Risk management
Al Muayad Al Busaidi ST09824 by muayad busaidi
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Samiha owns SWEET BIG BITES Cakes and Pastry Shop in Al Ghobra. She has approached your bank for the following financial assistance 1. Term Loan to replace the equipment and furnishing of her shop 2. Increase in the working capital limit she currently has. You are part of the team responsible for assessing Samiha’s request. Required a. Explain the procedure involved in determining whether it is possible to approve the request. b. Give a list of documents you will require from Samiha to assess the proposal. The word limit for this answer including intext references is 600 words. (Maximum Marks: 5)
I require the decision making process while lending to Samiha' s Bakery
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GENERAL COMMENTS
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Learning Outcome 2: demonstrate knowledge and understanding of how financial institutions manage credit risk and liquidity risk
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Task 2 10 6
Task 3 5 3
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Text Comment. Samiha owns SWEET BIG BITES Cakes and Pastry Shop in Al Ghobra. She has approached your bank for the following financial assistance 1. Term Loan to replace the equipment and furnishing of her shop 2. Increase in the working capital limit she currently has. You are part of the team responsible for assessing Samiha’s request. Required a. Explain the procedure involved in determining whether it is possible to approve the request. b. Give a list of documents you will require from Samiha to assess the proposal. The word limit for this answer including intext references is 600 words. (Maximum Marks: 5)
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RUBRIC: UG ASSIGNMENT RUBRIC
CRITERION 1
90-100 A (0)
85-89 A- (0)
74-84 B (0)
56-73 C (0)
50-55 D (0)
0-49 F (0)
CRITERION 2
90-100 A (0)
85-89 A- (0)
74-84 B (0)
56-73 C (0)
50-55 D (0)
0-49 F (0)
CRITERION 3
90-100 A (0)
85-89 A- (0)
0 / 0
0 / 0
Knowledge
Shows well-coordinated understanding of subject
Sound understanding of subject matter
Major facts are understood
Shows understanding of basic issues/theory
Minimal understanding of basic issues/topic
No understanding of the topic/subject area
0 / 0
Analysis
Touches upon all relevant issues/theory. Concise analysis
Detailed coverage of basic concepts/theory. Reasonable coverage of subtle issues/theory
Reasoned argument and sequencing
Shows evidence of understanding of concepts. Coverage of obvious ideas.
Fails to identify subtle issues/theory. Captures obvious ideas.
No or minimal understanding of the key theories/topic
0 / 0
Research
Excellent referencing and reading in all areas
Use of up to date resources. Well informed and generally accurate information provided. Clear referencing
74-84 B (0)
56-73 C (0)
50-55 D (0)
0-49 F (0)
CRITERION 4
90-100 A (0)
85-89 A- (0)
74-84 B (0)
56-73 C (0)
50-55 D (0)
0-49 F (0)
CRITERION 5
90-100 A (0)
85-89 A- (0)
74-84 B (0)
56-73 C (0)
50-55 D (0)
0-49 F (0)
Appropriate referencing
Adequate referencing and reading.
Weak reading and referencing
Poor referencing. Shows lack of reading/references out of date
0 / 0
Relevance
All material used is of relevance
Material used is relevant
Discussion shows relationship to theory
Some material repetitive
Some repetitive matter. Irrelevant
Poor conclusion. Poor knowledge application.
0 / 0
Conclusion
Excellent conclusion. Brings together all concepts and adds an original perspective
Intelligent conclusion. Good application of knowledge
Methods incorporate modifications used
Conclusion in place but key points missing. Reasonable application of knowledge
Weak conclusion and content. Satisfactory application of ideas/theory
Poor conclusion. Poor knowledge application.
CRITERION 6
90-100 A (0)
85-89 A- (0)
74-84 B (0)
56-73 C (0)
50-55 D (0)
0-49 F (0)
CRITERION 7
90-100 A (0)
85-89 A- (0)
74-84 B (0)
56-73 C (0)
50-55 D (0)
0-49 F (0)
0 / 0
Writing
Excellent articulation. Accurate grammar/spelling
Ideas expressed in a clear and coherent manner. Language fluent and grammar/spelling accurate
Clarity in writing is evidenced
Language fluent. No major grammatical/spelling errors
Frequent errors in writing
Poor written skills-spelling, grammar construction of sentences
0 / 0
Structure
Clear and coherent Structure with excellent presentation
Structure is clear and supports argument. Presentation appropriate
Appropriate structure
Coherent structure. Satisfactory presentation of matter
Weak structure/presentation
Poor structure/presentation
- Al Muayad Al Busaidi ST09824
- by muayad busaidi
- Al Muayad Al Busaidi ST09824
- ORIGINALITY REPORT
- PRIMARY SOURCES
- Al Muayad Al Busaidi ST09824
- GRADEMARK REPORT
- FINAL GRADE
- GENERAL COMMENTS
- Instructor
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