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Ch. 11 Discussion Board

How do we teach children about managing their emotions through our actions? What social cues do you think they pick up from parents, guardians, peers, etc? How do these actions impact how they process and handle their emotions?

Week 10 compare contrast essay rd

Instructions:  You must submit your rough draft  for the Compare-Contrast  TEAL outline on Canvas by the due date. Late submissions will not be accepted.  Your comparison or contrast essay must be at least 500 words long, typed, double-spaced, 12-point font, Times New Roman font, and in MLA format. Remember to submit your outline as a Word document or a Google doc. If you submit it a different format, I will not be able to grade your work and you will not receive credit for the assignment.  

 

Here is the assignment for your next paper: 

  Your thesis must have 2 points only ( one comparing and one contrasting ) 

 

 

  Even though this essay will not use a story from book you will have two sources to use. You are going to compare the speech from earlier in the semester from Mr. Rodgers to a letter written by  Dr. King:

Fred Rogers - Testimony to Congress on PBS Funding-2.pdf  Download Fred Rogers - Testimony to Congress on PBS Funding-2.pdf

Letter_Birmingham_Jail.pdf  Download Letter_Birmingham_Jail.pdf

Both men used logos, ethos, and pathos to prove their points. 

You will not use outside sources for this assignment.

Topic 

Pick one from logos, ethos and pathos and explore one way they use it the same and one way they approach it differently. 

notes:

Logos, Ethos, and Pathos

Any work that does not meet the word count requirement is submitted late or is about a story or poem that was no assigned will receive a zero 500 words minimum

A paper that does not have the required number of no quotations/citations will receive a minimum grade of 70%(this is where I start grading).

A paper that has quotes that are not introduced, or uses 1ST or 2nd person , or have repeated past tense verbs minimum grade of 80% (this is where I start grading) General Guidelines: The papers should be typed in Times New Roman font.

Each intro and concluding paragraph should be at least five sentences. The body paragraphs should be at least six sentences in length.

Only use third person and make sure that all of your verbs are in present tense.

Each direct quote within your body paragraphs( there should be no quotes in your intro and concluding paragraphs) should be introduced.  Two quotes per body paragraph Drafts (both rough and final draft)s that are submitted below the word count limit, containing no internal citations, or without direct quotes from ALL secondary sources will not receive a passing grade!!

Academic Integrity Policy: Any student who plagiarizes any part of his or her work will, at a minimum, automatically receive a 0 for the assignment. Students should be aware of the Student Academic Integrity policy described in the Student Handbook and that if the policy is violated, they will be subjected to disciplinary sanctions listed in the Handbook. Plagiarism includes "copying-and-pasting" un-cited excerpts and working collaboratively with other students. Students are expected to work independently, to generate and express their own ideas about the literature, and to cite those ideas that they have borrowed from others or are using as supportive evidence.

 

 

Rubric

Compare Contrast Essay (2)

Compare Contrast Essay (2)

Criteria

Ratings

Pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeOrganization and Structure

20 pts

The paper breaks the information into side-by-side or point-by-point structure. It follows a consistent order when discussing the comparison.efined

15 pts

The paper breaks the information into side-by-side or point-by-point structure, but does not follow a consistent order when discussing the comparison.

10 pts

The paper breaks the information into side-by-side or point-by-point structure, but some information is in the wrong section. Some details are not in a logical or expected order, and this distracts the reader.

5 pts

Many details are not in a logical or expected order. There is little sense that the writing is organized.

0 pts

No Marks

20 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeFocus or Thesis Statement

15 pts

The thesis statement names the topic of the essay and outlines the main points to be discussed. Thesis is placed at the end of the first paragraph,

11 pts

The thesis statement names the topic of the essay but does not outline the main points of paper. Or the thesis is misplaced.

6 pts

The thesis statement outlines some or all of the main points to be discussed but does not name the topic or position.

1 pts

The thesis statement does not name the topic AND does not preview what will be discussed.

0 pts

No Marks

15 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeSupport for Position

20 pts

Includes 3 or more pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement. The writer anticipates the reader\'s concerns, biases or arguments.

13 pts

Includes 3 or more pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement.

8 pts

Includes 2 pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement.

7 pts

Includes 1 or fewer pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences).

0 pts

No Marks

20 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeGrammar & Spelling

10 pts

Author makes no errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

8 pts

Author makes 1-2 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

6 pts

Author makes 3-4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

3 pts

Author makes more than 4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

0 pts

No Marks

10 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeTransitions

10 pts

A variety of thoughtful transitions are used. They clearly show how ideas are connected

8 pts

Transitions show how ideas are connected, but there is little variety

5 pts

Some transitions work well, but some connections between ideas are fuzzy.

3 pts

The transitions between ideas are unclear OR nonexistent.

0 pts

No Marks

10 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeMLA Structure

10 pts

No errors in MLA format

6 pts

1-2 errors in MLA format

4 pts

3-4 errors in MLA format

1 pts

No attempt to follow MLA guidelines

10 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeAudience

15 pts

Demonstrates a clear understanding of the potential reader and uses appropriate vocabulary and arguments. Anticipates reader's questions and provides thorough answers appropriate for that audience. Follows all of "Mr. Brown's Writing Guidelines" and does not announce topic or use 2nd person point-of-view.

9 pts

Demonstrates a general understanding of the potential reader and uses vocabulary and arguments appropriate for that audience. Follows most of "Mr. Brown's Writing Guidelines."

6 pts

Demonstrates some understanding of the potential reader and uses arguments appropriate for that audience. Needs to review "Mr. Brown's Writing Guidelines."

1 pts

It is not clear who the author is writing for. Not an an acceptable college-level essay.

15 pts

Total Points: 100

Chapter 6 Discussion Topic

Watch the video below and answer the following questions:

1) What is lightning?

2) Since most people who are electrocuted don't blow up, what kills them? 

   Should a Person Touch 200,000 Volts? A Van de Graaff generator experiment!Links to an external site. Should a Person Touch 200,000 Volts? A Van de Graaff generator experiment!

  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ubZuSZYVBng

Frequency and Timeliness: Students should post on three different days each week(day one initial post, day two response to a classmate, day three response to different classmate)  with the initial post being within 48 hours of module opening.

 

High-Quality posts include substantial posts containing well-developed original thoughts, added insight to the topic, outside sources, and follow-up questions. These posts are error-free and grammatically correct. In addition, these posts are a minimum of 150 words. The posts should demonstrate higher order thinking and critical thinking skills.

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