Career Research Essay

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Zilin Lei

English 1A

Leyton

April 20, 2020

Career Research Body Paragraph

The construction industry is a fast-developing industry in recent years. The development

of the construction industry has effectively promoted the improvement of people's quality of life.

At the same time, all aspects of construction have also been greatly improved, which has a

positive impact on the development of the city. Architecture is closely related to people's lives.

In architecture, the most direct impact on people's lives is architectural design. If there are

problems in architectural design, people's lives and life safety will be affected. Therefore, we

must pay attention to architectural design, consider the design of buildings from people's needs

for life, and clearly understand the aspects that architectural design can have on human life, to

effectively improve people's quality and level of life.

The building itself is an engineering substance. Decorate your own building structure

through design means, make the building present a unique appearance, make people's body

pleasant to the eyes, ensure people's sensory experience, and meet the needs of various people. In

other industrial design, architectural design is obviously different in concept and principle. In the

process of architectural design, the principles followed are the principles of safety, economy,

practicality and beauty. The products produced need to be able to maintain a certain degree of

adaptability to human life and reflect the progress and development of society to a certain extent.

In addition, construction is also a product with market value. According to the article,

Alexandria Leyton
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Is this where the body paragraph starts? I am not sure what you are arguing here and how this is an argument for pursuing a career as an architect.
Alexandria Leyton
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I am confused. You should start with your third body paragraph but this doesn't look like a body paragraph.
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Once you write a clear topic sentence, you should have only 1-2 transitional sentences here.

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“Architectural design education: in varietate unitas”, “Hector Guimard used the shapes of

flowers in his designs for entrances to the metro stations in Paris. Eero Saarinen shaped the

terminal for JFK International airport New York like a bird ready to fly away. "Through design,

economical architectural design has always been the focus of most architectural designers.

Architectural design is closely related to people's lives. With the continuous development of

society and the improvement of people's living standards, it is necessary to update the

architectural design to meet people's needs, to achieve a certain new development in architectural

design. With new developments in architectural design, people's quality of life has been

improved to meet people's needs for comfort in life. relationship. Many building products have

multiple single designs, but their functions are complex. The appearance of the building is

reduced. Despite their alternative practicality, they cannot satisfy people's sensory needs.

Therefore, their economic value is relative. It is necessary to pay attention to the design of

buildings, to adapt the buildings to people's lives, to satisfy people's pursuit of beauty, to realize

the economic value of buildings and improve people's quality of life.

The architectural design is full of artistry, giving people a visual enjoyment. People's

requirements for aesthetics are gradually improving, and in terms of vision, people generally

have a sense of rapid elimination, have a strong acceptance of new things, and instantly forget

the things they admire in the early stage. When people observe a thing for a long time, they will

make the vision fatigue. Therefore, people are not willing to watch the same thing for a long

time, but constantly change things to appreciate. In the article, “The 15 Most Famous Buildings

in the World”, “Leaving a mark into the world long after their builders are gone, buildings that

have stood the passing of the centuries keep on fascinating our minds.” It is like many Ancient

buildings have a strong classical flavor. When people gradually become visually tired of the

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Because the topic sentence is not clear, I am not sure what point you are proving here. You seem to be taking about a lot of different topics.
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I think I see a point here, that architecture gives people visual enjoyment.
Alexandria Leyton
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But I get lost here; it almost seems like you are contradicting yourself. You want to have 1-2 transitional sentences that develop your topic sentence.

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luxury of modern buildings, people will be more willing to appreciate buildings with a classic

flavor. It can be seen from this that architectural design must be able to have different

appreciation values, so that people will not produce visual fatigue, and the current cultural and

artistic characteristics must be fully integrated in the building, so that people can always

appreciate the building will have different feelings. The full integration of artistic features in

architectural design will further deepen people's visual enjoyment and significantly improve

people's quality and level of life. The realization of intelligent building design greatly facilitates

human life. The application and popularization of various high-tech products in the real life of

human society has promoted people's lives to be more convenient, safer and more energy-saving.

According to the article, “What is a Smart Building?”, “Smart buildings go far beyond saving

energy and contributing to sustainability goals. They extend capital equipment life and impact

the security and safety of all resources – both human and capital. They enable innovation by

creating a platform for accessible information. "Traditional building products ignore the

intelligent and innovative design concept, which results in a single function of building products

that cannot meet the development needs of people's lives. Therefore, architectural designers

should fully realize the intelligent and innovative design concepts, so that building products can

save energy, reduce consumption, and be safe and comfortable. It can fully combine various

modern building technologies such as solar energy, energy saving, ecology, etc., to realize the

mutual integration of intelligent and ecological buildings. For example, some intelligent building

materials have automatic breathing function, which can absorb and release water vapor and heat,

automatically adjust indoor humidity and temperature, and play a role in energy saving.

Intelligent buildings have many functions, can meet people's life needs to the greatest extent, and

can adapt to the development of human life. The architectural design realizes greening and

Alexandria Leyton
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This is about functionality, not visual enjoyment so now I am more lost.
Alexandria Leyton
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Again, I get lost. The quote is about buildings that no longer exist so I am having a hard time connecting it to your topic sentence. Then I get more lost because you keep talking about being visually tired and different kinds of architecture and I get confused.

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allows humans to live a healthy life. According to the article, “SUSTAINABLE BUILDING

MATERIALS: EVERYTHING YOU NEED TO KNOW” “Sustainable and green building is the

future of construction. Not only does it help to protect our environment, building greenly can

actually reduce the cost of building operation over time. "At present, construction pollution has

become an important research issue of globalization, and it has posed a serious threat to people's

healthy lives. Therefore, the development of architectural design must achieve green innovation,

using new green environmental protection materials and green design concepts, so that people

can live comfortably, safely, and healthily in houses. The greening of buildings is also an

inevitable trend of social development. It allows people to live in a healthy and comfortable

social environment and improves people’s quality of life.

In summary, there is a close relationship between architectural design and human life.

Construction design will not only affect the way of human life, but also make people’s living

conditions improve to a certain extent, making people’s lives more dynamic and more dynamic.

It can also improve the quality of people’s lives. It can be concluded that in the process of

designing buildings, human elements must be fully considered to make people’s lives more

comfortable, and appropriate architectural design should be adopted reasonably. Improve

people's living standards as much as possible, thereby maximizing the value of buildings and

improving people's living comfort.

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Review the requirements for the conclusion on the essay assignment and make sure to fulfill all of them.
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Remember that you only need two quotes per paragraph and every paragraph needs to focus on one idea/topic.

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Works Cited

Van Dooren, E. J. G. C.1 E.J.G.C, Van Merriënboer, Boshuizen, Van Dorst, Asselbergs,

“Architectural design education: in varietate unitas.” CCSF Library, Jun 2018, web-b-

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“The 15 Most Famous Buildings in the World” LUXATIC, luxatic.com/the-15-most-famous-

buildings-in-the-world/.

“What is a Smart Building?” BUILDING EFFECIENCY INITIATIVE,April 5, 2011,

buildingefficiencyinitiative.org/articles/what-smart-building

“SUSTAINABLE BUILDING MATERIALS: EVERYTHING YOU NEED TO KNOW” DOZR

Hub, December 17, 2019, dozr.com/blog/sustainable-building-materials/