IFSM 300

BusinessAnalysisandSystemRec ommendationReport (1) (1).docx

by Evelyn Serrano Mundo

Submission date: 04-Nov-2020 05:42AM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1435820979 File name: BusinessAnalysisandSystemRecommendationReport_1_1_.docx (22.83K) Word count: 1132 Character count: 6235

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28% SIMILARITY INDEX

14% INTERNET SOURCES

1% PUBLICATIONS

24% STUDENT PAPERS

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2 3% 3 1% 4 1%

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BusinessAnalysisandSystemRecommendationReport (1) (1).docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to University of Maryland, University College Student Paper

www.coursehero.com Internet Source

Submitted to East Delta university Student Paper

Submitted to American Intercontinental University Online Student Paper

www.coursemerit.com Internet Source

www.footnotesfilm.com Internet Source

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FINAL GRADE

/15

BusinessAnalysisandSystemRecommendationReport (1) (1).docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

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This header isn't required.

Awk. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.

C/S Comma splice: A sentence must have both a subject and a main verb in order to be complete, but it cannot have more than one subject or main verb. A comma splice is a variety of run-on sentence that occurs when two complete sentences, each with its own subject and verb, are joined mistakenly by a comma. There are generally three methods of correcting this problem: 1) Replace the comma with a stronger mark of punctuation such as a period or semicolon, 2) use a coordinating conjunction ("and," "but," "or," "nor") to join the two constructions, or 3) make one of the two sentences a dependent construction by linking it to the other with a subordinating conjunction ("if," "when," "so that," "although," "because") or relative pronoun ("that," "which," "who," "whom," "whose").

Cap. Error Capitalization

Awk. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.

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consider adding a summary statement to explain why this is important

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in tables use single spacing.

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