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The Practice of Public Relations
Fourteenth Edition
Chapter 15
Public Relations Writing
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Learning Objectives
15.1 To discuss the reasons that the public relations professional must be the best writer in the organization.
15.2 To explore the fundamentals of writing, from drafting to style to ensuring worthwhile content.
15.3 To discuss, in detail, the rationale for and elements of the news release, the most practical and ubiquitous of public relations writing vehicles.
15.4 To examine the requisites of writing for the ear that differ from writing for the eye.
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Opening Example: Man o’ the Peep
Achieving results from public relations writing requires
A newsworthy subject
Sound copy
Perseverance
Turkey’s President Recep Tayyip Erdogan is a no-nonsense disciplinarian
He also communicates regularly with his publics
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The vast majority of public relations writing is designed to attract positive publicity about a product, organization, issue or person. The public relations writer has a vast arsenal of writing weapons at his or her disposal; from basic news releases and pitch letters to features and op eds, from social media Facebook and Twitter copy to sophisticated testimony, presentations, and formal speeches.
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Erdogan’s Communications
Three public speeches during the week
Two speeches a day on weekends
Mixes combativeness and sensitivity
Writing remains the key to public relations
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The Turkish President’s charismatic oratory style is one reason why he is the country’s most popular politician
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Public Relations Practitioners are Professional Communicators (1 of 2)
Communicating means writing
Most of us know how to write and speak
Public relations professionals should write and speak better than their colleagues
Communication is the essence of the practice of public relations
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The ability to write and speak with clarity is a valuable and coveted skill in any organization.
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Public Relations Practitioners are Professional Communicators (2 of 2)
Clear and precise language can inform, motivate, and persuade
The ability to write easily, coherently, and quickly distinguishes the public relations professional from others in an organization
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Public relations professionals are expected to have mastery over the written word.
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Learning Objective 15.1
To discuss the reasons that the public relations professional must be the best writer in the organization.
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It takes good knowledge of the basics to be a good public relations writer.
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Writing for the Eye and the Ear
Good knowledge of the basics
Writing for a reader is different from writing for a listener
Reader can scan material, study printed words, dart ahead, and review passages
A reader can check up on a writer
Online readers are fickle and impatient
Listeners only get one opportunity to hear and comprehend the message
Listeners who lose interest are difficult to get back
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Communication – that is, effective writing and speaking – is the essence of the practice of public relations.
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Learning Objective 15.1: Discussion Question
Why is writing the foremost technical skill of public relations professionals?
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Your primary skill as a public relations professional is writing. Any practitioner who doesn’t know the basics of writing and doesn’t know how to write – even in the age of social media – is vulnerable and expendable.
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Learning Objective 15.2
To explore the fundamentals of writing, from drafting to style to ensuring worthwhile content.
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Fundamentals of Writing
Idea must precede the expression
Don’t be afraid of the draft
Simplify, clarify
Writing must be aimed at a particular audience
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Few people are born writers. Like any other discipline, writing takes patience and hard work. The more you write, the better you should become, provided you have mastered the basics. Writing fundamentals do not change significantly from one form to another.
The ideas must precede the expression. Think before writing. Maintain good files so you do not have to reinvent the wheel.
Don’t be afraid of the draft. After deciding on an idea and establishing the purpose of a communication, the writer should prepare a rough draft. Drafting is necessary and a foolproof method for avoiding a mediocre, half-baked product.
Simplify, clarify. In writing, the simpler, the better. Today, with more and more consumers reading from computer screens, simplicity is imperative.
The writer must have the target group in mind and tailor the message to reach that audience. Don’t expect to be all things to all people.
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The Greatest Public Relations Writer of All Time
Sir Winston Churchill got straight to the point
He wrote the truth
He painted pictures
He used simple words
We worked his verbs (stressed words of action)
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The former Prime Minister of Great Britain, who led the Brits to victory in World War II, was history’s greatest public relations writer, an inspiration to any poor schnook who ever pecked at a keyboard. Churchill, also one of history’s greatest speakers, began as a back bencher in Parliament, who lacked confidence because of a stutter.
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Examples of Flesch’s Simple Dictum
Williams Shakespeare’s “To be or not to be?”
“All the fish died”
FDR’s “We’re going to make a country in which no one is left out.”
“In the beginning, God created the heaven and the earth.”
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If people were less inclined to use 50-cent words and more inclined to substitute simple words, communicators would communicate better.
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Flesch Readability Formula (1 of 2)
Use contractions such as it’s and doesn’t
Leave out the word that whenever possible
Use pronouns such as I, we, they and you
Refer back to a noun with a repeat of the noun or a pronoun; don’t create eloquent substitutions
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Rudolf Flesch staged a one-man battle against pomposity and murkiness in writing.
Substitute simple words for 25-cent words
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Flesch Readability Formula (2 of 2)
Use brief, clear sentences
Cover one item per paragraph
Use language the reader understands
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Rudolf Flesch staged a one-man battle against pomposity and murkiness in writing.
Substitute simple words for 25-cent words
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Inverted Pyramid Simplicity
Climax of news story comes at the beginning
Lead, first 1-2 paragraphs of a story, includes the most important facts
Paragraphs are written in descending order of importance
Lead answers who, what, why, when, where and occasionally how
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The climax of the newspaper story comes at the beginning. The lead is the first one or two paragraphs, which include the most important facts. From there, paragraphs are written in descending order of importance. Less important facts presented as the article continues.
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Example
“Marvel Studios announced today it had signed actor Chris Hemsworth to star again in Avengers 5, as Thor, the Asgardian god of thunder, for the 2019 film.”
Sentence answers critical questions and highlights pertinent facts
Gets to the point quickly without a lot of extra words
Captures and communicates the essence of what the reader needs to know.
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The lede is factual, straightforward, and represents simplicity at its clearest. This is the style of straightforward writing that forms the basis for the most fundamental, practical, ubiquitous, and easiest of all public relations tools: the news release.
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Jargon Master Matrix
Overarching Visionary Objectives
Strategic Support Alternatives
Special Customer-oriented Expectations
Specific Stretch Excellence
Core Planning Assessment
Long-term Marketing Update
Quality Service Model
Technology-based Process Product
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Select any three words from the three columns to make a statement.
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Learning Objective 15.2: Discussion Questions
What are several of the writing fundamentals one must consider?
What is the essence of the Flesch method of writing?
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Learning Objective 15.3
To discuss, in detail, the rationale for and elements of the news release, the most practical and ubiquitous of public relations writing vehicles.
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The News Release
First news release – Ivy Lee, 1906 explanation from Pennsylvania Railroad about crash that killed 50 people published verbatim in The New York Times
End of news releases predicted to be nigh, but it’s not
Document of record to state organization’s official position
Influence publication to write favorably about material discussed
Some news releases are used verbatim
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The news release is the granddaddy of public relations writing vehicles. The first recorded news release was issued by Ivy Lee in October of 1906 as a “Statement from the Road.”
Releases, done correctly, are the easiest, most straightforward, most understandable, and ubiquitous communication vehicles. PR Newswire distributes hundreds of news releases every day to more than 5000 websites and online databases.
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A Well-Written, Newsworthy Release
Figure 15-3 Ready for prime time news release. So . . .
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The example above concerns a captivating topic, is well-written, and newsworthy.
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Five Newsworthy Topics for News Releases
Impact – major announcement that affects organization, community, society
Oddity – unusual occurrence, milestone
Conflict – significant dispute or controversy
Known principal – the greater the title of individual making announcement, the greater the chance it will be used
Proximity – how localized the release is or how timely it is, relative to the news of the day
Human interest stories are also considered newsworthy
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Human interest stories, which touch on an emotional experience, are regularly considered newsworthy
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News Release News Value (1 of 2)
Have a well-defined reason for sending the release
Focus on one central subject in each release
Make certain the subject is newsworthy in the context of the organization, industry, and community
Include facts about the product, service, or issue being discussed
Provide the facts “factually” with no puff, no bluff, no hyperbole
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The key challenge for public relations writers is to ensure that their news releases reflect news. What is news? News releases ought to include the elements listed above.
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News Release News Value (2 of 2)
Rid the release of unnecessary jargon
Include appropriate quotes from principals (without inflated superlatives)
Include product specifications, shipping dates, and other pertinent information
Include a brief description of the company/ boilerplate
Write clearly, concisely, forcefully
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Product specifications, shipping dates, availability, prices, and other pertinent information to tell the story should be included in the news release.
The description of the company should include what it is and what it does.
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Write the Release Using Ten Facts (1 of 2)
Supreme Court Chief John Roberts will speak in Madison, Wisconsin, tomorrow.
He will be keynote speaker at the annual convention of the American Bar Association.
He will speak at 8 p.m. at the Kohl Center.
His speech will be a major one.
His topic will be capital punishment
He will also address university law classes while in Madison.
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Organize these facts into an American Bar Association news release for tomorrow morning’s Wisconsin State Journal newspaper. One right answer appears in the chapter.
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Write the Release Using Ten Facts (2 of 2)
He will meet with the university’s chancellor while in Madison.
He became the 17th Chief Justice, replacing the late William Rehnquist in 2005.
He is a former practicing attorney.
He has, in the past, steadfastly avoided addressing the subject of capital punishment.
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Organize these facts into an American Bar Association news release for tomorrow morning’s Wisconsin State Journal newspaper. One right answer appears in the chapter.
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News Release Content
Proper newspaper style
Clear and concise
Who?
What?
Where?
When?
Why?
And sometimes how?
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When a release is newsworthy and of potential interest to an editor, it must be written clearly and concisely in proper newspaper style. It must get the facts early and answer the six key questions.
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Example News Release Content
Madison, Wisconsin – Supreme Court Chief Justice John Roberts will deliver a major address on capital punishment at 8 p.m. tomorrow at the Kohl Center before the annual convention of the American Bar Association.
Who? Chief Justice John Roberts
What? A major address on capital punishment
Where? Kohl Center
When? Tomorrow at 8 p.m.
Why? American Bar Association is holding a convention
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How is less important in this case. The gist of the story has been successfully communicated in the lede.
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To Be Newsworthy
Gist of story must be communicated in the lede
News release should be objective; fair and accurate
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All comments and editorial remarks must be attributed to organization officials. The news release can’t be used as the private soapbox of the release writer. Rather, it must appear as a fair and accurate representation of the news that the organization wishes to be conveyed.
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News Release Essentials (1 of 2)
Rationale
Focus
No puffery
Nourishing quotes
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Beyond the necessity of being newsworthy, news releases must include several time-honored essentials that will help get them considered for inclusion in print.
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News Release Essentials (2 of 2)
Company description
Spelling, grammar, punctuation
Clarity, conciseness, commitment
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Beyond the necessity of being newsworthy, news releases must include several time-honored essentials that will help get them considered for inclusion in print.
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PR Ethics: No “Pardon” for Anti-Obama Facebook Poster
What would your advice have been to Ms. Lauten considering her Facebook post on the turkey pardoning ceremony?
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Ms. Lauten objected to the casual dress and perceived lack of decorum of First Daughters Sasha and Malia Obama at the White House Thanksgiving turkey pardoning ceremony in 2014.
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Internet Releases (1 of 2)
Most reporters prefer to receive news releases via email
One reporter per “To” line
Limit subject line headers
Hammer home the headline
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Brevity and succinctness are paramount. Reading from a computer screen is more difficult and tedious than extracting from paper. Internet news release writing must conform to the above requisites.
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Internet Releases (2 of 2)
Limit length
Observe 5W format
No attachments
Remember readability
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Brevity and succinctness are paramount. Reading from a computer screen is more difficult and tedious than extracting from paper. Internet news release writing must conform to the above requisites.
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FYI: 21st Century News Release 10 Taboo Terms
Synergy
Value-added
Outside-the-box
Leading
Innovative
Disruptive
World class
Game changer
Paradigm shift
End of the day
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There is nothing more patently offensive to a reporter than a news release that contains the following 10 most overused buzzwords and phrases. If you can’t prove it, don’t use it.
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Live by the Word, Die by the Sword
President Donald Trump’s Twitter behavior was criticized, but other politicians joined the tweetstorm to make news
Democratic Attorney General of New York State Eric Schneiderman is an active tweeter
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Schneiderman has been accused of seeking publicity
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Schneiderman was Identified as a Serial Sexual Harasser
He was vocal about the #MeToo movement
Four women with whom Schneiderman worked or shared sexual relationships were treated violently
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Discussion Questions
Had you been Eric Schneiderman’s public relations director, what would you have advised him to do in response to the New Yorker article?
What would you suggest Schneiderman do to try to restore his reputation?
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Schneiderman has been accused of seeking publicity
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Art of the Pitch
The most fundamental way to reach a journalist, beyond the news release, is through a pitch letter
When in “publicity mode,” public relations people are “pitch people”
Public relations pitching is an art
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Public relations people pitch stories and interviews, press conferences, and product demonstrations to reporters, hopeful to receive positive coverage that will promote their organization’s efforts.
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Fundamentals for a Successful Pitch
First, do your homework
Second, personalize
Third, be polite and honest
Fourth, localize
Fifth, use celebrities
Sixth, be creative
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Tip your hand too much in a promotional direction or fail to show the relevance or newsworthiness of that which you are pitching – and your pitch will be rejected. Celebrities like Cardi B attract attention
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Learning Objective 15.3: Discussion Questions
What is the purpose of a news release?
What are style considerations of news releases?
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Learning Objective 15.4
To examine the requisites of writing for the ear that differ from writing for the eye
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Writing for Listening
Use short words
Use short sentences
Use 10-cent words
Forget jargon
Use contractions
Speak it aloud
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Writing for the ear requires a special skill. After all, unlike something in print to which you can return over and over, you generally get only one crack at listening to a speech or hearing a radio or TV commentary.
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The Speech
It is designed to be heard, not read
It uses concrete language
It demands a positive response
It must have a clear-cut objectives
It must be tailored to a specific audience
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The most important written vehicle – the acid test for public relations writers – is the speech. Access is power – the closer you are to the CEO and the more comfortable he or se is with your production, the more power you will possess within the organization.
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Four Sections
Introduction
Thesis
Body
Conclusion
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There is no one size fits all speeches. However, every speech must contain four sections:
The introduction, where the speaker introduces himself to the audience and tries to win their immediate trust.
The thesis is the most critical element of the speech. It is the heart or central idea that will be corroborated throughout the talk.
The body is the bulk of the speech, and reinforces the thesis with three or four points, all proven with examples, anecdotes, facts, statistics, and illustrations.
The conclusion is the final chance the speaker has of encouraging the audience’s support and action. It must be dynamic, dramatic, and brief.
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Importance of Editing
Important to edit work
Verbs are important; use active and get rid of passive verbs
Each word, phrase, sentence, paragraph should be weighed carefully
Editor should be gutsy and use bold strokes
Concentrate on organizing copy so it flows
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Editing is the all-important final touch for the public relations writer. You must edit your work. One error can sink a perfectly worthwhile release. In a news release, a careful self-edit can save the deadliest prose. An editor must be judicious. Each word, phrase, sentence, and paragraph should be weighed carefully.
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The Dangers of Over Scripting
Sinclair Broadcasting asked its news anchors to read a script in 2018 that decried fake news
People responded that that script made the neutral, objective news anchors read copy that was not neutral
Protestors congregated in front of the White House
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Sinclair Broadcasting was considered biased and providing fake news.
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Learning Objective 15.4: Discussion Question
What are the keys in writing releases for the Internet?
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Case Study: The Raina, Inc. News Release
If you were assigned to draft a news release to accompany Sludge to the Blackrock City Council meeting on April 11, which items would you use in your lead (i.e., who, what, why, where, when, how)?
Which items would you avoid using in the news release?
If a reporter from the Blackrock Bugle called and wanted to know what happened to former Blackrock manager Fowler Aire, what would you tell the reporter?
How could Raina use the Internet to research public opinion of the pollution problem? How could the company use the Internet to communicate its position in advance of the Blackrock City Council meeting?
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