The Affordable Care Act (HCA320 nursing)

A.M HCA320 ACA module 2.docx

by Anchinalu Mehari

Submission date: 20-Jan-2020 08:27PM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1244222229 File name: A.M_HCA320_ACA_module_2.docx (25.62K) Word count: 1563 Character count: 8712

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5% SIMILARITY INDEX

1% INTERNET SOURCES

1% PUBLICATIONS

5% STUDENT PAPERS

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A.M HCA320 ACA module 2.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to Wilmington University Student Paper

www.aafp.org Internet Source

Submitted to Aspen University Student Paper

FINAL GRADE

/100

A.M HCA320 ACA module 2.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Comment 1

Anchinalu, this is not the right title page. Please do not submit your future papers unless you submit with the right title page. I will not grade your paper int the future. The format is required by Aspen. You have to learn how to adjust your page when you use PERRLA

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Author Note goes here

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Take this out

Strikethrough.

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Fix this spacing problem

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Fix this spacing problem

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This should be capitalized

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Do not start a sentence with an acroymn

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If you say studies, you have to cite more than one study.

Purpose Sentence Required

This is a good introduction, however you did not introduce the topics you will discuss. In future papers please remember to state the purpose of your paper. Usually the purpose sentence is the last sentence in the introduction paragraph, i.e. The purpose of this paper is to discuss advocating for patients, articulate safe practices in nursing, outline how nurses can advocate for healthcare consumers, and discuss how roles change as policies change.

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Fix this spacing problem please

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You only need to say Affordable Care Act and it is a proper noun so you have to Capitalize the first letter in each word of the title

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You left off the period

New Paragraph

Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing previously.

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aware

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from the hospital

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I wouldn't say this is a responsibility of the doctor.

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to

Sentence Structure Error

This sentence needs to be re-written.

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Perhaps social services should contact the patient. That's what transition care nurses do

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Remember not to start sentences with the acronym

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who are out of school

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26 years

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do not have to wait

Comment 24

Anchinalu, you have to remember to include the Conclusion section in your paper. Please set up your paper correctly.

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Comment 25

Please format this page correctly. This should be double-spaced

Comment 26

None of your references are cited properly and you need the weblinks you retrieved these sources from. I recommend that you take advantage of the Aspen Writing Center and the webinar videos

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You need the weblink you retrieved this source from

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You did not include your text book as one of the references