Redo Class 2 Assessments 2,3,4

Teacher Comment: Thank you for your work on this assignment.  I think you did a good job of explaining a collaborative approach towards achieving the goal of your organizational issue of errors resulting in patient harm. I like that you included ideas about possible consequences, of not addressing these problems. I am so glad you included the consequence of measuring morbidity . This is so important and is often overlooked. Overall, this is a good effort on this power-point presentation. I made a few recommendations on how some criteria might achieve a higher performance score.

· Good safe assign

· good title page

· Good references

· Many grand broad statements lacking specifics of how to reduce the problem

1. Explains an organizational or patient issue for which a collaborative interdisciplinary team approach would help achieve a specific improvement goal, noting potential consequences of not addressing the issue.

Teacher Comments: I liked that you gave a clear explanation of this issue of medical errors . The collaborative approach described was supported by citations in the literature, I guess as you put each reference at the bottom of the page . I am glad you included the consequences of not addressing the issue. This consequence of harm is an important one that is often overlooked.

The reference can not be at the bottom of the page - does that mean the whole slide or whole or part information from that author ? use in line text citation

2. Summarizes an evidence-based interdisciplinary plan to address an organizational or patient issue, noting specific sources of evidence used to develop the plan.

Teacher Comments I like that you provided a clear summary of an interdisciplinary plan to address this issue of harmful errors occur. For a distinguished score, a more in-depth discussion of specific sources of evidence that were used to develop your plan, is needed.

Remember the rubric is asking for citations for highest score with examples

3. Explains how the interdisciplinary plan could be implemented and how the human and financial resources would be managed, providing real-world examples relevant to the context of the health care organization.

Teacher Comments I like that you provided a full and detailed explanation of how your interdisciplinary plan could be implemented. I am glad you included both human and financial resources in your presentation. For a distinguished score, are there real-world examples from your practice, or from the literature, that you might share?

Remember the rubric is asking for citations for highest score with examples

4. Proposes evidence-based criteria to evaluate the degree to which the project was successful in achieving the improvement goal, noting specific sources of evidence used to develop the criteria.

Teacher Comments I like that your proposed evaluation criteria were supported by evidence in the literature. For a distinguished performance score, a more in-depth explanation of how your specific sources of evidence were used to develop the criteria is needed. Are there authors you could cite who have shared ideas about this?

One of the outcomes are unmeasurable

Remember the rubric is asking for citations for highest score with examples

5. Slides are easy to read and clutter free. Slide background is "visually" pleasing with a contrasting color for the text and may utilize graphics. Detailed speaker notes are provided.

Teacher Comments: A script is not provided You wrote a few sentences on some of the speaker note pages

6. Organizes content with clear purpose/goals. Power point slides support main points, assertions, arguments, conclusions, or recommendations with relevant and evidence-based sources (published within 5 years) with a flawless APA formatted reference list.

Teacher Comments : no intext citations. I really liked how the power-point presentation was very clear and logically presented. Your slides were easy to see and understand. There were a few APA and grammar errors.