Health care managers in today's modern environment need to understand the importance and role of health information management (HIM).
MHA-FPX5016 u02a1 - Information System Job Description and Summary Learner: Elizabeth , Foster
OVERALL COMMENTS Elizabeth,
Thank you for your beginning work on assessment 2. Your paper is well written and organized but there is room for
improvement in addressing rubrics criteria 1 and 2. Please see the scoring guide for specific comments to help guide
your revisions. Be sure to highlight any changes.
Dr McGuire
RUBRICS
CRITERIA 1
Explain an organization's need for a health information professional to ensure long-term meaningful use and current incentive program compliance.
COMPETENCY
Analyze administrative, clinical, management, and decision-support information technology tools. (L12.1, 12.2,
14.3)
NON_PERFORMANCE: Does not explain an organization's need for a health information professional.
BASIC:
Explains an organization's need for a health information professional, but the relationship to compliance
with meaningful use or current incentive programs is unclear or missing.
PROFICIENT:
Explains an organization's need for a health information professional to ensure long-term meaningful use
and current incentive program compliance.
DISTINGUISHED:
Explains an organization's need for a health information professional to ensure long-term meaningful use
and current incentive program compliance; also, identifies potential challenges in ensuring that the right
professional is hired for an organization.
Comments:
You did a good job describing the need for a health information professional to ensure the safety and security
of protected health information but did not discuss the importance of meaningful use compliance and
participation in incentive programs.
CRITERIA 2
Analyze the potential financial impacts of hiring a new health information professional.
COMPETENCY
Apply best practices relative to the financial assessments and decisions required for the implementation of
health information systems. (L 8.1, 8.2, 8.4)
NON_PERFORMANCE: Does not explain the cost of hiring a new health information professional.
BASIC:
Explains the cost of hiring a new health information professional, but does not fully analyze the long-term
costs or the potential financial gains of the new hire.
PROFICIENT: Analyzes the potential financial impacts of hiring a new health information professional.
DISTINGUISHED:
Analyzes the potential financial impacts of hiring a new health information professional and identifies
knowledge gaps, unknown, missing information, unanswered questions, or areas of uncertainty (where
further information could improve the analysis).
Comments:
Although you briefly mentioned avoidance of court cases, you did not specifically discuss the financial impacts
of hiring a health information professional (i.e., annual salary, return on investment, increased reimbursement
from meaningful use incentives, avoidance of penalties for failure to comply with meaningful use
requirements, etc.).
CRITERIA 3
Support hiring need and recommendations with specific evidence to encourage buy-in from leadership.
COMPETENCY
Apply evidence to influence buy-in from all stakeholders. (L10.5)
NON_PERFORMANCE: Does not identify evidence that supports hiring need or recommendations.
BASIC:
Identifies evidence that supports hiring need and recommendations, but evidence is not especially
compelling, or not relevant to leadership.
PROFICIENT:
Supports hiring need and recommendations with specific evidence to encourage buy-in from leadership.
DISTINGUISHED:
Supports hiring need and recommendations with specific evidence to encourage buy-in from leadership;
impartially considers conflicting evidence or other perspectives.
Comments:
You did a wonderful job addressing the hiring need and included evidence-based information to support your
conclusions such as ensuring controlled access to databases and organization information while safeguarding
from breaches.
CRITERIA 4
Describe specific job functions of a new health information professional.
COMPETENCY
Analyze administrative, clinical, management, and decision-support information technology tools. (L12.1, 12.2,
14.3)
NON_PERFORMANCE: Does not describe job functions of a new health information professional.
BASIC:
Describes job functions of a new health information professional, but description is not specific or unclear.
PROFICIENT: Describes specific job functions of a new health information professional.
DISTINGUISHED:
Describes specific job functions of a new health information professional; also, identifies how job functions
align with organizational goals and needs.
Comments:
You did a good job describing the specific job functions which included a well thought out list of essential
responsibilities including providing oversight of the safety and security of protected health information.
CRITERIA 5
Explain the skills and training needed by a new health information professional to be successful in a position.
COMPETENCY
Analyze administrative, clinical, management, and decision-support information technology tools. (L12.1, 12.2,
14.3)
NON_PERFORMANCE: Does not describe the skills and training of a health information professional.
BASIC:
Describes the skills and training of a health information professional, but does not fully explain how they will
help the health information professional be successful.
PROFICIENT:
Explains the skills and training needed by a new health information professional to be successful in a
position.
DISTINGUISHED:
Explains the skills and training needed by a new health information professional to be successful in a
position and identifies specific qualifications or certifications that desirable candidates will possess.
Comments:
You did a great job describing the skills and training needed by a health information professional including a
bachelor's degree, 5 years of experience in health information, 2 years of management experience, and a
RHIA certification.
CRITERIA 6
Communicate the need for and job requirements of a health information professional in a manner that is clear and concise.
COMPETENCY
Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for professionals in
health care administration. (L6.1, L6.2, L6.3, and L6.4)
NON_PERFORMANCE:
Does not communicate the need for or the job requirements of a health information professional.
BASIC:
Communicates the need for and job requirements of a health information professional, but the approach is
somewhat unclear, or there are mechanical writing errors that reduce the effectiveness of communication.
PROFICIENT:
Communicates the need for and job requirements of a health information professional in a manner that is
clear and concise.
DISTINGUISHED:
Communicates analysis and recommendations of an electronic health records system in a manner that is
clear and concise; the written content is mechanically accurate with correct use of grammar, punctuation,
and spelling.
Comments:
Your paper was well written, organized, professional, and evidence-based.
Supplemental Feedback
CRITERIA 7
Integrate relevant sources to support assertions, correctly formatting citations and references using current APA style.
COMPETENCY
Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for professionals in
health care administration. (L6.1, L6.2, L6.3, and L6.4)
NON_PERFORMANCE:
Does not integrate relevant sources to support assertions; does not correctly format citations and references
using current APA style.
BASIC: Sources lack relevance or are poorly integrated, or citations or references are incorrectly formatted.
PROFICIENT:
Integrates relevant sources to support assertions, correctly formatting citations and references using current
APA style.
DISTINGUISHED:
Integrates relevant sources to support assertions, correctly formatting citations and references using
current APA style, which are free from all errors.
Comments:
Your paper appears to follow APA guidelines for format and style.
SUPPLEMENTAL CRITERIA 1
Purpose Compose a text that articulates meaning relevant to the main topic, scope, and purpose of the prompt
BEGINNING: This text is unrelated to the assignment prompt.
DEVELOPING:
This text is related to the assignment prompt but does not demonstrate an understanding of the main topic,
scope, and purpose.
SKILLED:
This text responds to the assignment prompt and appropriately addresses the main topic, scope, and
purpose.
ADVANCED:
This text presents a focused response to the assignment prompt and demonstrates a thorough
understanding of the main topic, scope, and purpose.
Comments:
SUPPLEMENTAL CRITERIA 2
Organization Develop text using organization, structure, and transitions that demonstrate understanding of relationship between main and subtopics
BEGINNING:
This text does not include a thesis statement and is organized inappropriately for the assignment.
DEVELOPING:
The thesis statement in this text is unclear and/or the text is presented in paragraphs with unclear main
idea(s) and/or transitional phrases.
SKILLED:
This text includes a thesis statement and is organized into paragraphs, with clear main ideas and effective
transitional phrases.
ADVANCED:
This text reflects a strong thesis statement. Additionally, this text is organized with skillful transitions into
paragraphs with clear main ideas, sufficient evidence, analysis, and linking information.
Comments:
SUPPLEMENTAL CRITERIA 3
Evidence Integrate into text appropriate use of scholarly sources and evidence
BEGINNING: This text included plagiarized information.
DEVELOPING:
This text lacks synthesis of information from sources and/or the credibility of the sources is questionable,
with many flaws in APA citation style.
SKILLED:
The included evidence was integrated and synthesized from outside sources, most of which are scholarly,
with minimal flaws in APA citation style.
ADVANCED:
The evidence in this text was integrated and synthesized from credible, scholarly, and professionally sound
sources, with minimal flaws in APA citation style.
Comments:
SUPPLEMENTAL CRITERIA 4
Tone Apply in text the standard writing conventions for the discipline, including structure, voice, person and tone
BEGINNING: Text uses language inappropriate for the intended audience.
DEVELOPING:
This text does not meet writing conventions for the discipline and lacks appropriate voice, person, and/or
tone for the intended audience.
SKILLED:
This text meets writing conventions for the discipline and there were minimal issues in appropriate use of
voice, person, or tone for the intended audience.
ADVANCED:
This text exhibits strict adherence to writing conventions for the discipline and uses appropriate voice,
person, and tone for the intended audience.
Comments:
SUPPLEMENTAL CRITERIA 5
Sentence Structure Produce text with minimal grammar, usage, spelling, and mechanical errors
BEGINNING:
Text meaning is unclear due to errors in sentence structure, grammar, usage, word choice, spelling, or
mechanics in 75% or more of text.
DEVELOPING:
Text meaning is interrupted due to sentence structure, grammar, usage, word choice, spelling, or mechanical
errors in 25%-75% or more of text.
SKILLED:
Text conveys clear meaning with minimal issues in grammar, usage, word choice, spelling, or mechanical
errors in 10%-25% of text.
ADVANCED:
Text complexity and concision conveys clear meaning, with grammar, usage, word choice, spelling, or
mechanical errors in 10% or less of text.
Comments: