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Assignment # 4 Writing.docx by Lashunda Johnson

Submission date: 30-Nov-2021 11:15PM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1717063352 File name: Assignment_4_Writing.docx (21.47K) Word count: 2427 Character count: 13886

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Assignment # 4 Writing.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

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Submitted to Federation University Student Paper

Submitted to La Trobe University Student Paper

researchcommons.waikato.ac.nz Internet Source

Submitted to University of Maryland, University College Student Paper

pearl.plymouth.ac.uk Internet Source

Submitted to Acknowledge Education Pty Ltd Student Paper

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www.apta.org Internet Source

Arpit Singh, Subhas Chandra Misra. "A Dominance based Rough Set analysis for investigating employee perception of safety at workplace and safety compliance", Safety Science, 2020 Publication

FINAL GRADE

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Assignment # 4 Writing.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

This is a promising start for your research-based report. Make sure to review the assignment instructions again to ensure you do not miss any of the requirements. And make sure:

●      to include at least 9 secondary sources that are articles from scholarly journals and trade publications, published in the last 10 years.

●      and 5 of those 9 secondary sources are articles from peer-reviewed scholarly journals.

Also, take the opportunity to look at the sample research-based reports along with the writing resources linked in the course content area, especially the Victoria Business School’s “How to Write a Business Report.”

Note here are some reoccurring grammar errors you need to revise in your final draft:

1.     passive voice misuse

2.     wordy sentences

3.     word choice

4.     comma misuse

5.     unclear sentences

6.     punctuation in compound/complex sentences

See Purdue OWL’s Grammar guide at https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/gramm

See Purdue Owl’s Mechanics guide at https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/mecha

See Purdue OWL’s Punctuation guide at https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctu

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develop your memo to strengthen your report’s purpose and the future actions that need to be taken

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use single-spaced formatting throughout

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review APA headings format and revise throughout: See https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/apa_style/apa_formatting_and_style_gu

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remove justified alignment; use left alignment

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your executive summary needs to include your report’s important findings, conclusions, and recommendations

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the purpose of your introduction is to function as a preview of the report; it is important to provide context and discuss the reason for the report – background, purpose, overview of methodology

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overall, consider your secondary sources and evaluate how they can provide support for your report and/or supply alternative evaluation to display the credibility of your report. Remember your audience. Try using one or two scholarly journal articles to help you evaluate the style, language, and content of your report. When revising, do not hesitate to restructure your introduction, layout, and conclusion to present a cohesive and compelling argument.

Comment 9

do not forget to fix all mechanics and grammar errors before submitting the final draft; I did not excessively copyedit this submission (see Feedback Summary). Please review the comments in your memo to decision-maker and your background review and synthesis of literature drafts. Reading your writing aloud is a useful proofreading tool.

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as with your background review and synthesis of literature, it is essential to accurately follow APA style guidelines, so correct any citing errors as you revise

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