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A big challenge is that these are two different building types - a mosque and a palace, and they were built in two different places. If you want to argue that there is a basis for comparison, you must define those terms.

For example, what formal elements do they share? Courtyards, domes, towers, arches? How do they relate to their sites? Hillside, urban, coastal, etc? What activities do they share, and how do they differ? Worship, social gathering, vs royal residence and administration center, workshops, etc? What about the use of light, sound, water, cooling and ventilation? What about geometry, structural systems, and scale? Who has access, what parts are public vs private?

You need more diagrams to identify these elements and systems, and you need to label the diagrams to reference the text.

There are no citations in the text. You must cite your sources when you quote another's writing or include specific information.