Response
Anatomy of a
Response
Paging Dr Barlow
Steps and Structure
The Assignment
Remember to check with
the assignment for details.
Always default to the
specifications there.
The Text, Claim, and Type
If you have a choice of texts for
your response, you should decide
which to work with.
Within the text, you should also
choose the claim to think about.
You also need to choose a
response type.
Objectively
Once you know what you are writing
about, it's time to think about your
response.
Form one to two sentences that
sum up your response.
The Paper
Based on your response, plan a
paper that backs up your points.
Anatomy of a Response
Paging Dr Barlow
Know Choose Think Plan
The Assignment
Remember to check with
the assignment for details.
Always default to the
specifications there.
The Text, Claim, and Type
If you have a choice of texts for
your response, you should decide
which to work with.
Within the text, you should also
choose the claim to think about.
You also need to choose a
response type.
Objectively
Once you know what you are writing
about, it's time to think about your
response.
Form one to two sentences that
sum up your response.
The Paper
Based on your response, plan a
paper that backs up your points.
Anatomy of a Response
Paging Dr Barlow
Know Choose Think Plan
Forming a Response What is it you are trying to say about the text?
Are you affirming, critiquing, evaluating?
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Forming a Thesis
The concept of X is useful as Author
demonstrates, but it also helps explain Y. Although concept X helps us think about Y, it can also be used
to evaluate Z.
Affirming Types
Although X is true in some ways, it
doesn't take Y into account.
Author's argument assumes X to be
true. However, if X is not true, Y.
Critical Types
Anatomy Breakdown
Introduction: Identify the text you are responding to, end with thesis
Paragraph 2: A brief summary of the text/claim Body Paragraphs: Back up your claim -
what do you need to say/prove to make your point? Conclusion: Culminate your response
Address the "so what" question
Anatomy Breakdown
Introduction: Identify the text you are responding to
End with your thesis
Anatomy Breakdown
Paragraph 2: A brief summary of the text/claim
Don't include the full summary.
Focus on the parts you are dealing with.
Anatomy Breakdown
Body Paragraphs:
Back up your claim.
What do you need to say/prove to make your point?
Anatomy Breakdown Conclusion:
Culminate your response
Finalize your evaluation
Address the "so what" question
Do not repeat yourself.
Each details means
something about the person.
There is no "norm".
How someone uses language
- correctly or not, with certain
idioms, certain accents -
marks a person.
An invisible disability is one
that is not obvious to others.
Their needs (because
invisible) mark them.
Women Language Use Invisible Disability
Using an Idea as a Lens The concept of marked
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In a racially homogenous
environment, all men have the
option of being unmarked,
but if one person is black and
others are white....
How someone uses language
- correctly or not, with certain
idioms, certain accents -
marks a person regardless of
sex.
A man in a wheelchair, using
a cane, or needing any help is
judged by others.
In fact, it might even be
worse for men.
Race Language Use Disability
Exploring Limitations Men have the option of being unmarked.
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