Essay
Step 1: Working Thesis
Is the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?
Step 2: Ask Questions
What is Peloton?
What is spinning?
What are the benefits of using Peloton?
What does Peloton stand for?
How many people can participate in Peloton classes?
What is the history of Peloton?
What does Peloton stand for?
Why do people feel the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?
Step 3: Reorganize the Questions
Introduction
What is Peloton?
What is spinning?
How many people can participate in Peloton classes?
What is the history of Peloton?
Why do people feel the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?
Body
What are the benefits of using Peloton?
Conclusion
What does Peloton stand for?
Step 4: Do Your Research on the Questions
Step 5: Answer the Questions
Introduction
What is Peloton?
What is spinning?
How many people can participate in Peloton classes?
What is the history of Peloton?
Why do people feel the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?
Body
What are the benefits of using Peloton?
Conclusion
What does Peloton stand for?
Step 6: Partial Outline – Creating Outline from the Brainstorming
Introduction
Spinning in general
Define spinning
History of spinning
Madd Dog Athletics
Peloton in general
Mission statement
Services and products
Thesis
Body
Criticism to the ad
Elitism (Ortiz, 2019)
Price
“Peloton is for everyone.”
Feminism (Ortiz, 2019)
Your definition
Sexism (Ortiz, 2019)
Dystopian (Ortiz, 2019)
Black Mirror
Conclusion
Peloton’s response to the criticism
Next bike (article)
Reducing price of original bike (article)
Peloton’s actions during COVID-19
Your impressions
Step 7: Complete Outline – Filling in the Outline (start thinking paragraphs; THIS IS YOUR ROUGH DRAFT)
Introduction
Spinning in general
Define spinning
History of spinning
Madd Dog Athletics
Peloton in general
Mission statement
Services and products
Thesis
Body
Criticism to the ad
Elitism
Price
“Peloton is for everyone.”
Feminism
Your definition
Sexism
Dystopian
Black Mirror
Conclusion
Peloton’s response to the criticism
Next bike (article)
Reducing price of original bike (article)
Peloton’s actions during COVID-19
Your impressions
Step 8: Turn Bullets into Sentences in Paragraph Form
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