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Natalie De La Rosa

Crisol Escobedo

Ethics

April 26, 2020

Abortion

Abortion is to intentional expulsion of either a fetus or an embryo from the uterus before full development that may enable it to survive outside the womb. Abortion leads to the end of a pregnancy. The issue of the legality of abortion in the United States has been an issue not only in the United States but also in the whole world. Abortion has been an issue of morality, rights of a woman over her body as well as rights of the fetus. Roe V. Wade was a ruling by the Supreme Court of the United States. This ruling was to give liberty to any woman who wished to have an abortion without immoderate restriction by the US government. According to Messerli, some people perceive abortion as reprehensible murder, while others think that the restriction of abortion is violating the rights of a woman over her own body. Comment by Crisol Escobedo: Needs work. Identify the different positions on abortion and their justifications. Also, give in-text citation.

The argument is as follows, “Abortions should be banned. It’s a horrible thing to do! Abortions are extremely dangerous due to millions of women dying every year from getting them. Plus, poor innocent babies are killed under horrific circumstances when a woman aborts . Any act that results in the death of people is wrong. Don’t support abortion.” After diagramming the argument, it can be re-stated as follows: Comment by Crisol Escobedo: Diagramming needs work. You don’t correctly identify the conclusion and you cross out sections of sentences that should not be crossed out. Here, take each sentence to be a complete piece of information. Don’t just underline or cross out part of it. Also, put the argument in standard form. See sample essay for example. Comment by Crisol Escobedo: Put the argument in standard form here.

; Abortions should be banned because they are dangerous. Abortions are unsafe because they lead to the death of women and babies.

In conclusion, abortion should not be supported because it is an act of murder, and murder is wrong. The argument is deductive. The premises given aim at strongly supporting the conclusion. The argument is moral owing to the fact that it tries to establish that abortion is wrong. Comment by Crisol Escobedo: Rethink this. The reason you gave does not make the argument deductive. Go to slide 26 in chapter 3 lecture notes for tips on how to tell if it is inductive or deductive. Comment by Crisol Escobedo: This doesn’t make it moral. There are three conditions to be met. Go to the chapter 3 lecture notes for this. Identify if each statement is moral or nonmoral and then see if the three conditions are met.

In summary, the argument tries to convince a person that abortion is wrong because it leads to the death of women and children. This leads to murder, and murder is wrong. Comment by Crisol Escobedo: I deleted a section because it was repetitive and also because this is not a valid argument. Instead, check to see if it is a fallacy.

The argument is trying to state that deaths are occurring worldwide, sometimes of children only and sometimes of both the mother and the child worldwide. Therefore, due to the deaths caused by abortion, abortion should be illegal. The argument is valid. According to statistics from the World Health Organization, the number of death of women due to abortion has decreased. However, deaths are still occurring because of the unsafe abortions occurring worldwide, most notably in developing countries. According to the statistics made by the World Health Organization, unsafe abortions are among the leading causes of deaths, during the abortion, or even after the abortion when the mother is giving birth to another child. Comment by Crisol Escobedo: This section needs to be restructured. Here, you check each statement individually. Analyze it’s meaning, then do research to determine if it is true or false. Remember that the goal is to prove that each statement is false. Don’t forget to give in-text citations.

I am therefore convinced by the argument that abortion has led to the deaths of children and women, and thus it should be banned because it leads to the death of people. Comment by Crisol Escobedo: This will need to change once you properly analyze the argument.

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Messerli, Joe. "Should abortion be banned (except in special circumstances like saving the

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"Preventing unsafe abortion". www.who.int. Retrieved 27 April 2020.

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