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Chinese Government Should Promote the WeChat 1

Chinese Government Should Promote the WeChat Use All over the World Because of the Positive

Impacts

Greenriver College

Tianyu yang

May 19th

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Chinese Government Should Promote the WeChat Use All over the World Because of the

Positive Impacts

The social media’s growth is accelerating, this phenomenon is happening all cities, which

included China. Social media has a basis of user relationship that relies on product contents and

exchange platforms that depends on the Internet (Rong, 2016 p.5). This statement emphasizes that

social media has a close relationship with social and economic development. The development of

social and economic perspectives is the foundation of the emergence of social media growth. With

the social and economic development of China, there are many social media platforms that appeared

in China, such as WeChat, Tencent OO, and Weibo. Especially, WeChat has accelerated growth in

China recently, and it has an excellent influence on Chinese people. Therefore, the Chinese

government should increase the use of WeChat all over the world for reasons that WeChat has a

higher consumption than other social media platforms, WeChat is more convenient than other social

media platforms, and WeChat has higher safety elements than other social networking sites.

The social media platform, WeChat, should be promoted by the Chinese government

worldwide because it has reached a higher consumption than other social media platforms. It is

reported that the information consumption of China that is driven by WeChat arrived RMB 209.7

billion in the year of 2018, and the consumption of WeChat in the data traffic uses occupied almost

34% of the total users (Graziani, 2018). This statement shows that the development of WeChat has a

vital role in Chinese economic growth. Because WeChat can create the excellent value for China

because Wechat can do a lot of things by using an app, it can not communicate with people, but alaso

record life. We can also know all kinds of news through Wechat and buy many products we need

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Explain this. Why is it positive?
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You should explain what WeChat is here. How does it work?
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What makes it better than other platforms?

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through Wechat. Many times, people can also relax themselves through Wechat games. Such a

versatile app will have more users using it. He will bring better sales to China. For example, it also

can produce a similar influence on other countries’ development. Besides, WeChat creates an

outstanding share of the overall mobile traffic in China, that is about 34% of the total mobile traffic

users, and compared with Facebook, it only occupies 14% of the total mobile traffic users in North

America (Graziani, 2018). According to the course material, Hughes (2019) also points out the

disadvantages of Facebook of sloppy privacy practices. The comparison of occupation of mobile

traffic users in China and North America emphasizes that Chines government should promote

WeChat use all over the world to increase the overall economic growth of China. The economic

value created by WeChat also includes the jobs created by it. It is reported that WeChat has helped

China to create almost 20.3 million job positions in the year of 2017, which has exceeded twice

compared to the jobs created by WeChat in the year of 2014. Combined the consumption created by

WeChat and jobs created by it, the Chinese government should increase the use of WeChat all over

the world.

Because WeChat is more convenient than other social media platforms, the Chinese

government should push it to the world to enlarge its value all over the world. On the one hand,

WeChat could facilitate communication with other people from all over the world. On the other

hand, WeChat could pay for everything by the money stored in WeChat. As an advanced messaging

app that appeared in 2011, WeChat has engaged in the Chinese market and gradually evolved into

Chinese people’s lifestyles, and it is reported that WeChat created almost 850 million active users

every month (Mittal, 2018). This statement stresses that WeChat has applied the powerful network

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effects to rule other social media apps, such as WhatsApp, Messenger, Facebook, and Venmo. In

China, WeChat has created a mobile lifestyle that has a close relationship with all kinds of

perspectives of users’ life. Initially, users of WeChat could have close connections with their families

and friends. For example, most Asian American people started to use WeChat to retain connections

with their relatives who live in China (Mitta, 2018). This statement shows the frequent use of

WeChat in China, and it also will open the foreign market. Importantly, the use of WeChat in China

has opened up a platform for third-party developers. That is to say, WeChat Platform can provide

trade for users and users could pay for goods by their money stored in WeChat. Therefore, the

Chinese government should push it to the world to enlarge its value all over the world because

WeChat is more convenient than other social media platforms.

WeChat has higher safety elements than other social networking sites, and thus, the Chinese

government should push it to the world to enlarge its value all over the world. WeChat has the

feature that users could become friends only by receiving the request from each other, and users also

could share the circle of friends (Sermuksan, 2017). That is to say, WeChat is safer than any other

social media platforms. For example, the users of Weibo can see other users’ information without

allowance, and they can find anything they want from the Weibo platform. Differently, WeChat’s

users can see other users’ information and what they have published on the platform only through the

allowance. Without allowance, users cannot see anything of other users. Therefore, WeChat is safer

than other social media platforms. The development of social and economic perspectives is the

foundation of the emergence of social media growth. With the social and economic development of

China, there are many social media platforms that appeared in China, such as WeChat, Tencent OO,

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and Weibo. Especially, WeChat has accelerated growth in China recently, and it has a great influence

on Chinese people. Extraordinarily, WeChat has a unique timeline of social network, games,

branded records. As a business transaction platform, WeChat also has a safety system to protect the

private information of users. Because the use of WeChat brings users convenience in shopping and

paying for, it should be promoted all over the world by the Chinese government. Therefore, as a safe

social e-commerce system, WeChat should be increased and supported by the Chinese government

to enlarge its influence all over the world.

In conclusion, the Chinese government should increase the use of WeChat all over the

world for three reasons. The first reason is that WeChat has a higher consumption than other social

media platforms. Both the consumption in mobile traffic users and job positions created by the

WeChat contribute to the growth of China’s economies. Therefore, it is the first reason for WeChat

to be enlarged to the world. The second reason is that WeChat is more convenient than other social

media platforms, especially the function of paying for goods. WeChat has engaged in the Chinese

market and gradually evolved into Chinese people’s lifestyles. The third reason is that WeChat has

higher safety elements than other social networking sites. Initially, WeChat’s users can see other

users’ information and what they have published on the platform only through the allowance. Then,

as a business transaction platform, WeChat also has a safety system to protect the private information

of users. Therefore, the Chinese government should promote the use of WeChat all over the world to

enlarge Chinese influence as a big country and expand the enormous influence of WeChat as a

popular social media platform.

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Why is Wechat better than others?
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References

Graziani, T. (2018). WeChat Impact Report 2018: All the Latest WeChat Data. Walk the Chat.

Retrieved from https://walkthechat.com/wechat-impact-report-2016/

Hughes, C. (2019). It’s Time to Break Up Facebook. The New York Times. Retrieved from

https://www.nytimes.com/2019/05/09/opinion/sunday/chris-hughes-facebook-

zuckerberg.html?action=click&module=Opinion&pgtype=Homepage

Mittal, M. (2018). WeChat – The One App that Rules Them All. Harvard Business School.

Retrieved from https://digital.hbs.edu/innovation-

disruption/wechat%E2%80%8A-%E2%80%8Athe-one-app-rules/

Rong, M. (2016). WeChat Impact on Social and Economic in China. Business Information

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Sermsuksan, C. (2017). 7 Things You Can Learn from WeChat Product Development. Start-Up

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wechat-product-development-ef31b8d97b24.

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