Only for good writer please

Bharati_Bhaskar_BadNews_Me mo.docx by Bhaskar Bharati

Submission dat e : 30- Dec- 2018 01:59PM (UT C- 0600) Submission ID: 10609097 95 File name : Bharati_Bhaskar_BadNews_Memo .do cx Word count : 250 Charact e r count : 1239

1

2

4

5

11% SIMILARIT Y INDEX

0% INT ERNET SOURCES

0% PUBLICAT IONS

11% ST UDENT PAPERS

1 6% 2 5%

Exclude quo tes Of f

Exclude biblio graphy Of f

Exclude matches Of f

Bharati_Bhaskar_BadNews_Memo.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to North Lake College St udent Paper

Submitted to Southern New Hampshire University - Distance Education St udent Paper

FINAL GRADE

60/100 Bharati_Bhaskar_BadNews_Memo.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

PAGE 1

Comment 1

Bhaskar, yo u need to revise yo ur letter. Yo u have repeatedly hinted that the co mpany is in f inancial tro uble, and that's no t the case at all. Read the instructio ns again.

Comment 2

this makes it so und as if the co mpany is go ing under f inancially. these statements wo uld cause co ncern f o r emplo yees. actually, yo u are just disco ntinuing the f ree T hanksgiving turkey, and yo u need to revise this f irst paragraph

Strikethrough.

Comment 4

the co mpany never paid f o r these - - - yo u did as the CEO and no w yo u can no lo nger af f o rd o r o btain 250 turkeys

PAGE 2

Comment 5

revise - - - so unds like the co mpany is in tro uble.

RUBRIC: PROPOSAL MEMO GRADING RUBRIC

FORMAT T ING

POOR (5)

FAIR (15)

GOOD (25)

EXCELLENT (30)

BODY/CONT ENT

POOR (10)

FAIR (35)

GOOD (45)

EXCELLENT (50)

GRAMMAR/ST YLE

POOR (0)

FAIR (7)

GOOD (8)

EXCELLENT (10)

PERSUASION

0 / 10 0

0 / 30

T he letter intro ductio n is missing 3 o r mo re co mpo nents.

T he letter intro ductio n is missing 2 o f the co mpo nents.

T he letter intro ductio n is missing 1 o f the co mpo nents.

T he letter intro ductio n includes all co mpo nents: the reaso n f o r writing.

0 / 50

T he student unclearly suppo rts his o r her reaso n f o r writing, the inf o rmatio n requested, identif ied yo urself , pro ject yo u are wo rking o n, why inf o rmatio n is needed, ho w yo u f o und o ut abo ut the o rganizatio n o r agency.

T he student so mewhat unclearly suppo rts his o r her reaso n f o r writing, the inf o rmatio n requested, identif ied yo urself , pro ject yo u are wo rking o n, why inf o rmatio n is needed, ho w yo u f o und o ut abo ut the o rganizatio n o r agency.

T he student so mewhat clearly suppo rts his o r her the reaso n f o r writing, the inf o rmatio n requested, identif ied yo urself , pro ject yo u are wo rking o n, why inf o rmatio n is needed, ho w yo u f o und o ut abo ut the o rganizatio n o r agency.

T he student clearly suppo rts his o r her the reaso n f o r writing, the inf o rmatio n requested, identif ied yo urself , pro ject yo u are wo rking o n, why inf o rmatio n is needed, ho w yo u f o und o ut abo ut the o rganizatio n o r agency.

0 / 10

T he letter exceeds 5 spelling and/o r grammar erro rs.

T he letter co ntains between 1- 4 spelling and/o r grammar erro rs.

T he letter co ntains no mo re than 2 spelling and/o r grammar erro rs.

T he letter co ntains no spelling and/o r grammar erro rs.

0 / 10

POOR (0)

FAIR (7)

GOOD (8)

EXCELLENT (10)

Letter is missing 2 o r mo re f o rmatting co mpo nents and/o r all co mpo nents are co mpleted inco rrectly.

Letter is missing 2 co mpo nents and/o r mo st co mpo nents are co mpleted inco rrectly.

Letter is missing 1 o f the co mpo nents and/o r so me co mpo nents are co mpleted inco rrectly.

Letter includes f o rmatting co mpo nents f o r a letter: date, salutatio n, clo sing, signature and are co mpleted co rrectly.