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You need to have citations for the information in your Appendix too. You should put your References after the Appendix.

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14% SIMILARITY INDEX

10% INTERNET SOURCES

8% PUBLICATIONS

10% STUDENT PAPERS

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717 Analysis Draft ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

researcharchive.vuw.ac.nz Internet Source

Submitted to Massey University Student Paper

Timothy M. Vowles, Sean Tierney. "The geographic impact of ‘open skies’ policies on Trans-Tasman air passenger service", Asia Pacific Viewpoint, 2007 Publication

Submitted to University of Auckland Student Paper

Submitted to University of Iowa Student Paper

Submitted to Iona College Student Paper

Kun Wang, Wai Hong Kan Tsui, Lan-Bing Li, Zheng Lei, Xiaowen Fu. "Entry pattern of low- cost carriers in New Zealand - The impact of domestic and trans-Tasman market factors", Transport Policy, 2020

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Publication

Submitted to Macquarie University Student Paper

Tim Hazledine. "Competition and Competition Policy in the Trans-Tasman Air Travel Market", Australian Economic Review, 2008 Publication

myassignmenthelp.com Internet Source

David Haugh, Tim Hazledine. "Oligopoly behaviour in the Trans Tasman air travel market: The case of kiwi international", New Zealand Economic Papers, 1999 Publication

Tim Hazledine. "Application of the public benefit test to the air New Zealand/Qantas case", New Zealand Economic Papers, 2004 Publication

FINAL GRADE

5/0 717 Analysis Draft GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Comment 1

citation?

Comment 2

I am not really sure how relevant this sentence is?

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Comment 3

put headings in Bold

Text Comment. Is this part of the Industry Structure or Competition Analysis? Maybe it should be a sub-section to one of those parts?

Comment 4

citation?

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Comment 5

great 

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article a.

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Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

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Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

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Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread the sentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause with a complete subject and predicate.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

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Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

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Comment 6

I suggest putting your References after the appendix so that you also have citations in your Appendix.

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Text Comment. You need to have citations for the information in your Appendix too. You should put your References after the Appendix.

Confused You have used either an imprecise word or an incorrect word.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains an error or misspelling that makes your meaning unclear.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

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Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

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Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Possessive

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Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.