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Step 1: Working Thesis

Is the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?

Step 2: Ask Questions

What is Peloton?

What is spinning?

What are the benefits of using Peloton?

What does Peloton stand for?

How many people can participate in Peloton classes?

What is the history of Peloton?

What does Peloton stand for?

Why do people feel the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?

Step 3: Reorganize the Questions

Introduction

What is Peloton?

What is spinning?

How many people can participate in Peloton classes?

What is the history of Peloton?

Why do people feel the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?

Body

What are the benefits of using Peloton?

Conclusion

What does Peloton stand for?

Step 4: Do Your Research on the Questions

Step 5: Answer the Questions

Introduction

What is Peloton?

What is spinning?

How many people can participate in Peloton classes?

What is the history of Peloton?

Why do people feel the Peloton Christmas advertisement sexist, dystopian, elitist, and feminist?

Body

What are the benefits of using Peloton?

Conclusion

What does Peloton stand for?

Step 6: Partial Outline – Creating Outline from the Brainstorming

Introduction

Spinning in general

Define spinning

History of spinning

Madd Dog Athletics

Peloton in general

Mission statement

Services and products

Thesis

Body

Criticism to the ad

Elitism (Ortiz, 2019)

Price

“Peloton is for everyone.”

Feminism (Ortiz, 2019)

Your definition

Sexism (Ortiz, 2019)

Dystopian (Ortiz, 2019)

Black Mirror

Conclusion

Peloton’s response to the criticism

Next bike (article)

Reducing price of original bike (article)

Peloton’s actions during COVID-19

Your impressions

Step 7: Complete Outline – Filling in the Outline (start thinking paragraphs; THIS IS YOUR ROUGH DRAFT)

Introduction

Spinning in general

Define spinning

History of spinning

Madd Dog Athletics

Peloton in general

Mission statement

Services and products

Thesis

Body

Criticism to the ad

Elitism

Price

“Peloton is for everyone.”

Feminism

Your definition

Sexism

Dystopian

Black Mirror

Conclusion

Peloton’s response to the criticism

Next bike (article)

Reducing price of original bike (article)

Peloton’s actions during COVID-19

Your impressions

Step 8: Turn Bullets into Sentences in Paragraph Form

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