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Business Model Canvas Peer Review Form

Peer review the draft summary assigned to you by reading it carefully and checking the criteria below. Make specific suggestions for corrections on the draft summary. Complete the peer review form. Submit the annotated draft summary (with your track changes and comments directly into the Word draft) and this peer review form to both your instructor and your classmate.

Criteria

Yes/No

Comments

Are all nine sections of the "Business Model Canvas" included in the summary?

Yes

You well-elaborated it and we are very creative and well-knowledgeable.

Does the paper include research from at least five sources?

Yes

Yes, it does and the sources are academically

Are the sources relevant to defend the proposed business model?

Yes

The sources are part of the research and it is well-detailed throughout the paper.

Are the resources formatted properly?

Yes

Yes, they meet the criteria and well formatted

Does the flow of the paper and sentence structure make sense?

Yes

Excellent work and it is well coherent

Is the summary supported with relevant details, reasons, facts, and examples?

Both

You summarize is well wrapped up and capture my attention.

Is there a strong conclusion to the paper?

Yes

Your conclusion might be vague, but you did provide great details.

Are the mechanics of writing (spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use, etc.) correct?

I have made some corrections on some punctuations, and spelling but overall, it is ok.

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Business Model Canvas

Peer

Review Form

Peer review the

draft summary

assigned to you by reading it carefully and checking the

criteria below

. Make specific

suggestions for

corrections

on the

draft summary

. Complete the peer

review form

. S

ubmit the

a

nnotated

draft summary

(

with your

track changes and

comments directly into the

Word

draft)

and th

is

peer review

form to

both your

instructor

and your classmate

.

Criteria

Yes

/

No

Comments

Are all nine

sections

of the

"

Business Model

Canvas

"

included in the summary?

Yes

You

well

-

elaborated it and we are very creative and well

-

knowledgeable

.

Does the paper include research from at least

five

sources?

Yes

Yes,

it does and the sources are academically

Are the sources relevant to defend the proposed

business model?

Yes

T

he

sources

are part of the rese

arch and it

is well

-

detailed

throughout

the paper.

Are the resources

formatted properly?

Y

es

Yes,

they meet the cri

teria

and well formatted

Does the flow of the paper and sentence structure

make sense?

Yes

E

xcellent work and it is well coheren

t

Is the

summary

supported with relevant details,

reasons, facts, and examples?

Both

You

summarize

is well wrapped up and capt

ur

e my

at

tention.

Is there a strong conclusion to the paper?

Yes

Y

our conclusion might b

e

vague,

but you did pro

vide great

details

.

Are the mechanics of writing (spelling,

punctuation, grammar, language use, etc.) correct?

I have

made

some c

orrections

on some

punctuations

, and

spelling

but

overall,

it

is ok.

© 2021. Grand Canyon University. All Rights Reserved.

Business Model Canvas Peer Review Form

Peer review the draft summary assigned to you by reading it carefully and checking the criteria below. Make specific suggestions for

corrections on the draft summary. Complete the peer review form. Submit the annotated draft summary (with your track changes and

comments directly into the Word draft) and this peer review form to both your instructor and your classmate.

Criteria Yes/No Comments

Are all nine sections of the "Business Model

Canvas" included in the summary?

Yes

You well-elaborated it and we are very creative and well-

knowledgeable.

Does the paper include research from at least five

sources?

Yes Yes, it does and the sources are academically

Are the sources relevant to defend the proposed

business model?

Yes

The sources are part of the research and it is well-detailed

throughout the paper.

Are the resources formatted properly?

Yes Yes, they meet the criteria and well formatted

Does the flow of the paper and sentence structure

make sense?

Yes Excellent work and it is well coherent

Is the summary supported with relevant details,

reasons, facts, and examples?

Both You summarize is well wrapped up and capture my attention.

Is there a strong conclusion to the paper?

Yes

Your conclusion might be vague, but you did provide great

details.

Are the mechanics of writing (spelling,

punctuation, grammar, language use, etc.) correct?

I have made some corrections on some punctuations, and

spelling but overall, it is ok.