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Nickflor Jean

John Isenhour

CHAMBERLAIN UNIVERSITY

8/5/18

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Annotated Bibliography for the Analysis of the Impact of Industrial Revolution and

Rise of Capitalism

Introduction

The industrial revolution is a concept that is traced back in history, and one that

led to a change in the fortune of the world. The benefits that came with the industrial

revolution are unmerged and transformative. The industrial revolution, which started in

Britain, spread to the Americas and the rest of the world. In this paper, I shall discuss five

journal articles and discuss the main concepts that they entail in regards to the topic under

discussion. The thesis of the paper is based on the impact of the industrial revolution and

the rise of Capitalism.

R.M. Hartwell, The Industrial Revolution and Economic Growth, Methuen

and Co., 1971, page 339–341 ISBN 0-416-19500-8

According to the writer of this article, an Industrial revolution led to mass

production and also facilitated the migration of factors of production such as capital and

labor to other remote areas. This resulted in the arbitrage theory which revolutionized the

concept of compensation and wages paid to the workers. The increased production helped

those who had resources to grow rich. This led to societal divisions, the rich and the poor,

also called the haves and the have-nots. Capitalism and industrial revolution led to this

societal divisions. The rich also started new industries which made them even richer. The

industrial revolution also led to inventions and innovations which the rich patented.

Money was key in the development and formation of these innovations and thus led to

media publicity and capital markets. Capitalism led to the promotion of share trading and

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share markets. The industrial revolution took a long time and led to a lot of developments

and advantages but still, its impact is felt to this day. The people or families who acquired

wealth and became rich during the industrial revolution still run him the world.

White, M. (2009). The Industrial Revolution. Retrieved From

https://www.bl.uk/georgian-britain/articles/the-industrial-revolution

According to White (2009), the Industrial Revolution changed the infrastructure

and Landscape of Britain. He describes it as the age of canals, factories and steam. Before

the emergence of an industrial revolution, most economic activities were agriculturally

based. If it's the issue of textiles, they were done in homes or small workshops where

they employed a handful of people. The introduction of an industrial revolution, in terms

of new technologies and techniques, paved the way for the expansion of production an

era of change. There was increased production of agricultural produce which was enough

for the people and even had a surplus. There was enough factory labor because most of

those who did not find work in the agricultural firms shifted to the cities in search of new

opportunities. The development of steam technology helped in empowering of machines

ad this replaced old forms of technology that had dominated the manufacturing sector.

The invention of Iron Manufacturing led to the development of better and durable metals.

There was also the development of transportation networks as the miners wanted to find a

way of transporting their minerals and agricultural products to the market. The people

who invented these machines patented them and thus making them richer. For example,

Richard Arkwright discovered the water frame, which was used for mass spinning and he

patented it.

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Ates, D. (2008). Industrial Revolution: Impetus behind the Globalization

Process. Pp 31-48, PDF

The article cites that the industrial revolution started in Britain, where they

detached from the leadership of the pope in 1534. With the support of the Protestant

churches, all the money that was being directed to the Pope was given to the King and

thus improving his financial position. There was the abolition of the chantries ad

monarchies which gave rise to the rise of the education system. Under this system,

Thomson (2008) notes that it led to individualism and a more scientific outlook. The

scientific laws of nature were likened to the laws of God which represented an

intellectual climate. There was the introduction of the laws of demand and supply which

helped in regulating the free market and also regulated the wages to the laborers. The

introduction of free entrepreneurship led to the emergence of new rich groups of people.

Trade needs peace and security, therefore, there was a need for a centralized government

coupled with law and order. The traders needed protection from foreign competition

while the government had to have finances to support the traders and run the economy. It,

therefore, led to the introduction of taxes to help finance the government.

Industrialization also promoted new industries and the owners of such industries

accumulated a lot of wealth.

Scherer, F.M. (2010). The Dynamics of Capitalism. Chapter 6, 3-42. PDF

The writer begins by explaining the economic relationships during the industrial

revolution. The advancement of technology was also key to the development of industrial

revolution and capitalism. There were various dynamic forces that came into place due to

the industrial revolution and this article focus more on such dynamics. They include the

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structural changes in the management of enterprises, changes in technology, variations in

economic activities, and increased income distribution. The writer explains that

technological advancements were key in the expansion of goods and services According

to Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels, "[The bourgeoisie] [Marx term for capitalist class]

has been the first to show what man's activity can bring about. It has accomplished

wonders far surpassing Egyptian Pyramids, Roman Aqueducts and Gothic cathedrals."

According to these two economists, capitalism has created more industries and led to the

growth and development of economies, more than any other philosophy before. There is

a candid description of how inventions and innovations took place during the industrial

revolution. Scherer observed the schematic view of the Innovation Theory, which suits

this case because there are many economic models that describe innovation and

invention.

Vries, J.D. (1994). The Industrial Revolution and the Industrious Revolution.

The Journal of Economic History, Vol. 54, No. 2 Pp 249 – 263. PDF. ISSN 0022-0507

The author introduces the concept of industrious revolution because he felt that

the industrial revolution had some shortcomings which had to be ironed out. According to

the industrious revolution view, there was the reallocation of household-based resources

which increased the goods that could be marketed. This view is not very different from

the industrial revolution as they both focus on the importance of the advancements that

came with the revolution. The author also states that the industrial revolution was so

important that it affected life's yonder. The author states that the industrial revolution

does not give a clear history. Joel Mokyr revealed or exposed the loopholes of the

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industrial revolution but still, it remains a rich source of history and a turning point in the

economic status of the universe.

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