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An attractive and healthy premises are important because they are likely to increase our customer base. Also, proper circulation of air is important because it motive employees to work. However, the interior is not attractive or inviting for clients/customers and employees. The off-white walls throughout the complex seem dull and boring, adjectives the tenants do not want associated with their businesses. In addition, the air in the building is musty and unpleasant at times. Green Thumb Planting can provide and maintain a beautiful plantscape in the building that will attract visitors and employees as well as purify the air and introduce more oxygen. Research shows that people respond positively to interiors with at least two plants per room. These changes can be made in an unobtrusive, cost-effective manner. Green Thumb planting can provide and more importantly create an attractive working environment. We have a team of professionals and associates qualified in interior design. In addition they are motivated to offer quality services to ensure our clients satisfied. Furthermore we work together with the client to ensure favorable terms of contract. Our teams is composed of experienced and passionate workers that will help eliminate the problem. Objectives of Proposed Plan Installing plantings in Mason Office Center will give visitors and employees a more appealing and cleaner environment, producing positive feelings and greater productivity. Background I have been in the interior plant maintenance business for 32 years and have owned and operated Green Thumb Planting for the last seven years. All associates with Green Thumb Planting take pride in their work, and Green Thumb is happy to provide references. Methods Within two weeks of your signing a contract, our design team will interview you and produce a plan showing installation, including the number and types of plants, color and design of containers, and placement. The team will adjust the plan according to your preference. Furthermore, Green Thumb is concerned about the environment and thus uses only organic methods. No harmful chemicals are used in its plants capes. Based on Green Thumb’s design formula, the building could use 31 large and 14 medium-sized low-light plants. Green Thumb’s service agreement provides plants and pots, weekly maintenance, and monthly replacement of weak plants. Scheduling When a plan is agreed upon, Green Thumb will schedule installation within one week. Installation can be accomplished during the evening hours to avoid interrupting your tenants’ business activities. All soil and materials will be brought into the building in specially designed trolleys to prevent spillage and damage to floors. I anticipate being able to complete the job in two nights. Once the plantscape is installed, Green Thumb Planting staff will visit Mason Office Center once a week to maintain the plants. Capabilities and Qualifications of Personnel I have a BS degree in landscape design and 32 years of experience in the business. In addition, all personnel have undergone thorough background and criminal checks and are bonded. Your satisfaction with Green Thumb’s plantings and employees are guaranteed. Budget The installation cost is $923.40, and the monthly maintenance fee is $75.00 per month. You will incur no other charges to have an inviting, attractive, clean green environment in Mason Office Building. Installation costs include the following: 31 large 6 braided ficus trees at $25 each $150.00   6 chamaedorea palms at $20 120.00   10 herb topiaries at $20 200.00   9 Chinese evergreens at $25 225.00 14 medium   5 moth orchids at $15 $ 75.00   9 angel ivy at $15 135.00 SUBTOTAL $905.00 Tax 8% 72.40 Element to consider in the proposal Supply cost Labor cost Logistics involved in the project and how they might result to additional costs in the budget. TOTAL $977.4 Conclusion For an effortless, inexpensive, attractive, clean environment at Mason Office Center, accept Green Thumb’s proposal. Please send a memorandum of acceptance to Green Thumb Planting, 101 Sienna Way, Ayden, NC 28513-7101. Green Thumb provide classic services the most elegant styles in the market. We have been in the industry for a considerably long period of time. We have worked with many clients and delivered beyond their expectations. We have a team of experts and profession who will work tirelessly to ensure your problem is solved. We believe in the power of having an attractive interior for relaxation and psychological comfort. Considering your problem, it is important to have a relaxing working environment. This is important because it helps to maintain clients and increase employees’ base. Green Thumb is cost considerate, and environment friendly. I want to thank you for your time and I also look forward to hearing from you next week. References Veleva, V., & Ellenbecker, M. (2000). A proposal for measuring business sustainability. Greener Management International, 31(3), 101-120. Cases, E. S. (2017). Template. Easterby-Smith, M., Thorpe, R., Jackson, P. R., & Jaspersen, L. J. (2018). Management and Business Research. Sage. Proposal Critique Business proposals are very important in today’s business world. It is, therefore, imperative to consider various components when writing a business proposal. One of the main problems with this proposal is that it doesn’t show how the contractor will completely solve the problem. Although the proposal has mentioned some of Green Thumb’s strengths, they are not persuasive enough. Mason Office Centre is looking forward to hiring interior design services. They want their offices decorated and the premises beautified. Mason Office want to provide a healthy and favorable working environment. Ultimately Mason Office wants to ensure customers and clients satisfaction. However, Green Thumb doesn’t package its services in a convincing manner. It should have presented itself in such a way that Mason Office would have no choice but to hire them. The proposal also ignores another important component of the proposal. The budget section should be explicit to allow Mason Office to examine whether they can afford the services of Green Thumb. This means that this section should include every item that might affect the costs of the project. Similarly, Green Thumb doesn’t involve future unforeseen costs. It would have been important to mention that the total costs mentioned in the proposal include an estimates which could change in the future. The proposal doesn’t capture the conclusion parts clearly. This section should try to resonate with Mason Office problems and remind them that Green Thumb is the best and the most experienced contractor to solve their problem. To: Name of the recipient From: Name of the Company or Business Date: 8th March 8, 2019 Subject: Proposal for Plant Service Problem and Solution Mason Office Center is a lovely Georgian building containing four offices. Mason Office is Center is in need of a designer to help with the landscaping and beautifying of our offices. An attractive and healthy premises are important because they are likely to increase our customer base. Also, proper circulation of air is important because it motive employees to work. However, the interior is not attractive or inviting for clients/customers and employees. The off-white walls throughout the complex seem dull and boring, adjectives the tenants do not want associated with their businesses. In addition, the air in the building is musty and unpleasant at times. Green Thumb Planting can provide and maintain a beautiful plantscape in the building that will attract visitors and employees as well as purify the air and introduce more oxygen. Research shows that people respond positively to interiors with at least two plants per room. These changes can be made in an unobtrusive, cost-effective manner. Green Thumb planting can provide and more importantly create an attractive working environment. We have a team of professionals and associates qualified in interior design. In addition they are motivated to offer quality services to ensure our clients satisfied. Furthermore we work together with the client to ensure favorable terms of contract. Our teams is composed of experienced and passionate workers that will help eliminate the problem. Objectives of Proposed Plan Installing plantings in Mason Office Center will give visitors and employees a more appealing and cleaner environment, producing positive feelings and greater productivity. Background I have been in the interior plant maintenance business for 32 years and have owned and operated Green Thumb Planting for the last seven years. All associates with Green Thumb Planting take pride in their work, and Green Thumb is happy to provide references. Methods Within two weeks of your signing a contract, our design team will interview you and produce a plan showing installation, including the number and types of plants, color and design of containers, and placement. The team will adjust the plan according to your preference. Furthermore, Green Thumb is concerned about the environment and thus uses only organic methods. No harmful chemicals are used in its plants capes. Based on Green Thumb’s design formula, the building could use 31 large and 14 medium-sized low-light plants. Green Thumb’s service agreement provides plants and pots, weekly maintenance, and monthly replacement of weak plants. Scheduling When a plan is agreed upon, Green Thumb will schedule installation within one week. Installation can be accomplished during the evening hours to avoid interrupting your tenants’ business activities. All soil and materials will be brought into the building in specially designed trolleys to prevent spillage and damage to floors. I anticipate being able to complete the job in two nights. Once the plantscape is installed, Green Thumb Planting staff will visit Mason Office Center once a week to maintain the plants. Capabilities and Qualifications of Personnel I have a BS degree in landscape design and 32 years of experience in the business. In addition, all personnel have undergone thorough background and criminal checks and are bonded. Your satisfaction with Green Thumb’s plantings and employees are guaranteed. Budget The installation cost is $923.40, and the monthly maintenance fee is $75.00 per month. You will incur no other charges to have an inviting, attractive, clean green environment in Mason Office Building. Installation costs include the following: 31 large 6 braided ficus trees at $25 each $150.00 6 chamaedorea palms at $20 120.00 10 herb topiaries at $20 200.00 9 Chinese evergreens at $25 225.00 14 medium 5 moth orchids at $15 $ 75.00 9 angel ivy at $15 135.00 SUBTOTAL $905.00 Tax 8% 72.40 Element to consider in the proposal Supply cost Labor cost Logistics involved in the project and how they might result to additional costs in the budget. TOTAL $977.4 Conclusion For an effortless, inexpensive, attractive, clean environment at Mason Office Center, accept Green Thumb’s proposal. Please send a memorandum of acceptance to Green Thumb Planting, 101 Sienna Way, Ayden, NC 28513-7101. Green Thumb provide classic services the most elegant styles in the market. We have been in the industry for a considerably long period of time. We have worked with many clients and delivered beyond their expectations. We have a team of experts and profession who will work tirelessly to ensure your problem is solved. We believe in the power of having an attractive interior for relaxation and psychological comfort. Considering your problem, it is important to have a relaxing working environment. This is important because it helps to maintain clients and increase employees’ base. Green Thumb is cost considerate, and environment friendly. I want to thank you for your time and I also look forward to hearing from you next week. References Veleva, V., & Ellenbecker, M. (2000). A proposal for measuring business sustainability. Greener Management International, 31(3), 101-120. Cases, E. S. (2017). Template. Easterby-Smith, M., Thorpe, R., Jackson, P. R., & Jaspersen, L. J. (2018). Management and Business Research. Sage. Proposal Critique Business proposals are very important in today’s business world. It is, therefore, imperative to consider various components when writing a business proposal. One of the main problems with this proposal is that it doesn’t show how the contractor will completely solve the problem. Although the proposal has mentioned some of Green Thumb’s strengths, they are not persuasive enough. Mason Office Centre is looking forward to hiring interior design services. They want their offices decorated and the premises beautified. Mason Office want to provide a healthy and favorable working environment. Ultimately Mason Office wants to ensure customers and clients satisfaction. However, Green Thumb doesn’t package its services in a convincing manner. It should have presented itself in such a way that Mason Office would have no choice but to hire them. The proposal also ignores another important component of the proposal. The budget section should be explicit to allow Mason Office to examine whether they can afford the services of Green Thumb. This means that this section should include every item that might affect the costs of the project. Similarly, Green Thumb doesn’t involve future unforeseen costs. It would have been important to mention that the total costs mentioned in the proposal include an estimates which could change in the future. The proposal doesn’t capture the conclusion parts clearly. 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