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but how do consumers know about Wool+Aid? Do they have advertising?

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so you need to organise this section more clearly. Here is a suggestion: Introduction - definition and explanation of good corporate citizenship. Answer to question Paragraph 1 - Thesis - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by not polluting. .. Paragraph 2- Topic sentence - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by being sustainable. Paragraph 3 - other aspects of being a good corporate citizen - maybe cannot assess yet because the company is just new???

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woolaid.edited.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

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Saleh Mohammed Kutabish, Ana Maria Soares. "chapter 9 The Role of Social

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Commerce Components on the Consumer Decision-Making Process", IGI Global, 2020 Publication

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GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

PAGE 1

Run-on This sentence may be a run-on sentence.

Comment 1

I don't think this sentence is necessary. Your lecturer knows Wool+Aid

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Text Comment. but how do consumers know about Wool+Aid? Do they have advertising? Sponsorships? etc?

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

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great 

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Comment 3

maybe start with the claim - does Wool+Aid help consumers here ? and then explain how?

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new paragraph 

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

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Text Comment. this paragraph is too long

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What is this?

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Maybe add

Based on these principles Wool+Aid can be considered a good corporate citizen

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NEw paragraph

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into 

Proofread This part of the sentence contains an error or misspelling that makes your meaning unclear.

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and never disappear 

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Comment 10

this is very repetitive - can you organize the ideas that are similar together?

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repetitive 

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Text Comment. so you need to organise this section more clearly. Here is a suggestion: Introduction - definition and explanation of good corporate citizenship. Answer to question Paragraph 1 - Thesis - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by not polluting. .. Paragraph 2- Topic sentence - Wool+Aid is a good corporate citizen because it protects the environment by being sustainable. Paragraph 3 - other aspects of being a good corporate citizen - maybe cannot assess yet because the company is just new???

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