Screen Time and Adolescents

COVER SHEET

GENERAL INTRO – add citations, and expand on points and tips in bold red text. Introduces topic in a logical sequence; states main topic and previews the structure clearly and concisely; the importance and relevance of the area is presented; all major variables are defined clearly and thoroughly.

INTRO RELATED UNDERLYING THEORY/LITERATURE REVIEW – needs to be written from scratch

The literature related to the topic is thoroughly and critically reviewed including theory or theories mentioned in the core article and any theory relied on throughout the Investigative Study. Empirical research is reviewed critically, not simply described.

BODY of 5 QUESTIONS:

1 - OBSERVATIONS – this part just needs editing, and graphs inserted as per APA referencing style.

Data gathered through observations are thorough and presented in APA format where relevant (i.e., Tables and/or Figures). Observations/data are related to the reader in formal theoretical terms demonstrating an excellent understanding of what was observed and the academic area under investigation. Based on your interviews, provide an account of screen use by children as described by your participants. Where applicable relate to theory and literature. (Observations)

2 – CURRENT STUDY & EXISTING LITERATURE – needs to be written from scratch

Study observations are related to theoretical perspectives reviewed in the introduction. Observations are compared and contrasted to those found in the core articles and other reviewed literature. Where the current observations contribute to the research area in general is articulated. Outline the similarities and differences in the responses of your participants and relate your answers to the core article Ramirez, et al. (2011). (Data and data analysis; your comprehension about the collected information in comparison to the core article; relating your data to existing literature).

3 – DEVELOPMENTAL IMPLICATIONS – some writing provided, most likely needs editing or rearrangement if better suited to the previous topic (2 – current study and existing literature) Trends observed in the current study are clearly and cogently related to developmental implications as per Question 3 of the Investigative Study. There is a superior understanding of developmental progression in the relevant area demonstrated by the ability to synthesise previous theory and research with the current observations. Implications for/ impact upon development are thoughtful and relevant.

Compare and contrast screen device usage by 8-12 and 12-16 year olds. Where applicable relate to theory, research and journal articles. (Developmental Implications/Discussion)

4 – CONCLUSION – needs to be written from scratch A logical and original conclusion that summarises the main finding(s) of the study and specific real world applications of this type of research

What do you conclude from your study?

5 – REFLECTION QUESTIONS – a and b have been answered. Please answer c and d All reflection questions answered showing introspection and thinking beyond generalities. Originality and thoughtfulness evident.

Reflect on the following questions at the end of your investigative study.

0. What are you trying to accomplish?

0. Did you succeed? Why? Why not?

0. What is the strongest aspect of this work? Why?

0. What aspect is most in need of reworking? Why?

REFERENCES – edit/remove any unused articles.

APPENDICES – I will attach these once I have the rest of the paper written.

(consent forms x 4, interview forms/data collection tables x 4, hand written field notes, any other interaction notes or hand written answers)

EXTRA MARKING CRITERIA: STYLE/REFERENCING Generally very competent construction and smoothly linked paragraphs; appropriate, clear, and with effective transitions; paragraphs organised in distinct units of thought and arranged logically; Demonstrates an ability to structure sentences effectively; chooses words aptly; observes professional conventions of written English and manuscript format.

In-text citations and Reference list of professional standard and consistent with APA style. Reference list complete and accurate; all references are cited.