as it promoted the negative behaviors in the children. The researcher has e.,ziclenced the positive relationship between parental rejection and sexual orientation of the childrera. LCi males who did

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not get any support fiom thdir parents reporled depresr;ion as a result of no support from the

parents. Thole EIT females rvho were not supported by their parents have engaged in behaviors

such as drug use, The researc:her has stressed that the support of the parents can be helpful for the

LGBT males and females Ibr not k+g engaged in negative behaviors such as depression and drug

use. The research has operrly highlighted an issue that rel.ates to the mental and physical health of

the LGBT parents. TtLe reseeLrcher has highlighted the co,ncern along with a future role of society

to aware the parenls and children to resolve the issues and put collective efforts toward healthy

living.

Roe, S. (2016). "Farnily Support Would Have Been LiLke Amazing"

LGBTQ Youth Experiences with Parental and Family Support. "The Family Journal." 25(1).

55-62.

The current situdy has treen conducted to highlight the role of parental support is very important

for child development and g;rowth hence the children seek emotional and social help frorn their t.'l,.t ; i

parents. The researcher ha.s collected information from tlhe LGBT males and females to find their

expectations rep;ardirrg support from parents although initial responses of the parents are not

positive as the situatir:n is not acceptable for parents. The data collected in the form of qualitative

research details A.nother irnporlant aspect of the sexual orientation is the conformity to the

religion. The researctLer has concluded that the parents are not supportive towards LGBT children

due to religious obligations that have been set. The research has highlighted the fact that children

want to seek explicirt supporl from the parents hence itheir high expectations towards parental

support. The author has highlighted the role of counselors to play parent at the community level to

resolve the issues that familjes are going through by sitting and speaking on the subject.

2. Increased Clhild vulnerabilitv

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Biddulph, M' (200s). Sexualities Equalify in Schools: Why Every Lestrian, Gay, Bisexual or Transgender (LGBT) child Matters. pastoral care in education. 24 (z).ls..zl.

The current research is based on the sensitive issue of equality in tlhe sclhool environrnent

as children are more vulnerable by sexua.l orientation. The author has highlight.ed that schools have

an essential role in supporting vulnerable children. Moreover, t.he author has discussed the problems and difticulties that children lace at school when they are in an LrfBT category. The

children have been treated by discriminal.ion; as a result, many issues arise such as low self-esteem,

absenteeism, underachievement and in some instances, the problem can resullt in the form of suicide when children are more affected due to depression. All the above factor are seriously concerning to the child's mental health. lhe researcher has suggestecl the school,s policies need to

be revised to deal with the issue. Fld-hu,' endorsed that the schools can pla.y therir part in helping

and supporting the children who are vulnerable and in need of support. Active and joint support

can be helpful and beneflcial for childrerL who identify as Lesbian, gay, bisexual or transgender..

Bockting, w. o. (2016). vulnerability and Resilience Among Gendr:r-Nonconforming Children and Adolescents: Mental Health Professionals Have a Key Rolt: to play. Journal

of American Academy of child and Aclolescent psychiatry. s5(6), 441_443.

The author has highlighted the need for mental health professional to acldress the issue regarding gender nonconformity of the ILGBT children who are facing the

'ulnerability in the

society' The research has discussed the importance of research in the rr:levant field as a policymaker and government can get help and guideline suppoft from the research-based facts.

The children get a mental health stigma from the mental health profess;ional accorcling to the DSM

hence they face a challenging situation in rthe society that is quite difficult ancl sffesis provoking for

such vulnerable LGBT children. There is a need for mental health pror?ssionals arLd organizations

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to help those who are at ris.k and weak due to gender non-conforming issues such as the LGBT

community. Ther author has discussed the importance of the role of mental health prof'essionals to

positive and actively particillate to build a healthy environment of the society for LGBT children.

3. Secretive beharviors

Lee, A. Kanji,, Z. (2017). Queering the health care system: Experiences of the lesbian,

gay, bisexuill, tr:lnsgender community. Can J Dent Hyg, 51(2): 80-89.

The researc:h has disrcussed the factor that the LGBT community is diverse and exists in

the high range but they face stigma and discriminal.ion hence secretive behaviors have been

seen as a re;sult. North ,\merica is striving to make such policies that respect the social and

emotional villue of LC}BT community to remove the health care barriers and provide them the

standard heeLlthcare facilities without a restriction to promote the overall health care system of

the society. The author has highlighted the concern of LGBT community regarding their

existence their bc,dy integrity, emotional suppoft, fre,edom to express, acceptance toward their

unique idenrity, and pow'er. A1l the discussed dimensions are dangerous, and they need the help

of the communily to give LGBT integrity and supporl. The researcher has addressed the

importance of urrderstanding the difference between sex and gender, and that society has a

responsibilil.y to r:hange the discriminating attitude and understand the unique integrity of the

LGBT community. The researchers have further highlighted that the delay in acceptance and

providing the care and integrity to the LGBT community have been a reason of delay in

acceptance anil rights of'LGBT in the society. This concern should be addressed on an ugent

basis to impro're the health care facilities for the community. Moreover, the researchers have

suggested that this is an issue regarding cultural sensitive, so the professionals of the

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community have to play their part in the solution of the proble:m, so that secret behavior and trends are diminished to ensure health facility for ar.

watson, J' B' (2014). Bisexuality and Family: Narratives of silence, solace, and Strength. Journal of GLBT Families Studies. 10 (l). l0l-123,

The current research is based on the attitudes and behaviors related to rthe families of LGBT who often view the LGBT as a stigma and unacceptance from the societ;,u. 'r[he researcher has highlight the issues and problems flaced by the families of suctL comrLunitl, that provokes an attitude of silence and silence ort the perspective of such issue. The researchers have highlighted the social and societal problems that have been faced by the rsociety. society,s perception toward LGBT communitli is not based on any single arspects there rare specific issues regarding religious boundaries, cultural and societal expectations, and geographical expectations of the society regardinp;the concept of sex and gen,ler. Familiers have an attitude ofacceptance and resistance according to research findings, but they are trying to adjust to the

encountered situation in the form of coping with resilience and empowernlerrt. The article has presented an internal case based on the families who are facing society either in the form of silence or using coping strategies.

4. Social Stability

Rodrigues, D' L. Huic, A. & Lopes, Dr. (2018). Relationship commitm,enr; of portuguese Iesbian and gay individuals. Examining; the role of cohabitation an d pcrceivedl social support. Journal of Social and personal Relationships.

The researchers have discussed the relationships of the LGrlr as they srtrive to make a healthy relationship to get adjusted and gain stability in society. The relatiorslips that are strong and stable has the durability and stability in terms of the sociar and psychotogic'l well-being of

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such individuals. The research has resulted in an interesting factor that the longevity of such a

relationship is b,:tter when parents and friends are supporlive of such couples resulting in a

healthier relationship. The support that is offered by the friends is a mediating role among the

community of such inrlividua.ls gays and lesbians. The arl.icle is an excellent effort to describe the

supportive dimerrsion of the I-GBT community.

Stanton, M. C. llo:zas, L, W. Acensio, M. (2013). Citizenship Status Matters: A Social

Factor Influencting; Outness among a Diverse Nationall Sample of LGBT Individuals. The

British Journal of Social Work.

The current research has been designed to descritre citizenship as another social factor for

the LGBT indivjiduak; in society as they must reveal th,:ir current identity, and hence they face

discrimination. l-he author h,as suggested that devising such policies that do not need information

regarding LGBT' would lower the difficulties and stigmatization in the community. The author

has indicated that by applying the realism theory, it has been concluded that social and political

factors are too infiu.ential in term of policies and practices that such societies are facing

discrimination. 'fhr: social expression of the status of ttre LGBT community is essential in the

societies that arr: based on opposing the LGBT practices. It has been further explained that the

outness of the iclentit'y is a healthy practice when societlz and societal norms have the acceptance

toward LGBT status. People who are born American are more under pressure rather than those

who have migrateilto the US as they are considered as the variable to control the demographics.

The change can be brought by stabilizing and devising the citizenship policies.

Discussion

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The first dimension is Parental reaction ancl support towards LGB'| c:ommunity when they know about their children what their responses are and what type of suppoft LGBT community is receiving from theirparents and social circle as societal and religious obligatic,ns hinders parents to support their LGBT children. Second important domain has highlighted tlie increased child vulnerability of LGBT community as being a victim of the society's d;iscrinrination; the third aspect depends on the secretive behaviors that LGBT community and they adopt towards societies, attitudes in the form of being silent or hiding their identities. Lastly this pa,er has discussed the dimensions that are helpful in the social stability of the LGBT communi:ty as relationships are more stable when the LGBT communit.y gets supporls from parenris and .[rir:ncls. All the factors influence the LGBT parenting success in the context of existing riterature.

Conclusion

LGBT community needs parentzLl support and community support flor.a healthy and long lasting relationship, communities' profer;sional support and revised policies; ciln ensure the health and safety issue of the LGBT community, secretive behaviors are a result of society,s attitude towards LGBT community and their families hence they try to hide their identihz.

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References

Biddulph, M. (2rlQtt). Sexu,alities Equality in Schools: Why Every Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual or

Transgen,ler (I-GB'I) Child Matters. Pastoral Care in education. 24 (2). 15-21.

Bockting, W. O. (2016). Vutnerability and Resilience Among Gender-Nonconforming Children

and Adollesrlents: Mental Health Professionals Have a Key Role to Play. Journal of

American Academy of child and Adolescent Psychiatry. 55(6) . 441-443.

Lee, A. Kanji,',1,. (rL}ll). Queering the health care system: Experiences of the lesbian, gdY,

bisexual, treLnsgender community. Can J Dent Hyg, 51(2): 80-89.

Rodrigues, D. L, Huir: , A. & Lopes, D. (2018). Relationship commitment of Portuguese lesbian

and gay in{ividuals. Examining the role of cohabitation and perceived social support.

Journal of fiocial antl Personal Relationships.

Roe, S. (2016). "FeLmily Support Would Have Been Like Amazing"

LGBTQ Youth.Experiences with Parental and Family Support. "The Family Journal." 25(l).55-

62.

Ruthman, F..F. (2012). Parents' Supportive Reactions to Sexual Orientation Disclosure Associated

With Br:tter Health: Results From a Population-Based Survey of LGB Adults in

MassachLusr;tts. J IIomosex. 59(2): 1 86-200.

S1.anton, M. C. RozeLs, L, \V. Acensio, M. (2018). Citizenship Status Matters: A Social Factor

Influencinpi C)utness among a Diverse National Sample of LGBT Individuals. The British

Journal ,cf iSocial Work.

Watson, J. B. (2;014). Bisex,nality and Family:Narratives of Silence, Solace, and Strength. Journal

of GLB'| F'arnilies Studies. 10 (1). 101-123.

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A Causal Analysis of the Relationship Between X ancl Y

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