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This report concludes my study to determine the best book bag to purchase. My friends and I going to start the spring semester with a new book bag, and I would like to be able to use the bag for other uses.

Add during Part 2 of the Recommendation Report Assignment. Format this paragraph, and all other body paragraphs using Body Text style.In the following sections, I described the study tasks I performed, the findings of the study, and my conclusions and recommendations.

I performed four tasks to determine the best book bag:

I started with the criteria suggested by TenBestReview.com (2017):

Room to carry. Having a room to carry big items gives you an advantage.

Pockets. Number of pockets to put your little stuff makes it easy to collect them.

Weights by pounds. To hold as many books you want, always determine the weight of it.

Color. Different colors gives you different choices to select what color you like.

I then searched additional sources for more criteria I might be able to use, and I compiled a final list of the criteria I used to compare options.

Describe what you did—not the results of your actions, just what you did.

I identified options, using recommendations from the Internet.

Describe what you did—not the results of your actions, just what you did.

I compared and ranked the options, using the criteria I defined during Task 1. The table below shows how I presented the results of the comparison and the scores against the criteria. I determined the best option as the option that scored the highest.

Describe what you did—not the results of your actions, just what you did.

I wrote this report to describe the purpose and approach of my study, share my results and conclusions, and present my final recommendation.

Describe what you did—not the results of your actions, just what you did.

Results from my research tasks are presented in the following.

To find additional criteria beyond those of TenBestReview.com (2017), I searched the Internet, using the key word combinations “book bag comparison,” and “choosing a book bag.” From these searches, I found several additional criteria to consider:

Backpack.com (2017) provides criterion-by-criterion comparison of two book bags, the JANSPORT (2017) and Herschel (2017). The criteria used in the Backpack.com comparison included the following:

Material. This criteria gives me the ability to choose what kind of bag material I prefer. Comment by Dennis Meier: -2 Criteria are plural, but this sentence is talking about a single item: a criterion.

Quality. Different brands has a different qualities to make the bag. Comment by Dennis Meier: -2 Subject-verb disagreement. Brands are plural, but has is the singular verb.

Travel Compatibility. This shows whether the bag has the ability to get used in different places or not Comment by Dennis Meier: demo9nx

Volume. Deciding how big the volume of the bag is a thing that we should look for to know what bag is the best to fit us.

Weight. The weight of my books, maybe laptop too, will make me to consider the weight of the bag.

In this criteria shown in Table 1. The weights show the relative importance of each criterion. The tTie-breaker was shown as the price, options should have the same score of the price. Comment by Dennis Meier: -2 These. Criteria are plural. Comment by Dennis Meier: -2 missing article Comment by Dennis Meier: -2 A comma cannot be used to join two sentences unless a coordinating conjunction follows the comma.

My search for criteria revealed the options presented in Table 2.

Table 3 compares and scores options against the criteria:

For Part 2 of the assignment, present your conclusions.

For Part 2 of the assignment, present your recommendations.