Topic Sentence: Parents should be required to vaccinate their children.
Thesis Statement: All parents should be required to vaccinate their children according to approved state immunization schedule.
Main point1: Vaccination protects the children from infectious and communicable viral diseases.
Topic Sentence1: First, vaccines are developed to work in the body as artificial immunity which reduces the risk of infection in a safe manner.
Main point2: To minimize the risk of common viral disease, children are required to vaccinate.
Topic Sentences2: Furthermore, receiving vaccinations according to the state approved vaccination has played a significant role in minimizing the risk of viral infection.
Main point3: Children are prone to be immune-comprised if they were not vaccinate as immunization schedule.
Topic sentence3: Similarly, another reason parents should be required to vaccinate their children is to prevent them from becoming immune-compromised.
Main point4: It is a responsibility of parents to vaccinate children to make the family and community safer.
Topic Sentence4: Additionally, parents are responsible for taking care of their family's well-being, which includes preventing disease and illness.
Main point5: Vaccinating the children as immunization schedules prevents the parents from major financial cost as viral infectious disease treatment are expensive.
Topic Sentence5: Lastly, vaccinating children according to the immunization schedule decrease the risk of parents incurring the cost of medical bills if the child were to become ill with a preventable virus or disease.
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