CRITICAL R

ASSIGNMEN 2 FEEDBACK

While the poor practice is described., it would be good to have your research question included in the introduction, although from your explanation, i can determine what the poor practice is.

You have provided sufficient critical discourse on the various sections required for this assessment.

The Discussion section is a little brief. I can see you have read the articles/literature you have chosen for this assessment. But the paper would have been improved if you were able to link these back to your poor practice. You could have discussed in more detail some strategies on how to address your poor practice based on the evidence. 

Your paper is easy to read. Word limit adhered. Ref list follows APA7th format.