Assignment 2 ( 5 pages)

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MHA-FP5064 u02a1 - Using Data for Decision Making Learner: Monna , Joseph

OVERALL COMMENTS Mona

Please read my comments on the paper viewer as well. It’s very important to address the key areas of health

care IT and infrastructure.

Your paper is very generalized and not aligning at

all with current trends in health care data collection.

We need to see you discussing EHR data, merit-based

incentive requirements, types of data typical to current health care

organizations.

I need to also see current trends and best

practices in health care data collection and analysis.

Your references were outdated - some as old as 1984. There were little to no in text citations. Cite references

with in the current 5 to 6 years.

RUBRICS

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CRITERIA 1

Describe the types of internal data available within a health care system.

COMPETENCY

Apply data classification and management techniques to decision making as a health care administrator.

NON_PERFORMANCE:

Does not list broad categories of data available within a health care system.

BASIC: Lists broad categories of data available within a health care system.

PROFICIENT: Describes the types of internal data available within a health care system.

DISTINGUISHED:

Describes the types of internal data available within a health care system needed to support high-level

decision making. Identifies areas of uncertainty and information gaps detrimental to effective decision

making.

Comments:

I did not see any categories of actual data discussed. There was not braod description of data analyzed.

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CRITERIA 2

Describe the types of external data available within a health care system.

COMPETENCY

Apply data classification and management techniques to decision making as a health care administrator.

NON_PERFORMANCE:

Does not list broad categories of data available within a health care system.

BASIC: Lists broad categories of data available within a health care system.

PROFICIENT: Describes the types of external data available within a health care system.

DISTINGUISHED:

Describes the types of external data available within a health care system needed to support high-level

decision making. Identifies areas of uncertainty and information gaps detrimental to effective decision

making.

Comments:

You needed to Describe the types of external data available within a health care system needed to

support high-level decision making. Identifies areas of uncertainty and information gaps detrimental to

effective decision making.

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CRITERIA 3

Propose strategies for accessing and analyzing available data.

COMPETENCY

Apply data classification and management techniques to decision making as a health care administrator.

NON_PERFORMANCE: Does not propose strategies for accessing and analyzing available data.

BASIC:

Proposes strategies for accessing and analyzing available data that are insufficient or impracticable.

PROFICIENT: Proposes strategies for accessing and analyzing available data.

DISTINGUISHED:

Proposes strategies for accessing and analyzing available data. Provides a concise, unbiased

assessment of the advantages and disadvantages inherent in each approach.

Comments:

Strategies were not aligned with current health care trends and did not assess advantages and

disadvantages.

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CRITERIA 4

Summarize the data needs within a health care system.

COMPETENCY

Apply data classification and management techniques to decision making as a health care administrator.

NON_PERFORMANCE: Does not summarize the data needs within a health care system.

BASIC:

Provides a superficial summary that overlooks data needs that decision makers must be cognizant of.

PROFICIENT: Summarizes the data needs within a health care system.

DISTINGUISHED:

Summarizes the data needs within a health care system. Provides a concise, accurate summary and

proposes suitable criteria for prioritizing data needs.

Comments:

Very generalized and not very clear as to the summary of data for the organization

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CRITERIA 5

Propose strategies for meeting the data needs of a health care system.

COMPETENCY

Apply data classification and management techniques to decision making as a health care administrator.

NON_PERFORMANCE:

Does not propose strategies for meeting the data needs of a health care system.

BASIC:

Proposes strategies for meeting the data needs of a health care system that are insufficient or

impracticable.

PROFICIENT: Proposes strategies for meeting the data needs of a health care system.

DISTINGUISHED:

Proposes strategies for meeting the data needs of a health care system. Provides a concise, unbiased

assessment of the advantages and disadvantages inherent in each approach.

Comments:

Your strategies were not clear and I could not fully undestand your approaches

I need to see more current trends and best practices from the literature.

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CRITERIA 6

Propose communication strategies for disseminating strategic information to end-users.

COMPETENCY

Communicate effectively with diverse audiences, in an appropriate form and style, consistent with

applicable organizational, professional, and scholarly standards.

NON_PERFORMANCE:

Does not propose communication strategies to disseminate information to end-users.

BASIC:

Proposes communication strategies to disseminate information to end-users that are insufficient or

impracticable.

PROFICIENT:

Proposes communication strategies for disseminating strategic information to end-users.

DISTINGUISHED:

Proposes communication strategies for disseminating strategic information to end-users. Presents

sound evidence to support the contention that the proposed strategies will be effective.

Comments:

I did not see a working strategy that is use for end-user communication

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CRITERIA 7

Write clearly and concisely, using correct grammar, mechanics, and APA formatting.

COMPETENCY

Communicate effectively with diverse audiences, in an appropriate form and style, consistent with

applicable organizational, professional, and scholarly standards.

NON_PERFORMANCE:

Does not write clearly and concisely, using correct grammar, mechanics, and APA formatting.

BASIC:

Writing is unclear and disorganized, includes errors in grammar and mechanics that inhibit effective

communication, or contains incorrect or improperly formatted source citations and references.

PROFICIENT: Writes clearly and concisely, using correct grammar, mechanics, and APA formatting.

DISTINGUISHED:

Writes clearly and concisely. Grammar, mechanics, and APA formatting are error-free.

Comments:

Writing was okay but often too general. References were not in APA - use hnanign indent - refer to your

APA examples and sources - use bold center headings.

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