assessment #2 Class1

Your paper topic looks very interesting, however adjustments are needed. Your SafeAssign Score was unacceptable. I noticed that you had a high rating in Assessment 1, as well. Please use a draft SafeAssign for the editing of future papers. Review the shaded matches in the current report, as you are matching the words of others. When quoting the work of others, use quotation marks and citations with the page number. The other (and best) option is to rewrite using your own words. This practice is especially important to show your competency in creating an annotated bibliography. It is best to use your own words, instead of lengthy quotations. See the SafeAssign tab in the course room for additional details about SafeAssign, including the draft SafeAssign area.

The scoring guide shows that your Assessment 2 has not been completed successfully. To successfully complete each course, you must complete all assessments and demonstrate all course competencies at the level of: Basic or above for undergraduate-level courses. After each assessment is evaluated, your Competency Map shows your updated, cumulative progress toward demonstrating each course competency. You can access your Competency Map via the course home page or from your academic plan on Campus. Note: In this course, please ensure that you highlight all areas of revisions in yellow when resubmitting any assessments for regrading.