Wellbeing Persuasive Essay
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ASSESSMENTTASK1updated-Nov20171.docxASSESSMENT TASK 1: HEALTH RATIONALE
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Marking schema |
N (0-49) Fail (POOR) |
P (50-59) Pass (SATISFACTORY) |
C (60-69) Credit (GOOD) |
D (70-79) Distinction (VERY GOOD) |
HD(80-100) High Distinction (OUTSTANDING) |
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Part A: Content (30) |
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Defined health priority and framed this within constructs of wellbeing
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Student established the relevance of their topic to the CURRENT health priority areas in a specific context
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Student provided a thorough overview of the key debates and issues around their topic
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Described the health determinants of this issue, including the risk factors
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Considered more than one dimension or elements of wellbeing in the overview
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Student made it clear the target group for the particular focus of the health priority and argued a case for this in the rationale
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Health promotion actions and strategies with examples to address the issue to improve health outcomes for stakeholders are suggested and discussed
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Applies fundamentals of Ottawa Charter
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Student justified the need for health promotion in their chosen area of health by showing a critical analysis of relevant research and literature to support their argument
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Part B: Style/Presentation (5) |
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Fluency of writing, grammar and punctuation
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Referencing (APA) in text citations and reference list |
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Your rationale and argument valid; adopted the qualities of a persuasive essay
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Word count (1,500 words +/- 10%) |
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Final Mark /35
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