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COMPETENCY 1

Evaluate qualities and skills that promote effective leadership within health care organizations.

CRITERION

Analyze the leadership characteristics and skills most desired in the person leading potential performance improvement projects, taking both an AI and SWOT approach.

Your result: Non-Performance

Non-Performance

Does not analyze leadership characteristics and skills most desired in the person leading potential performance improvement projects.

Faculty Comments:

Leadership characteristics and skills should be defined. This is the person who will be conducting the performance improvement. Examples are Possibly an MSN, 5 years of experience in PI and QI. 

COMPETENCY 2

Apply strategies to lead high-performing health care teams to meet organizational quality and safety goals.

CRITERION

Synthesize stories and evidence about times when a care setting performed at its best with regard to quality and safety goals.

Your result: Non-Performance

Non-Performance

Does not list stories and evidence about times when a care setting performed at its best with regard to quality and safety goals.

Faculty Comments:

You explained your setting and stated goals. Knowledge gaps, unknowns, and missing information were missing from your paper. There was no story to synthesize. An example of a story that will meet the criteria would be: Samuel lives in a nursing home. He spends many long days and nights alone and his basic needs go unmet. 

CRITERION

Conduct a SWOT analysis of a care setting, with respect to quality and safety goals.

Your result: Proficient

Proficient

Conducts a SWOT analysis of a care setting, with respect to quality and safety goals.

Faculty Comments:

SWOT analysis is very good. You brought up some very good points. To elevate to distinguished present conflicting data and other perspectives. An example would be comparing care homes in other countries that may be lacking in resources. 

CRITERION

Describe an area of concern identified in a SWOT analysis�relevant to a care setting's mission, vision, and values�that should be improved.

Your result: Non-Performance

Non-Performance

Does not describe an area of concern identified in a SWOT analysis that should be improved.

Faculty Comments:

In your SWOT an area of concern would be lack of procedures for delivering safe patient care. You write about addressing the issues, but a great way to explain would be to say: There is great concern surrounding lack of procedures for safe delivery of care evidenced by�..

CRITERION

Compare the AI and SWOT approaches to analysis with regard to data gathering and interactions with others.

Your result: Non-Performance

Non-Performance

Does not describe data gathering and interactions with others.

Faculty Comments:

you have compared AI to SWOT, but data gathering and interactions are not discussed. 

COMPETENCY 3

Apply cultural, ethical, and regulatory considerations to leadership decision making.

CRITERION

Propose positive, attainable quality and safety improvement goals for a care setting.

Your result: Proficient

Proficient

Proposes positive, attainable quality and safety improvement goals for a care setting.

Faculty Comments:

Goals are attainable. To elevate to distinguished, tell the reader the assumptions you are about the goals. An example would be what will make these goals a good solution. 

COMPETENCY 4

Communicate with stakeholders and constituencies to build collaborative partnerships and create inclusive work environments.

CRITERION

Communicate analyses clearly and in a way that demonstrates professionalism and respect for stakeholders and colleagues.

Your result: Proficient

Proficient

Communicates analyses clearly and in a way that demonstrates professionalism and respect for stakeholders and colleagues.

Faculty Comments:

Explain the analysis. The analysis demonstrated that when procedures were implemented, the quality of patient care increased as evidenced by lower depression scores.

CRITERION

Integrate relevant and credible sources of evidence to support assertions, correctly formatting citations and references using APA style.

Your result: Basic

Basic

Sources lack relevance or credibility, are poorly integrated, or are incorrectly formatted.

Faculty Comments:

Remove the words running head Reference page remove the italics Check the APA 7th edition manual.