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Assigment1Revison.docx

For assignment 1, I underlined in the Wisconsin madison community and the Seattle community. I don’t know the meaning of these two parts, because these two are place names. I remember that the definition of Community in those two short stories is not simply that I am in Where I lived is what community I joined. These two parts give me the feeling, which can be summed up as "I lived in Beijing, he gave me a very important meaning, everyone has the same goal" "I am in Shanghai Having lived, he was a very important part of my experience. Living in Shanghai has brought me a lot of positive influences. ”It feels more general, and in fact, I feel that where I live, it is far-fetched to live in which community. Because, in addition to living here, what is more meaningful is what is done here, and there does not seem to be a saying like Seattle community? For example, the Beijing community and the Beijing community are strange. Then I hope to delete the madison community, and write less, you can add one, just write a story. For example, I participated in a domestic volunteer, it is a team organization community, and the people inside are enthusiastic Or something, then what have we done, we go to poor places to teach, etc. This community makes me feel that I have achieved my social value. Then the Seattle community wrote more, that is, "First, the Seattle community is one of the communities that seem to be more critical because it forms the basis of human behavior." I feel a bit too exaggerated, that is, It is important because it forms the basis of human behavior, because this is equivalent to writing yourself, and the writer can edit it. For example, the Seattle community is important because I have studied here for two years, and these two years are also my first arrival in the United States, so It has a great impact on me, and how important it is. For example, I met a lot of like-minded friends here. We have a common goal. Then Seattle has a cultural color and is the capital of art. I went to many art galleries. I am more interested, so I now prefer to design some artistic posters. In summary, I hope that the author wrote some specific content. Don't say it very broadly, this community has improved my body and soul. This place is also relatively well-known, so it is important to me.

For assignment 2, I felt that the content was okay, but it was a bit blunt. I felt that the contents of the first three topics were repeated, and then my own understanding was relatively small, mainly one topic was written in four or five lines. Like repeating the original content of the article, can you reduce the number of subtitles, and then choose to write one of the topics more clearly and deeply?