Business Case Analysis Essay

Bite Squad Recent Corporate Event by Hani Jamany

Submission dat e : 02- No v- 2017 11:35PM (UT C- 04 00) Submission ID: 87 36264 54 File name : bitesquad.do c (29.5K) Word count : 995 Charact e r count : 5595

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FINAL GRADE

22/50 Bite Squad Recent Corporate Event GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Comment 1 | Model

Is this the key management questio n? If so , yo u will use the strategic management co ncepts to delineate ho w the Bite Squad can impro ve its delivery system.

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Comment 2 | Company

Is this the co mpany's visio n? yo u will need to state it clearly. As the sentence stands, it so unds mo re like yo ur o pinio n o n the co mpany. T hen yo u wo uld need to back up the claim by o f f ering the inf o rmatio n o f the co mpariso n with o ther co mpanies.

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Comment 3 | Company

T his is a stro ng statement to say the co mpany do es no t have emphasis o n the delivery service, particularly the drivers which sho uld be co nsidered as emplo yees rather than custo mers. Yo u wo uld need to suppo rt this claim by explaining what the co mpany's current pro cess to recruit, train, and co mpensate the drivers.

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Comment 4 | Model

I appreciate the f act that yo u evaluate bo th pro s and co ns f o r each reco mmended actio n. Ho wever, yo u didn't apply any o f the strategic management co ncepts we have learned in this co urse, which is the primary purpo se o f this assignment.

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RUBRIC: BUSINESS CASE ANALYSIS

COMPANY (30%)

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT (0)

COMPET ENT (60)

PROFICIENT (80)

EXCELLENT (100)

MODEL (50%)

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT (0)

COMPET ENT (60)

PROFICIENT (80)

EXCELLENT (100)

GRAMMAR (10%)

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT (0)

COMPET ENT (60)

PROFICIENT (80)

EXCELLENT (100)

CIT AT ION (10%)

44.0 0 / 10 0

80 / 100

Visio n/Missio n; case inf o rmatio n

0 / 100

T he applicatio n o f strategy management co ncepts

100 / 100

100 / 100

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT (0)

COMPET ENT (60)

PROFICIENT (80)

EXCELLENT (100)