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Darryl T Byrd

Becker, David

English 101

17 November 2019

IP Man

Ip Man , Movies are really good because there versatile and rated about all over Martial Ats movies. But Ip Man two is the best on it was written by “Edmond Wong”. It grossed over 54 million at the box office. Its about a Chinese master in the early 1930s. Who became a legend all over the world. Not because who he was but what he accomplished. This time I will tell you about when he challenged a Western boxing go head to head.

I really enjoyed all the detail and editing in this movie. All the charters and personality is have a primitive look, even the dialect of the language is spot on. Its was a 12 million budget movie made almost 50 million at the box office. This movie was filled with masters from the late 1800s. They wanted to share there tradition with Americas But when a western boxer was disrespectful to Chinese martial arts, it changed everything. That's when the chines Master challenge the western Boxer and was killed in round three. The crowed was shocked and everyone turned to IP man, to redeem the fellow master. The same maters who previously challenge IP man to a fight. Even caused him to lose his school and income

Ip man challenged the westerner to a match, that he accepted. Ip man trained hard, know the whole city was depending on him This would be IP mans, most challenging battle. Because the westerner was stronger and faster. During the battle his wife was also pregnant. So he had to prioritize on whats the most important. My legacy and obligation to the people, or my family. During the fight Ip man faced many challenges. Most of the crowed was against him also the judges. Whenever Ip man would appear to win, new rules would be added. They also continued to threaten him with disqualification. The judges even banned kicking during the third round That made him improve his fighting style. Instead of going toe to toe, he used pressure points. Even founds his weak spots. In third rounds he was viciously. Beating the westerner, while having flash back of the late master. That was killed my the westerner Ip was pronounced the winner by knock out. But he still remained humble and respect, to the westerner. The following morning, that's when Bruce Lee introduced himself. He became IP man most greatest student, that took the training to a new level. From movies to winning tournaments all over the world. But he never forgot his master and wanted the world to know him.

Ip ma was born Oct 1 1893 and passe away in 1972. The movies is the only way most even know IP man. But his legacy lives on even now. With his greatest student Bruce Lee, inspires kids all around the world.

That's my thought on IP man two and his legacy. How one man gave so many people hope. But most important it good to always be humble, in all situations. This a good family movie I recommend watching all three.

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