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Comments: Some good information, but also some inaccurate information

There is no thesis statement present

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Concessions are made that the whole CAs are easily solved

Not very persuasive because you state that these issues are easily solved which makes them not very effective CAs

Since there is no turn away there cannot be a turn back

There is no turn away in the body paragraphs

Some good support present

Easy to understand and follow

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