Online Peer Review for the Introduction, Counterargument, and Refutation Paragraphs

Karishma Lama

Professor: Justine White

English-1302-82701

20th April 2022

Impact of War

The Russian and Ukrainian federation is the most significant partnership for both countries,

especially Ukrainian relations with Moscow. Their relations are the key aspects of foreign

policies dependency choices, which caused geographical and geopolitical situation changes in

Ukraine. However, the collapse of (the USSR) the union of soviet socialist republics (USSR)

gave rise to the present war present to date. Also, the controversy of different views on the

commonwealth has continually added to the rise of rivalry rivalries. For Ukraine, it was to be a

form of commission for the liquidation of the USSR. But in contrast, Russia viewed it as an

instrument to store maximum post-soviet countries' integration and conduct future reintegration

States’ and the conflicts should be avoided and resolved just like personal conflicts. You must

cite where you learned all of this. NONE of this is common knowledge. You must cite.

Furthermore, you do not have an introduction. All you have provided so far is some information

about the war. You do not have a claim. You do not have any reasons to support your claim or an

opposing viewpoint. I have no idea what you are writing about or trying to prove.

According to the History of Ukrainian and Russian Wars, the conflicts between the two

countries began in the early 90s after signing the commonwealth independence and variance in

USSR. In 2014 the war escalated, and ever since, the countries have been fighting. Russia

Commented [JW1]: Spacing: Remove the extra space after paragraphs. Set your defaults in Word to correct this, or use the template provided for you in the MLA folder at the top of every unit.

Commented [JW2]: Need a better title, one that reflects your analysis/claim and isn’t a question.

Commented [JW3]: Where did you get this? You must cite where you learned this. You must cite everything you learned in the research process.

Commented [JW4]: Capitalization: Your sentence improperly capitalizes words. Either you capitalize words that should remain lower-case or you fail to capitalize proper nouns or words at the beginning of sentences.

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annexed Crimea and the action was considered unlawful and that fueled the war possibilities

even more. In addition, Vladimir Putin convened the entire night with the chiefs which result in

the escalation of war and cause over a million deaths in 2022 and people have been displaced,

leading to refugee crises, hunger, and famine AGAIN, you MUST CITE THIS. And this is not an

argument. You are just sharing some history. That is not the assignment.

("Econnect - Archived Eastfield Campus - Summer 2020 (Archived) - Special Terms/Topics -

May - HIST"). This is NOT an acceptable citation. You are required to use academic sources

from the databases and popular sources like newspapers.

Moscow said that war has occurred to stop executing genocide by Kyiv. But, according to

reporters, it was not true, and it was Putin’s plan to demilitarize and weaken the Ukrainian

government and its sovereignty regarding their federation and historical political origins. So, in

return, Ukraine’s government perceived Putin as maximalist and declared genocide accusations

against Kyiv were false.

As we found that Russia accused Kyiv of executing genocide was not true, the story took a

different turn, and the whole world knew that the war had started due to Russian greed for

superiority and revenge for the political struggles of 1991. In addition, The Ukrainians gaining

independence and collaborating with NATO threatened Putin's sense of power and dominance

(Berry, Cindy). Also, the first attack was launched by Russians against the Ukrainians which

result in Putin’s rantings on social media so, he blocked all their citizens from media profiles,

and withdrew from Twitter. Moreover, the US and Germany collaborated in helping the

Ukrainians to fight the Russians demoralized Putin’s army and it also backfired the false

accusation of the Kyiv genocide.

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I have NO idea what this mess is below. Nothing is cited correctly and I have no idea what type

of source any of that is. Why are you citing the schedule for Eastfield?? Neither of those have

ANYTHING to do with your paper.

Works Cited

"Econnect - Archived Eastfield Campus - Summer 2020 (Archived) - Special Terms/Topics -

May - HIST". Google.Com, 2022, https://www.google.com/url?client=internal-element-

cse&cx=003280707714453206804:dmkof3wyaji&q=https://schedule.dallascollege.edu/S

UMMER2020/EFC/TopicPrefix/May/HIST&sa=U&ved=2ahUKEwiI6sPxtJ_3AhUEzIU

KHXk8BaQQFnoECAUQAQ&usg=AOvVaw0b4XJCTmCBXKrzl8JOQIdr.

"Econnect - Browse Continuing Education Classes - Spring 2021 (Archived) - Berry,

Cindy". Google.Com, 2022, https://www.google.com/url?client=internal-element-

cse&cx=003280707714453206804:dmkof3wyaji&q=https://ceschedule.dallascollege.edu

/SPRING2021/Instructor/0020730&sa=U&ved=2ahUKEwi42vPkuJ_3AhWUX8AKHdU

TC6YQFnoECAAQAQ&usg=AOvVaw3KuHVZMBmVvtTzKuoPX1mH.

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