Order 805390: Artifact Analysis

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A Message from Your Body

The clip “A Message from Your Body” is complaining how our body has always been treated with less care. Comparing itself to a one million horse who you will never allow it to smoke or even eat junk food. Even twenty dollars dog or a two dollars cat will never get the same treatment. However, with the ambitions to become more successful than a person usually does, of†en sacrifice their well-being for money. It is true and sees when a person spends most of the time working and most of the smokers who smoke and destroys their bodies. Also, the alcohol drinkers consume most of their evening times in a pub after a tedious day to get lose from the stress after a long day; the same excuse as the smoker. They, later on, drink more alcohol and harms their bodies with excessive consumption of alcohol. In the process, they waste their precious bodies as throughout the process their bodies wear out keeping in mind that the bodies have no repairs like other machines.

How you treat your body badly will for sure bring in some dramatic changes to you because, after some period of time with smoking and excessive use of alcohol, the body will then wears it out. The main reason for this is that you forget to treat it well during the time of need but instead, the junk food is given to it, smoking it out and excessive alcohol drinking is what it receives. With all harms, it will not take much anymore but will merely break down and will need money to recuperate it again.

The worth of the body is more billion dollars; it’s the value cannot be weighed in the scale of dollars and cents. Taking care of our bodies, which are the primary purpose of our existence. The video asks if you could take a million dollars in exchange for the eyesight, for the arms or your limbs. The answer will always be no, it is because no one will like to lose any part of their body; no one would take a million dollars and in an exchange with not able to see the gorgeous sunlight in rest of their life. Everyone believes that their bodies are so precious and they don’t want to miss them. Losing any part of the body for any cost will never be the dream of any person, and they will hope to have their bodies up to the end of their time. Therefore, we should act like it, take care of it and stop destroying it.

The whole chip use personification to describe your body as a person writing a letter to you. It complains that you will always try to make yourself look perfect when you are taking a picture that will be posted on the social media. You will try to make it look perfect, but during other time, you do not care about your body but taking it for granted and not even saying thanks or be grateful for your body. It ironic when the author told us to take time to thank all your body as one. Seems like we never really cherish what our body and what it has done for us, which is true. For the good things that have done for you, it is time to sit back and thank your every part of your body. This is the best moment that you should start treating it well so that you won’t pay back in your later life.

The clip directs you to place your hands on the chest, listens to your heartbeats, and remembers to say thank you to your heart beats. You then look to every other part; arms you use for climbing, lungs that are helpful in breathing, head for the memory storage, and every other part that are useful for daily activities. It is time to treat your body what it worth. You know how precious the body is and it worth much. In the clip, we see a woman running and having the training attire that merely shows how we should treat our bodies with much appreciation. We should go for training to strengthen and maintain fit our bodies. We should take our bodies as the most crucial thing more than any other thing.

The tone of the speaker is serious and sad in how it receives its treatment. It tones reflects its sad moods of a great unfairness where a person uses it to make money and instead of giving the excellent care of it is mistreated by excessive alcohol and smoke. The voice of the speaker can also tell the feeling according to the sentence structure, and imagery shows a real tone. The words are chosen in a moderate tone but sound heavier and have more weights and say more about the feeling of the speaker asking for better care that it deserves.

In conclusion, our bodies are the most critical asset in our life; it's our everything. “We are what we eat”, we have the responsibility of taking care of it. In that matter, we should always take some time every day to appreciate what our bodies are capable of doing. We do what we have to do because of our bodies.