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Business Communication

  • John Wiley & Sons

  • By Marty Brounstein

  • PowerPoints by
    Gates Stoner
    Pima Community College

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Objectives

  • Learn how to write a persuasive letter that addresses the needs of the reader
  • Recognize 5 parts of a sales letter
  • Review the role of persuasion in claim letters
  • Learn 4 common types of collection letters

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Persuasion

  • To persuade: to influence a person’s thoughts or actions, often by demonstrating reasons for that person to accept your influence.
  • To persuade, you must:
  • grab audience’s attention
  • prove that you can meet their needs
  • Persuasion must be based on truthful representation of facts.

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Writing Persuasively

4 Steps to Persuasive Writing:

  • Identify reader’s needs
  • Establish credibility
  • Grab reader’s attention
  • Prove you could meet reader’s needs

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Reader’s Needs

Examples

Money

Health

Comfort

Security

Reputation

Power

Attractiveness

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Types of Persuasive Letters

  • Sales or Promotional Letters
  • Claim Letter
  • Collection Letter

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Sales Letter

Effective sales letters:

  • Focus on customer (“you”), not writer (“I”)
  • Draw on market research
  • Make reader aware of needs product meets

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S-A-L-E-S Process

Spark attention, imagination, & curiosity

Announce product or service

List advantages to reader

Express appreciation and goodwill

Specify exactly what reader should do & when

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S-A-L-E-S Process

  • Suggest that you can do something unique for the reader
  • Name drop and then associate the reader with the name
  • Mention local people, places, and events
  • Empathize with the reader

Spark attention, imagination, & curiosity

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S-A-L-E-S Process

  • Name what you have to offer in specific terms

  • Use an honest and assertive voice
  • Provide a persuasive example or two

Announce product or service

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S-A-L-E-S Process

  • Demonstrate the needs your product or service fulfills
  • Consider using a list highlighting major points

List advantages to reader

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S-A-L-E-S Process

  • Thank reader or praise for his/her company

“We admire the standard you have set for yourself and others.”

Express appreciation and goodwill

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S-A-L-E-S Process

  • Use action verbs, “call or visit”

  • Include specific address and telephone number with time

Specify exactly what reader should do & when

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Sales Letter Pitfalls

Over-ambitiousness

Insincerity

Exaggerated Claims

Competition trashing

Fig. 9-1: Example of complete
sales letter using S-A-L-E-S pattern

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Claim Letters

A claim letter is a persuasive business letter that customers use to make and explain a demand for repayment, restitution, or replacement because of failure in a product or service.

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Guidelines and Questions

  • Assess the entire situation
  • Consider your audience
  • Tell your story in a logical, organized way
  • Use a positive approach
  • Insist on specific, timely action
  • Offer your cooperation

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Get the Attention You Deserve

Stay cool

Don’t delay

Be fair and polite

Be open-minded

Stay on course

Fig. 9-2: Example of

a claim letter

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Collection Letters

Goal:

To settle the account as quickly as possible.

Before writing, ask:

Why has the debt not been paid?

What tone will your letter use?

What do you want the reader to do?

When and where must action occur?

What motivational force inside the reader do you plan to address?

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4 Styles of Collection Letters

  • The Friendly Reminder
  • The Firm Request
  • The Urgent Appeal
  • The Final Demand
  • Writer assumes debtor simply forget to make the payment
  • Can bring more than a 50% response rate from debtors
  • Brief letter that relies on good will and sense of responsibility

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4 Styles of Collection Letters

  • The Friendly Reminder
  • The Firm Request
  • The Urgent Appeal
  • The Final Demand
  • Writer assumes that some problem has interrupted the regular flow of payments
  • Tone of letter is firm, with a hint of urgency
  • Motivates the reader on the basis of a sense of fairness

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4 Styles of Collection Letters

  • The Friendly Reminder
  • The Firm Request
  • The Urgent Appeal
  • The Final Demand
  • Writer assumes debtor cannot and will not pay without strong motivation
  • Tone is straightforward and urgent
  • Motivates the reader with pride and fear

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4 Styles of Collection Letters

  • The Friendly Reminder
  • The Firm Request
  • The Urgent Appeal
  • The Final Demand
  • Final collection effort before collection agency takes over

  • Determined and tough, but not offensive
  • The motivator is fear of legal action

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