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No Health Professions Advisory Committee letter is available to me for the following reason(s): (Use the additional space provided to elaborate on your reason beyond what is provided in the drop-down menu. 2000 character limit, approximately 400 words). CAUTION: If you cut and paste text from another program (i.e., MSWord) be sure to verify the character limit prior to pasting and saving your supplemental application. Otherwise, some text may be lost when pasted into the text boxes below.

The Health Professions Advisory Committee interview a limited number of students while their process of interview continued, they preferred the junior year students who had completed their supplement applications at the beginning of November 2018. By the time of November 2018, I was a senior year student and had to face difficulties due to which I could not complete all the required essays for medical schools. An issue of time existed for me at the start of my senior year. Working as a full-time student with 13 hours of study I had to spare some time for my studies along with my 14 hours’ work time per week so that I can get good grades and a grab on my knowledge of the courses. Although my 14 hours’ work time per week was more concerned with the science tutoring since this added to my knowledge and was my area of interests however sometimes managing things got somewhat difficult. Time management, however, is associated with smart work however in an attempt of gaining experience and knowledge from the different jobs and education expos I was managing another task at that time. I was also doing my biomedical practicum in the emergency room CHRISTUS Spohn Hospital at Corpus Christi for five hours per week. I believe that educational experiences are incomplete without the presence of experience in extracurricular activities. Hence to keep myself aware of the ongoing activities and managing things in a better way I also work three of my university organizations. Comment by alshammari, mashan: More than 2000 character, remember 200 character with spaces!! Also, mention that I was studying for MCAT test and I had to take some courses during that time also !!

These organizations have taught me a lot about managing events during my university semester. I was also working in Driscoll children's hospital in the surgical waiting room and welcome center for 5 hours weekly. During this intercourse what remains consistent is the need of human to do good things for the human society. Keeping in view this mindset, I have done for them a donation project for multiple data during that semester for 5 hours every two weeks. Therefore, I decide to use individual letters from my people whom I worked with and I explained to them the situation which they appreciate and accept to write the letter for AMCAS and agreed to send further letters in case I need to. Hence summarizing the facts the main reason I was unable to deliver the paper on time was that I was involved in many of the activities from time to time. The more time I spent with myself I was able to polish my skills and mindset.

Did you go on to college directly after high school ?* 1400 characters limited Comment by alshammari, mashan: I was graduated from high school at 2012!! and I came to USA on 2012 when I started studying English at ESLI school. I spent one academic year at USA studying English language and then I joined the university!! Now I am applying for medical degree after I have completed my university degree!!

My time period of joining high school after college was not direct. It was filled with some important passages that I had to follow. Being an international student from Saudi Arabia, I had to take some extra lessons for getting myself in high school. Since I wanted to start studying abroad hence I had to apply for the visa. The procedure of visa took some time. Hence I had to wait for the time when my visa application got accepted. In the process of joining of High School, it was essential for me to learn the English language as in Saudi Arabia lesser focus is given to the English Language. To have a good grip on the English Language I had to learn English in ESLI School. The learning time period consisted of one academic year. One academic year consisted of Four Semesters. Hence this was the time I spent before going into high school. Once I got graduated from ESLI with an excellent grade in the English Language I was able to join university and take my first class in the year 2013. Comment by alshammari, mashan: Go direct to the answer and do not create more words without meaning!! Comment by alshammari, mashan: I am not applying for university after high school !! I have already completed my high school at that time but I was applying for the university!! NOW, I have completed my university bachelor degree and I am applying for another degree !!

Are you expecting to go on to medical school directly after completing your undergraduate degree?* (Post bac work is NOT considered undergraduate.  If attending a post bac program prior to entering medical school, the answer is NO and should be explained.) If you took gap year(s), please use this space to explain what you have been doing prior to applying to medical school.

No, I will graduate on December 2018, and I will go back to KSA to take a break until the end of January 2019. I will continue on working on my research finish publishing it. In summer 2019, I will return to Boston, and arrange my life to start my first year in the medical school.

If you have spent more than 4 years as an undergraduate, please explain below. (You may skip this question if you have graduated within 4 years.)

At the time of summer 2014, I went back to Saudi Arabia for summer vacation. Once the two weeks of my vacation were over, I had to go through some illness which added to my tiredness. My illness continued for some time and i wasn't well before the end of the summer. One I was a bit well, I went back to the USA to start my semester in 2014. With the weakness of my illness, I tried my best to manage my medical studies but after the course of one month and with the suggestions of my doctor I took a break from my studies. This break was meant to give me some rest and to cure of the weakness gained after the illness. I dropped one semester, and I want back to KSA. In the meanwhile I got the treatment done and cured form the illness. I was suffering from heart beating and an infection in that caused chronic pain in my abdominal. Today, I am good, and I do not have any medical situation that would hinder me from seeking my medical degree. Also, as an international student, I had to take extra developmental classes required from my university for the first semester which involved the strong grip on English Language course as well. All my illness and the English Language course summed my year 2014 due to which I had to drop one full year. Comment by alshammari, mashan: How? I tried to manage my medical case, and as my classes progressed I could not completed the semester ! FIX IT

Please provide a narrative or timeline to describe any features of your educational history that you think may be of particular interest to us. For example, have you lived in another country or experienced a culture unlike your own, or worked in a field that contributed to your understanding of people unlike yourself? Or, have you experienced advanced training in any area, including the fields of art, music, or sports? This is an opportunity to describe learning experiences that may not be covered in other areas of this application or your AMCAS application. It is not necessary to write anything in this section. (2000 Characters)

For now there are many things that I want to do however a brief timeline is presented in section below: Comment by alshammari, mashan: Make it in a paragraph

October to December 15:

I will be studying at my university for my last semester and will graduate on December 15.I am working on writing my research paper about the research I have worked on over the last summer. The subject of my research is “Motor Evoked Pathway Study- From a Case Study Empirical Methods to Nuero-functional Motor Outcomes. Curative Treatment or Artifact? “.I will continue holding my work and organizational work “vice president of the red cross club at my university, an officer of the Golden key university, and volunteering five hours weekly, and work as a science tutor in my university.

December to January 30

I will travel to my country for a vacation since I have not been there since 2016!

November to May : I will work on my research and I will participate in a different volunteer trip to Africa with Saudi relief and committees' campaign if they accept me or I will join some volunteer project in Saudi Arabia.

From May 2019, I will prepare myself to travel to Boston and buy my house to be ready for starting my first-year medical school.